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The mystery below…..the Halloween Challenge
“The ‘soup’ chef,” Shane smiled smugly at Dana and winked holding up her fresh drink and then downed the shot with a smile. “I had a can of Campbell’s soup if Dana needed a hint.”
“I never did get an answer on why ya’ll are dressed like each other?”
“It was part of the invitation,” Alice said as she leaned back in her chair. “A party within a party for us; a costume party that would show us how the others truly sees us.”
“Girl,” Kit sat down and leaned back in the chair, folding her arms over her chest. “I didn’t dress up as one of you; I’m Foxy Brown!”
“Who?”
“Foxy Brown?” Kit smiled with pride. “Don’t I look just like her?”
Kit’s jaw dropped in amazement as her circle of friends seemed divided between not knowing Foxy Brown and thinking that she looked nothing like her.
“Has anyone ever seen the damn movie?”
“I have,” Tina offered sympathetically. “It was one of the ground breaking films we had to review in film school in North Carolina.”
“Why was it ground-breaking?”
“A historic film showcasing a strong, African-American female character,” Tina answered.
“Historic?” Kit’s voice was at an alarming octave. “I saw that freakin’ movie on opening night. I’m beginning to hate ya’ll and think I should have stayed home with Bette!”
Kit rose from the table to handle part of the counter and ensure that business was continuing nicely despite Alice’s stupid costume idea. The empty seat didn’t stay empty for long, a tall, thin figure immediately sat down without an invitation silently staring at Tina and Helena.
The figure was dressed in a perfectly mysterious costume. The black pants were simple in nature, as were the boots, which were low and black leather. The white shirt clinging to the figure’s form had a high collar, covered by a paisley vest and a wide, black tie. The figure had a hooded cape, and made use of the hood as it sheltered the figure’s head completely. White gloves covered the figure’s hands. The only part of the figure’s face anyone could see was the white mask, clearly identifying the costume as The Phantom of the Opera.
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glad to see you back with a story Gumby. I’m a big fan. and that was definitely a treat :) happy halloween!
Loving this Halloween outpouring!! Bring on Thanksgiving! Thanks for this Gumby, so great to get to see something new from you.
Wonderful as always Gumby. So glad you participated, it’s always a treat to see your stories. Have a great Halloween!
I am happy to see any story posted by you. It has been so long and I truly loved reading you stories so so long ago, just kidding, but in all truth you are so missed on this site. Oh yeah to the point of the current story this was brillant I loved how Kit was upset that no one knew Foxy Brown. And the girls thinking that Tina was stepping out on Bette was to hilarious, especially Alice, and he commment that T was cheating on her too. I had a strong supsicion that it was Bette when she kissed Tina’s hand as well, and then it was confirmed when she asked her to dance. So cleverly written though. But just one question since everyone was at the party, who was watching our sweet little angel Angie?
A Gumby story! That’s enough of a Halloween treat for me. (Sorry – kinda hard to avoid the “treat” theme going on here.)
Thanks for the treat. Loved it.
Great to have you back, Gumby. I suspected it was Bette when she was “staring” at Tina and helena, only Bette would do that, since she is still uncomfortable with helena’s presence anywhere near Tina. Aalso when she kissed her hand and definitely when she asked her to dance to her favorite song. Great story. Thanks.
As only Gumby can..^ ^ rotfl!!!”What the fuck!” Tina and Bette couldn’t help but smile hearing Alice all the way from their table over the slow beat of the music. “She’s married to Porter!” Alice looked down at her outfit and then became even more incensed. “Damn it I’m Porter tonight! She’s even cheating on me!” Glad to read again one of your story. thanks a lot!
A treat from Gumby!!! Thanks so much for sharing:)
It’s good to see you back, Gumby! This is a fun story – Thanks!
Great to see a story Gumby!! Enjoyed it!
Wow your humor is the best. It’s great to get a post from you. Always a treat, thank you so much. Hope you post again soon but we understand with your busy schedule and all.
What a treat! So good to see your name again on these pages.
so glad to have you back!! this is a sensual and interesting Halloween story! LOVE it!
Perfect comic timing. Thanks Gumby!
Amazing story.Thank you.
Love your great writing and wonderful sense of humor. Pretty please…….write again.
wonderful as usual..loved the story
That was just simply wonderful. Thank you.
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGG love it cracked me up and pms u owe me candy ha