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The Journey 39
Greg: “She is here now Tina.” I say as I put the coffee tray down. Tina had often come here for refuge when Bette was away.
Tina: I pick up the cup and pour some strong coffee into the cup and take a sip. I look at Greg but say nothing.
Greg: “Tina, that woman loves you, she always has.”
Tina: “I know.” Is all I say.
Greg: “And I saw her outside with
Tina: I stand at the window, cupping the coffee with both hands when I see Bette practically running out of the garden holding
All Together
Bette bursts through the door.
Bette: “You have to hear this” I say to Tina. “Come on honey, Laurel?”
Tina: “Uh Bette?” I am confused.
Bette: “Tee, she called me by name” I say breathlessly. “Come on honey” I say to
Tina: I smile at Bette “Bette, she isn’t talking yet.”
Bette: “Tee, I tell you she said Bette twice” and I am holding
Tina: I reach over to the take the flowers and kiss Laurel then Bette.
Bette: I start to put
Tina: I smile knowing how that came to be.
Bette: I watch Tee and wonder why she seems pleased with herself but I say nothing.
We all sit around the table and eat casually.
Bette: “She like mango nearly as much as me.”
Tina: “Well let’s hope she doesn’t find as many uses as you do for them.” I say thinking back to the hot summer nights when we made love and cold mango were a feature.
Bette: “Tee !” I say playfully “Not in front of the children.” I say with mock sterness. We eat the fruit and warm croissants. The flowers sit in their arrangement, two with
Tina: “You guys seem to be getting on well.”
Bette: “She is gorgeous Tee. Aren’t you?” as I look at
Tina: I sit in stunned silence. I look at Bette, Bette shrugs her shoulders but has the hugest grin and she brushes a tear away from her cheek, the first time I have seen a happy tear from Bette. Bette makes no move to conceal her emotions. I make my way around to Laurel and Bette and kiss each of them in turn. Bette flashes that famous smile but it is her eyes that tell the real story, the pure joy. I am reminded of why I love this woman so much. Laurel continues to giggle while I reach across and wipe the tear gently away from Bette’s face. Bette doesn’t break eye contact. We hold hands as we watch our daughter.
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(41 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
beautiful, just beautiful
that was f*cking cute! please post soon again
cute
what a beautiful moment. i m teary eyed at work, and late for a meeting. beautiful moments, you have once again captured another beautiful moment.
So sweet and so well written! Had to read the last part twice. More please!
So nice… and I’m sure Bette threw that cig butt into a proper receptacle instead of into the beautiful garden! ;-)
That was so beautiful. Tina should feel proud that she’s done a good job with Laurel. Now, both she and Bette can do just as well or even better together in raising their daughter. Their interactions were lovely…thanks for the update. Please continue.
ofcourse, by coincidence her perfect shot landed it in the ashtray !
This is by far one of my favorite stories. I wait anxiously for you to post and try my best to read each word with the slow and deliberate care they so deserve so I can make it last. Can’t wait for more.
That’s lovely. Hope all the other things will go as smoothly as it.
Love your story.
Ah, that is so freaking cute.
lovely…
nice – real nice. keep going!
Smart kid…my first word was dog. Says something for my folks now doesn’t it? That was an amazing chapter, I love seeing Bette bond w/ her daughter, and Tina for giving them the opportunity to get to know one another.Please post soon
Awe, so sweet. Loved it. Looking forward to more.
Ahhh so fucking cute and adorable – please continue this way and the trust will come….I love B&T happy and in love!!! Bette and Laurel is so touching and when she said “Bette” I just melted :o))
go Laurel u get them fixed :D hehe.. wise beyond her little years..
absolutely cute…this little girl will make everything right in their universe
Aww that was so cute and sweet, they are happy!
I just love your story. Please post soon.