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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter One

    Story written on November 1, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=63070
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    It all felt like a lifetime ago now.

    A blonde haired woman sat at the bar, staring deep into the glass. She watched the whiskey swirl around, the ice clinking together. The sound achingly familiar. How many times had she taken comfort in that sound? There were too many to mention, too many to recount. She tore her eyes away from the glass, a packet of cigarettes close by begging to be smoked. To inhale the toxic fumes, to have her lungs filled, the nicotine in her blood stream. There was no other feeling like it, except one. The feeling of that whiskey burning down her throat, creating a warm sensation in the pit of her stomach.

    She couldn’t remember when it happened. It all felt like a lifetime ago now. Black Russians on a Friday night. No matter how bad the working week had been, how little they had seen of each other it was always Black Russians on a Friday night. 7pm sharp, no earlier, no later. Just the two of them, even their friends knew not to call. They needed to be alone, to reacquaint themselves with each other. Talking, touching, laughing. Then dinner, always in a great restaurant and she always paid, no matter how much her lover had fought it. Then home, that had always been the best part of the night. Some nights her shirt had already been ripped open before they had got through the front door. The bruising kisses, the hands that had roamed her body, the tongue that had caressed her, licked her in places that she had never allowed any other woman to get close to. How long ago was that? She couldn’t remember, the memories were too good and too painful to be recalled.

    Now she looked across the bar. The smoke making it hard to see. She could see figures moving on the dance floor, some moulded together, like she used to do. Her lover had always loved dancing, the look of joy on her face every time they took to the floor. The holding her close, the feeling of her skin on her fingertips as she moved her hand underneath clothing. The dark hiding the obvious chemistry, the obvious need that she had to do so much more than dance. She wondered how many of those woman were thinking the thoughts that she had done all those years ago, before her fast and fevered fall.

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    4. Wow, Tina was pretty dispicable and she seems to have come to a full realization of that. It seems a case of reaping what we sow. We all fuck up, we all at some time or other behave less than admirably. But Tina, seems to have gotten stuck in berating herself as she had gotten stuck in punishing Bette. Unless this is a stage she must go through before she can work on correcting her faults, this is not the path to enlightenment.

    5. Slurp! You’ve got me – I’ve swallowed the hook, line and sinker with this first chapter of yours…your writing is so smooth…excellently written and very dramatic. You can reach out and touch the angst in Tina. She is lost in a very dark world right now. The bartender is a very brave soul indeed! Maybe the bartender can shed some light into Tina’s darkness. More please!

    6. Yay another Fic CG. You always make me happy and your fics are the best. My girl Tina in this state is painful to read,but life is full of loss and tragedy, and her state of mind is not healthy. It saddens me,but I hope she works hards to get her life together. My guess is that her virtual divorce is Tibette, and the real one is with henry. Well i love the start. So u MUST Continue my lady.

    7. what a fabulous start…i guessed it was tina…is bette the bartebder? or bette is the ex-lover? so many questions, can’t wait to read more to get answers

    9. Seems like Tina has fallen on some hard times. I can guess that the one true love of her life was/is Bette. Is there any chance of Bette riding in on her white horse to help rebuild Tina into the loving woman she once was?

    10. Hi citygirl, you have my full attention!!!! these are the words that made it for me “Two divorces, one virtual, one real. The virtual one hurt more than the real one.” I have so many questions i guess i will have to wait and read like everybody else, i look forward to the next 100 chapters!!!!

    11. Wow…so many questions…where’s Angelica? Where’s Bette? Where’s the girls? Wiil Tina come back from this? How did it get this bad? Where do babies come from? Why is the sky blue? lol…okay I got carried away…but you know you have alot of questions to answer…so keep posting.

    12. I agree this is a very WOW beginning – and full of questions about what brought Tina to this point? and who is our mysterious bartender going to be? This is great and I’m waiting for more just like all the other fans.

    17. You are a sneak, having yet another story up your sleeve! I popped on at work and saw your name, couldn’t wait until I got home to read! Great start, and very interested to see where it goes, I had the feeling from the beginning it would be Tina, and how right you are – A fevered and fast fall – very much looking forward to the who, how, why, what’s of the story!

    23. I haven’t read anything with such sexual tension, yet drenched in sadness since “A Night in the D” by luvrgirl. This is the kind of story I’ve been waiting to read for quite some time. I tried putting anyone in the characters’ shoes but I kept seeing and hearing Tina and Bette. Then I thought maybe Helena or even Shane could be the bartender. I’m definitely waiting for the next chapter!

    25. Wow, you def have my attention, and I will go with your comments about it “will be better”…pls cause this seems and feels very painful at the moment…tks for this new journey…tibette forever…

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