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The highest heights, a birthdaypresent TiBette one-off
As all hugs had been shared, the 5 young women, who were at their second year of college, took in their surroundings. Off course it had been Alices idea to attend the funfair while it was in town, a thought that had popped into her head the first moment she had seen the advertisement. The witty blonde, who loved to tease, took Tina’s arm and pulled her a little away from Bette, whispering something in her ear. The brunette whose color of skin resembled that of mocha or caramel, felt how envy and desire fought for a place in her heart as she saw her best friend throw back her head and utter a loudout laugh… There was nothing fake about Tina, from the way she casually put a stray of hair behind her ear to the heartfelt smile she now offered Bette as their eyes met.
Tina felt how her heart jumped up as she caught the chocolatebrown eyes staring at her… Had she been dreaming, or had she really seen that hint of fierce desire again? Usually the blonde could read her friend like noone else could, but, allthough she hoped with all her heart that Bette would feel more for her than just friendship, when she read facts that could lead to that conclusion she hastily brushed them off as wishful thinking.
Bette, on the other hand, kept to her mantra of Tina being straight. A conclusion she had taken as the soutern girl had told her, at the first day they’d met, that she had broken up with her boyfriend back in Alabama because of the distance… A conclusion Tina had never given her a reason to doubt. Sighing she followed her friends, deparate not to show she had never before visited a funfair. Being brought up mainly by her workaholic father, as her mother had left them when she was 9, Bette had grown mature fastly, and considered herself an adult from the time she was 10. Melvin Porter was a controlling african-american man, and allthough she no longer lived under his roof, she was still influenced by him. When she had come out years ago, it had taken him 3 months to speak to her again… And very Porter-like: after those 3 months had acted as if nothing had happened. There was no hint that he accepted her lifestyle, the only thing that had chanced was that he no longer asked questions about men in her life. All and all, the biracial girl had not had the most ordinary, nor happy childhood, and a trip to the funfair would have been considered a waste of time rather than a nice family outing. Looking around at the people eating cottoncandy, and the children sitting on the horses of the merry go round, Bette felt the loss yearning in her chest, and clenched her teeth together.
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Awww mate, that was beautiful….I could feel what they were feeling, I could see what you described for us!! How are you mate…have you seen my PM?? I miss you xx
This was very sweet and cute indeed. Not to mention charming… Delightful reading ! I feel like it’s my birthday too. Thanks JLB+T !
Such a beautiful story!! ^_^
Wow, this was a very special chapter and not just because it was gogk’s birthday present but it showed how one can conquer the ups and downs of life.
Awwww…now this just warms my heart! So here are a few reasons why. First, you are an amazing writer and anything that you write I enjoy. This was no exception, it was wonderful. Second, just the fact that you wrote this for my also dear friend gogk shows me such a soft side to you Hun. Really, I’m touched and I also know how happy she was that you met her when she was there! LOL…too cute! As for you gogk, I sent ya a PM even though I already sent ya a birthday wish earlier in the week. I hope, with all my heart Hun, that you have an amazing birthday. I know we talk a lot privately, but just know that today I’m thinking of you and I hope you enjoy peace today my friend! Take care to both of you, you’re both just heart warming!
That was sweettttttttttttt for a sec you had me worried now u need to update BOF please 5 pages
beautiful story and a great reason for it, a few reasons actually but even one is enough
what can i said? words in this world aren’t enough to said thanks and to said how important you are in my life, this is the most beautiful present… EIFU… you are so amazing and wonderful person and i am so proud to be your friend. THANKS ik hou van jou…
very beautiful indeed… my heart flutter by the romance you created in your story. Love… Ferris Wheel… hmm… romantic!
One one hand, this really is a great story, beautifully, on the other hand I am affraid of heights, really affraid and this story is really not good for my fears…
absolutely beautiful….i felt the love in this….it takes an amazing writer to make the reader feel the actual emotions that the characters feel….amazing….bravo….50 stars….
What a beautiful story. HAPPY MOTHERS DAY TO ALL MOTHERS! please post again soon.
Fabulous!! Thanks!
That was one of the sweetest story I ever had the pleasure to read. My only regret is that it already ends. Keep up the good work and pps.
Beautiful
That was a beautiful and awesome story and thank you for sharing it with us. Happy Mothers Day to all the Mothers!
Sweet and endearing!
Cute. =)
AWESOME!!!! thank you!!!