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The Long and Winding Road chp 29
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“I couldn’t come back – not after that. I needed to get away and find myself. I would have been full of good intentions and they would have slipped by the wayside if you had taken me back. Even if you had kept me at arms length for six months — I don’t think that would have been long enough for me to learn my lesson and change as a person “
“You have changed – I don’t know if it’s the baby “
“It isn’t just junior – I would never have gone through with the insemination process if I had thought that I was the same Bette Porter. I am determined not to be the parent that both my parents were. He deserves the best and that means a mother that loves him and puts him first. “
“I know you have changed “
“Would you have taken me back if I hadn’t changed ? “
“Well I would love you regardless Bette – you are too important to who I am. We have to forgive each other for what happened when we broke up. “
“Does that include the infidelity ? “
“All of it Bette – how we drifted apart and how I ignored the pain I knew that you were in – my father used to say that I was selfish – that is one trait that I don’t think I have managed to shake off “
“You aren’t selfish “
“Well self interested then. I knew at some level that you were in pain after the miscarriage but I just shut you out. The time when we should have been there for each other – I was so wrapped in my own pain that I ignored yours – you were concentrating on me as well. That makes me selfish Bette – not to hold out to my wife. Somehow I thought that my pain was more than yours – that I had the biggest right to the grief because it was my body. I should have known that you would take it as proof of your inadequacies that you couldn’t stop it happening “
“If I could have taken all the pain from you and suffer for you I would have– I still would “
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i just got all caught up great story!!!!!!!
It was nice to see Bette let out all of her inner pain that lead to her leaving the country. The pain that both of them felt was finally revealing itself to each other. That overwhelming pain was at last being set free from both of them. Even in your time of pain you bring us joy. Thank you for this chapter.
This is beautiful and amazing!!!!
i’m glad they are talking as well and planning things, can’t wait for the first baby being born
great! so lovely chapter, this memories make understand better the Bette’s Fears.
Hey Ally – thanks for posting two (maybe three) stories today! Your writing is very pure with sweet love and it gives us hope!
Ally, That was a perfect piece of love and understanding between Bette and Tina. The way is which they both trusted on another and opened up emotionally as well as physically was mind blowing. The care and attention that they both lavished on the other was magical and a testament to how far they have come and of how toghther they are now. A fairytale romance with a sizzingly ending. More please, real soon. Thank you for this treasure to mull over again and enjoy. Your Loyal Fan.
Ah thank you Ally – a nice coffee break read – just what i needed!(i’m doing job applications!) Hope all is good with you now.
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh that was lovely, I can breathe now, you do write so well, take care…until next time…
Well done. That was a journey to the past that that hit all the points. Thanks Ally well done.
What a wonderfull story again. You are a briljant writter and have honest heart for Bette and Tina. I love it all. Pleace post more!!!!
It’s good that they’re still communicating and not sweeping things under the rug.
Ally, this chapter is something else. It evoked so many different emotions in me that for once I can’t find the right words to discribe how this chapter made me feel. So let me just say this—what a great chapter.
Thank you, Ally. Now are we going to have to revisit that whole Clinton/if it’s not penile penetration it’s not sex debate? How in Alice’s estimation did 69 cease being sex and get relegated to making out? Oh well, the woman has many curious ideas, like lusting after the male ‘lesbian’. Like entering other peoples’ homes uninvited. Really nice to see you post again.
i am usually a silent reader, but i just had to thank you for what a certain part of your chapter has done for me. let me just put it this way–one of your descriptions of Tina making love to Bette has reached certain parts that other chapters cannot.
Wow this was good, they are talking and getting things out. Will they REALLY move to England?
That conversation was long overdue and much needed especially now that they are begining anew. Thanks for posting!
Great chapter AllyE, hope you are feeling BETTEr. This was something they had needed to do for some time now.
Wow. lovely! Great chapter on so many levels. Thanks Ally.
Holy cow, holy cow, that’s all I can utter now….
WoW., someones been busy over the weekend..It made me think what Beth had gone through..we tend to lose who we really are when we are so consumed of responsibilities, to enjoy life and love is just to be plain and simple; “us” for who we are and what we are.. foot fetish heh..nice
LOL @ laments comment… Or more what I was thinking while reading that comment: ‘Much better purposes for that rug… ;) ‘ LOL Thanks Ally! Wonderfull as always!
Hey Ally, hope you had a really good weekend. reading this post made my morning. you really know how to incorporate depth and range. At one point i was laughing and at another point almost crying. I’m really glad Bette and Tina are talking about their past.I hope that helps to put it behind them.Post soon =)
Thanks for giving us another wonderful chapter – T&B love and clearing up some pain from the past. Hope you are doing better and taking care of yourself while giving us the gift of your voice through these great stories.