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The Journey 26
Tina : “I want to believe you.”
Bette : I don’t look up, I swiftly start to make my way out of the car, Tina starts to move out the way and stands up. We are standing face to face. “You want to believe me ? Is that like you do not believe me but you wish you could ?
Tina : Silence.
Bette : “Damn it Tina, answer me. Answer me.” I raise my voice.
Tina : Silence.
Bette : “I am ***** sick of this, do you hear me ? I fucked up, yes I know, the whole ***** world knows and I’ve paid for it and somehow I have to still keep paying for it.” I am yelling and waving my arms about. I see other people watching me as they walk by, we are in a parking lot. “Tell me Tina, what do you want from me ? Really, what do you want, come on, tell me, because I have given you everything you have asked for, when you asked me to get out of your life, I did, when you asked me to be friends, I agreed, when you asked me to trust you that it was an honest mistake about Laurel, I believed you. WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT ?” I walk up to Tina and glare at her with my hands on my hips, waiting for an answer. “And now we are friends, you want to believe me ?” I say it incredulously. “And I am paying for something I have not done. You know what Tina, we are not friends, you know why, because friends, Tina, trust each other.” I turn around and get in the car, on the way I see a passer by staring at me. “What are you ***** staring at ?” I slam the door, start the engine.
Tina : I make my way back inside and see the others skunk back to their seats. I sit and say nothing.
Shane : “All right, I’m goin’ get moving.”
Tina : “Shane, wait up. You think I’m giving Bette a hard time, don’t you ?”
Shane : “I love you both Tina, and Bette fucked up but she’s paid for it too. It’s not just you who’s paid for it Tee, her pain is real too. If you love her sort it out, or let her go.”
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(55 votes, average: 4.20 out of 5)
Bring on the happy times now
i hope Tina do and say the right thing to Bette..they already lose so much time apart is time to think str8 and make some right choices for them and for their baby..and they ahve to talk and try to find a way to be together..another amazing chappy please please psot soon thanks :o)
“I think you should ask her to move back home.”
Wow, I did not expect that. Lets see what happens…
more!!! I want more! Bette needs to ask Tina to move back home and they need to work things out! they belong together! please post more soon :)
I like Abbie. Bette’s a strong-willed woman and I often feel that her circle of friends are a little too green to really help her with her personal troubles when they arise…that and they can hardly be impartial being friends to them both.
I hope to see more of Abbie, preferably just as a Bette and Tina friend only and not making her one of ‘the gang’. I think it would be healthier for BnT to have their own friends apart from their ‘family’.
omg great chapter!!!!!!!!!! so glad you posted again….. can’t wait for your next post
If there were no Abbie’s analysis, I couldn’t see why Tina is still in love with THIS Bette.
Great work. Please post again soon.
Yes, have a laugh now and then is a très bon plan for Bette.No one can resist Bette smile, Tina either.Thank you unbeknown ;-)
abbie has the right idea but will tina and laurel move in.
Thank God for therapists when stubborn people are too dense to see the forest for the trees.
wow . move back home. sure didn’t epect that. it could be interesting. but why is tina calling???? keep it coming girl.
I do believe that Bette should ask Tina to move in as friends. She could have Laura everyday. thanks
Tina needs to give a little here I mean Bette is trying to do the right thing by Tina and Laurel. Great story and can’t wait for more.
I love your story but can you please write more about choco please DOGS RULES.
nice really nice.
I’m glad Bette got a few things off her chest. Hopefully Tina knows she was wrong to disrepect Bette publicly and privately. By the way its been over a week, can we have more, please?!
Fantastic. Please can you keep the stories coming more often, too long in between chapters.
thx for Abbie…talk some sense in to Bette. She does need some advices. :) this is great..!!!!
NOoooo You can’t end it there! Thanks for these posts but I need more – your story is shaping up to be a real rollercoaster – for the reader & B&T
I can see there are going to be some sparks as well as a lot of tip toeing around issues if they move intogether – Write On!
just love this story – ugh, the ups and downs. Thank goodness for abbey – wise woman and thank god Saturday’s plan will never happen. Looking forward to your next post!
i really like this story and its been great to read after a hard day at work you are very talanted and i hope you post soon thanks for givin a great story cant wait to see what happens next
Hope Tina will say yes and moving back home. Ok post soon please, thanks!