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The L Wing chp 8
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The L Wing – Chapter Eight
“I love you Tina”
“I love you Bette”
Narration of Bette Porter.
I pull her close to me and she kisses my brow – I feel amazing. So good and satisfied – she is a wonderful lover. After a few seconds she rubs the tears from my cheeks and kisses me on the mouth.
“I didn’t hurt you did I ?”
“No – you were – just wonderful – thank you Tina “
“Well I did want to do it you know “
“I’m glad you did – good you are amazing “
“You are pretty special yourself Bette ” she rests her hand on my breasts. I toy with her hair for a few seconds We lie together for several minutes until she rolls on top of me and starts kissing me again – I know that she wants me to make love to her.
“I want to make you happy Bette ” she whispers.
“I just never thought that I would be with anyone again “
“Why not ? – you are an incredibly beautiful woman “
“Who has a job that scares everyone off “
“I’m naked on top of you Bette – I think that proves that I’m not afraid of your job”
She kisses me again – more demanding and more urgent. I roll her over so I’m on top of her and lower my mouth onto one of her breasts – she gasps as I start sucking her nipple and licking at the soft skin. It has been so long since I did this in anywhere but my imagination.
I lift my head and look into her eyes – she smiles at me.
“You are doing fine Bette “
“Will you guide me ?”
“Yes – I promise “
I lower my head to her other breast and repeat the treatment. With a hand that is almost trembling with nerves I slide down her stomach.
“Oh yes babe “
“Tell me what is okay for you Tina ” I lift my head briefly.
“That’s a promise – you are doing great – oh yeah babe “
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Congratulations on your award! Well deserved. This story is excellent as well as a refreshing spin on TiBette. I look forward to more.
See Bette, it’s like riding a bike, you may be a little rusty, but you never forget. Lucky Tina!!
Let me add my congratulations. You deserve it! Thanks for a great story!
Congratulations very well deserved…as always love your stories….
Great chapter Ally and congrats on the ff award you are very deserving!!!!
Congrats on the award!!!! Ally this story is just HOT!!!!!! More Soon Please
Great chapter. They are so sweet together. Loving it. Looking forward to more.
Excellent, can’t wait for more!!!!
Many Congratulations on the award, very well deserved.
very well discovered ally…luved it!!
I love your work!
ally…I have to now take a shower at 4:45 in the afternoon. Damn woman. Thank you for the love and romance….post soon
So pleased you got one of the awards – richly deserved. This is a great spin on our favourite pairing. Well done and keep the chapters coming.
fabulous as always. Again I will say congrats. I am so happy for you.
i dont like that bette lied to tina. interested to see where this takes us. im lovin the story line.
bette is up in her game, i’m glad that tina loved it…and bette is soooo in love…wonderful…congrats on your well deserved award
I just love this story! You don’t get this kind of action on the West Wing!! LOL
I just love this story! You don’t get this kind of action on the West Wing!! LOL
I’m not real thrilled that Bette lied about the necklace, but hey it’s just a small detail and my god with a lover like Bette any woman would forgive and forget in no time. Grats on the award! You deserved it most definitely, especially since you let Tina bitchslap Hellno in a previous story. ;)
Congrats! Excellent writting and amazing story :D
Another wonderful chapter. I’d like to see how Bette really drives the Presidential car in serious situations. We know she picks up when her duty calls, but what are her answers?And as always, so hot! Please post soon.
Congratulations on the award. YOur stories are great. Keep them coming. If only the show could give us your Bette and Tina
I have to say firts: Congratulations for the award you deserved cause you`r an amazing writter! this chapter was pleasant! is nice see how much this 2 person have to each other. I think that Bette after 7 years deserved someone like Tina. Congratulations again
hey ally – sorry for not commenting sooner. school keeping me busy. i sent u an email yesterday. congrats on the award!! it is well-deserved. ur story was a shoe-in from the beginning. loved this chapter! bette didn’t have to worry too much. she still got it!
As always another factastic chapter. I know you are going to say I am bias, but so what I don’t care. My Ally won a FF award last night, which proves that I am right about how great a writer you are honey. I am so very proud of you Ally and I love you very much.
Congratulations on your award! Well deserved for this story so enthralling already, and for the previous one so totally comforting at a time we needed some Tina & Bette loving.Thank you.
Geez Ally, 6 pages! Do we need to get you an award every day to keep this pace up? Again, congratulations, you deserved it. Oh, and by the way, quite enjoying all the steamy action lately, as if you didn’t know.
This is hilarious “Lets hope she never finds out I sent Lara out with my personal credit card this morning for it -” LMAO. I love it! Reading to see where you take this story.
Congrats on the award!
I knew you would win, your writing is fantabulous. Great chapter
Ally you are incredible and so are your stories. Congrats on the award you do an outstanding job.
bette and tina are going to keep theirrelationship a secret in the white housethe way they look at each other i don’tthink soo.
bette and tina are going to keep theirrelationship a secret in the white housethe way they look at each other i don’tthink soo.
bette and tina are going to keep theirrelationship a secret in the white housethe way they look at each other i don’tthink soo.
Congrats on your award though I am not surprised, this story is excellent. Please post soon.
Congrats on the award!!!!!!! You deserve it so much. Luv this chapter! Please post more soon….. :)
Congratulations on your award You earned it. thanks for making Bette a happer person. thanks
Congrats – of course you won, your stories are simply the best
wow! congrats! good for you ;)and again an excellent chapter
Damn so damn hot and aweome.
im catching up honey. im loving this story. im definately going to have some fun tonight. thanks.
hottttttttttttttt
OH I’m so happy for you on your well deserved award. I loved your story and often would read it for inspiration. I don’t know which scene I love more Bette in the subway or Bette as a waitress. Both blew me away as a lot of your writing does. Thanks so much ally for all you give us.
havent read but i wanted you to know im trying to get my computer fixed honey. i miss reading and commenting and miss emailing you baby.
“Lets hope she never finds out I sent Lara out with my personal credit card this morning for it” rotflmao niiice :P congratz on the award ally :D
Hurrah! A well-deserved win for an excelllent author. Hot chapter, too ;)
Hey Allyemmerson – Congratulations on your award, it’s so well deserved, you’re so talented and gifted……About this story what can I say that haven’t been said already – hhmm nothing – instead I will just say a big THANK YOU for sharing happy B&T with us, I love it :o))
Bette and Tina are so cute. Bette is all nervous but i think it comes back to her as soon as she is touching Tina. The only thing I don’t get is why Bette lied to Tina about when she got the necklace, but not a big deal. Post soon and congrats on the well deserved award.
WOW, Love the imagery of the encounter between Bette and Tina. I hope that even when T does find out that she just brought the necklace that it will not matter.