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The Island – Chapter 10
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Dana and Alice had a workout session every day. Usually they did hand-to-hand combat, but, they would mix that up with jogging, mountain biking, swimming or tennis. Alice made sure to allocate time afterwards so they could talk as they cooled down. They finally moved to a first-name basis, but, there hadn’t been any more kissing — just a lot of flirting and lingering touches. That amazing attraction was there, but, Dana was still too shy to act on it and Alice wanted to be careful not to move too quickly. This relationship was becoming very important to Alice. She needed Dana to set the pace. She hoped Dana wasn’t too stuck on the employer/employee thing.
After one of their workout sessions, Alice worked up her courage and asked Dana to dinner again. It was about two months since that first dinner and she felt the time was right. They had forged a friendship and Alice hoped to move it to the next level. She looked completely crestfallen when Dana said no.
“But… Um… Would you like to have dinner with me?” Dana said and she reached out to hold the other woman’s hands in hers.
“I would love that!” Alice couldn’t remember when she was last asked out on a date. Or if she ever really had been. Dana smiled. “Great. Wear something comfortable and walking shoes, OK? I’ll pick you up at 6.” Alice just smiled and nodded her head. She thought if she tried to speak she might actually start crying.
Dana had spent many hours going over the pros and cons of starting some sort of relationship with Alice. She couldn’t get the other woman out of her mind. She made numerous mental lists and got herself thoroughly confused (Alice’s scary shower was a “con”). Then she boiled it all down. If she didn’t try, she would lose Alice. If she did try and it didn’t work, she would probably have to leave the island and might lose her job. That put it in perspective for her: she could get another job, but, she couldn’t find another Alice.
Of course, if she tried and it did work… Well… There would be other bridges to cross but she would worry about that if/when it came up. And she would have Alice by her side.
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awww such a romantic thing , dana reversing it nd sayin, ‘no wud u come to dinner with me’ :). The whole date was pretty romnatic :) loved it … agen PPS. x x
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW bite me right now! I am so delirously happy (did I spell right) that I need someone to bring me back to reality. How cute is that… wild flowers and sunset…. I like that because that they are in an islnad which civilization hasn’t taken over. Man… I fear what Gabby will do. But you know Danish antz is always good :) PPS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
Ok Ok i’m falling farther down the list but ya know someone has to fight fire :D Amaz-ING. Whatever Gabby has planned-Dana better kick her aS$ or I will write myself in and do it for her, LoL. Great job Goose, i’m not really what else to say….Picture perfect, sunsets and oceans :D Loved it as always!
All I can say is: “aaaaaaawwww”, again with that big stupid grin on my face. And yeah, I agree with akshunjack, Dana better kick Gabby’s ass if she had something planned against her. Loved it!
Woot. More and More I love this story. I’m just glad Gabby wasn’t in the bushes or something. And if she was Dana could throw her in the wood chipper.
great update and let’s us vote Gabby off The Island….
I was so excited to see u updated and did the HDD (nurses outfit huh?) I hope Gabby do not mess this up for Dana,if she tries,I hope she gets whats coming to her grrrrr. Thanks for the update MG,I just adore this story!! PPVS
Very nicely done! Hope to see you post soon.
As always, I am not the only one who love this story. What a beautiful picnic it was! Smart D, with limited resource and still came up with this. Totally in agreement w/pandakse’s comment. This chapter has definitely pushed all the clouds away and brightened up the sky. Where I am, the full moon is shinning brightly. Maybe, A & D could take a moonlight walk some time soon. It is rather romantic. I totally agree that A should delegate some of her workload to Harrison or S. A was young and she needed to have more than just work in her life. What is the point of having all these money and no time to enjoy it? Thank you for the advance Gabby warning. I am prepared. Bring her on. Seriously, can’t thank you enough for writing this fabulous story.
awesome chap MaGoose, Dana’s just so sweet (and she’s a hot chick who can kick ass and take names..perfect package) Gabby definately needs to be smacked down.
oh oh oh you are so lucky you didn’t post before I got to do this… or yeah… serious trouble :P… I am really loving this story… you have such an air of fun and mystique running within this story… and you are such a romantic… that whole scene over looking the cliffs reminds me of some of the spots you find up north… over looking the bluffs into the lake… so beautiful. Hehe… well I cannot wait to see where you take any and all ideas that I might throw your way… a master crafts person such as yourself will only do them justice :P… you freaking rock… hugs, JC
ahh – this is really sweet – Dana is so caring with flowers and everything. Great update as usual
awww this story’s sooo sweet!
awwwww yay cuteness and sweetness! I love the fact that they’re taking it slow. I hope Gabby doesn’t muck things up too badly. Your version of Dana is the woman I want to marry. can you make this happen? I shall give you my version of Alice in return if you like. lol
Awesome! What a great start to the week :-D I love this story and how sweet they both are. I’m also excited to see what Gabby has up her sleeve. lol. She’s such an evil bitch. You gotta love her. Anyway, can’t wait for the next post! KEEP IT UP!!!
aaawwwwwwwwwwwww… cute, sweet, adorable Danish, that’s exactly what I needed to brighten up my day. I second suzieb on Gabby. Love that she’s a bitch. Plus, she is hot, lol. I don’t mind having her around to spice things up, as long as she doesn’t cross the line. And you’d better start the Dana cloning again, I have a feeling you’ll need it soon, lmao. Thank you for another great update!!!
I’ve been refreshing this site several times this weekend, hoping for an update of this story. And there it is! :) Wohooo! It’s so sweet that they are taking it slow. They act so cute around each other. Can’t wait till their next date. I have a feeling that Gabby and/or Nadia will ruin it, but I hope their relationship won’t be jeopardized by it.
SO cute!! I have no clue which one of them is cuter Dana or Alice. Grr… Gabby is planning something and i don’t like it… can you just have her fall off a cliff already and leave our girls alone? I love that Dana is willing to risk her job for Alice… that is a big risk for her. But it will all work out… right?
weeehh There hasn’t been much Danish these days, specially on the boards. I’m so glad we still have awesome Danish writers like yourself. This is truly wonderful. The least I could do is leave a comment. Thank you. x