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The Insatiable Duo (part 23)
"We are both gonna be so sick!" Tina chuckled, hiding her head as she attempted to pout.
Bette smiled, still rather breathless from their session together. She looked around at their discarded clothes all over the bed and her smile grew. "I think I already am sick."
"Oh no!" Tina gasped, looking up to her and putting her hand to Bette’s forehead.
"No!" Bette laughed, shooing Tina’s hands away from her, "I’m sick because I can’t keep my hands off of you!" She giggled and rolled over ontop of the blonde, looking down into her eyes while Tina giggled in return. She took a deep breath and couldn’t shake her smile. "I love you."
"I love you too," Tina smiled, feeling Bette’s fingers intertwine with hers, holding her hands to the mattress.
"I really do," Bette whispered honestly.
"Mmm …" Tina smirked, and Bette knew something cheeky was coming. "… Well I don’t really. Sorry."
"Tina!" Bette laughed, moving her hands to tickle Tina’s sides.
"Ahh! Stop!" Tina laughed, trying to get up as she squirmed underneath Bette. "Bette!"
"Take it back!" Bette screamed with laughter.
"I take it back!" Tina laughed, trying to get her lover back, but Bette was too quick. She held Tina’s hands to the mattress again.
"Damn your attitude," Bette grinned, pressing her lips to Tina’s. "I love you and you can’t stop me, you bully."
"I’m not a bully!" Tina laughed, "What kind of insult is that?!"
"Well you deserve it," Bette smiled, laying softly over Tina.
Tina let out a soft moan at the way that felt. "Okay."
"Ooh look at you taking an insult," Bette teased, slowly adding pressure onto her lover.
"Don’t screw with me," Tina grinned, thrusting against Bette’s thigh, "This feels really good … Just don’t stop …"
Bette was grinding into her, burying her head in Tina’s soft blonde hair. She was getting lost in the sensation of being so connected with her lover.
Tina moved against Bette’s thigh as she spoke, "So how did James find out then?"
"Eew!" Bette chuckled, pulling herself up and looking down at Tina with disgust. "James? I’m touching you and you bring up James?! Eew eew eew."
Tina was in shock as Bette got up. "Sorry," she chuckled, "I … that whole thing had been on my mind I guess."
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(43 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
i have a huge smile on my face right now i just love this story!
You have quite the imagination….XXX rated. I hope your RL is as delicious as your story. :-)
So good to hear that you are feeling better. A really bad cold is a nasty thing, it can take so long to feel better sometimes. Great update. It was poignant for me how Tina was consciously able to give up control and maybe more so on how Bette was so tender and understanding with Tina’s vulnerability.
this is my favorite story you write, how you pair these two up in this story is electric, my computer almost smokes when reading this one!!luv it!!!
Loved it! Glad you are back.
give a little recieve alot…Lesson for Tina
Again well done! I’ve missed your stories I always feel so happy after reading:) PPS
Damn that was HOT and then so sweet & tender:) PPS
what a great way to end the day for me, coming home from work to find this and other awesome stories. Thanks for the post.
Bi, if this is what we got while you were ill, I can imagine what this chapter would have been if you weren’t ill. 12 alarm fire. Damn girl…….. Maybe Bette should have more control in their love-making. Glad you’re well. PPVVVVVS
Ok, that’s nice for a change, but please don’t “oversissify” Tina..!
love how they are showing some vulnerability with each other. awesome update! PPS!
Jeezus…had to get off floor for a cold shower and a cigarette. ROFLMAO!
Ohhhh so adorable!! LOVED IT!!! Your writing is amazing!!! You’re realy talented!!! PPVVVS!!!
I love their foreplay, during play and after play. These two are so cute and lovable. I am with Bette, there is no need to mention a male’s anatomy protrusion.
I just caught up and I love them!! Great job!! I love Tina and Bette together. =) PPS!!
You’re alive! :P Glad you’re feeling better, I had the flu a few months back and it SUCKED. Awesome chapter as always, really like the way you’ve written these two :) So cute at the end! Much love ;)
Can this story get any hotter! Wow! What an update and was so sweet how Tina gave up control to Bette and Bette was all tender cause she knew hard it was for Tina. Love it love it. Thank you:)
So glad you are feeling better! As usual what an update! So sweet,loving and yet again another huge hurdle crossed. So glad Tina was able to give up control – that was a huge step! These two are just breaking down all the barriers! I love your stories they always leave me so happy! Can’t wait for the next chapter and the next… PPS
awww…
“oh happy dayyyyy” – you’re back bi…it’s been too long!! i’ve missed this story it always makes me smile…now i’m off to read timid devotion, pps…oh and glad to hear you’re feelin better…does that mean more chappys????!
Oh my goodness! that was wow!:)PPS
I think it’s important for Tina to realize that she can give some control to Bette to balance things. Great update to this great story! Thanks for posting!
YEAH!!!! and i bet u didn’t try my recipe [big smile]. thx, loved tina’s giving up control.
I love this story!!!! Thank you PPVS
everytime the posts seem shorter and shorter… :(i realy realy live your tibette so ppvssssss i cant wait till the gang will mww3t tina
What a coincidence that I am sick too…I have followed your stories for awhile, I just haven’t commented yet, but I wanted to say I enjoy your stories very much-it’s the best I have read.
That was hot and awesome, love it. PPS!