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The Beginning of a Friendship, chpt 54
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Previously on ‘The Beginning of a Friendship’
Tina:
Touch you? Can I? Really?
Oh T, I think I will die if you don’t…
Her words seemed to come from far away, through a blurr of heat that surrounded me, I approached, needing her nearer, and let my lips softly meet hers, my hands, at once no longer trembling, lead the way I wanted to follow. Gently I felt my finger surround the fabric of her bra… The motion in which she had unhooked it, as in slowmotion I could still see it in my mindeye, and I let my lips linger to the soft skin of her cheek, her neck, her ear. I could feel her, press herself against me, and as I glanced down, I could feel how the quivering got a hold of me again…
I felt her waver, unsteady on her feet, and caught her, my hands still in their position, but now it wasn’t merely fabric I felt, but her firm, responsive skin under it, that filled my palms.
We both gasped at the same instant, and, her head cocked so she could look at me, our gazes met, as if it was destined…
I like it… A lot…
My breath tickled my dry lips as I uttered the words, panting. I could see the question in her eyes at my breathless confession, for I knew she thought I ment the sensation in my hands, the warmth, the softness, I carefully started to explore…
Your surprise…
I finished my sentence, looking in her eyes deeply, before conquering her lips yet again…
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Chapter 54
Bette:
I like it… A lot…Your surprise…
For a short moment I thought she was joking, indicating that my craving for her to touch me, was the surprise I had had in store for her, and I felt dazzled as she softly kissed me before leaning back slightly…
The flick of her eyes, as they met mine… The way her teeth scraped her lower lip, and at once it all fell into place… The teasing, the determence, the lack of shyness…
She knew…
Tina Kennard!
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I freaking hate interruptions. GOD people just let me read the story!!!!! Go away!!!!!! Anyway, grats on the award! *hugs* And…WHOA! Okay so, Bette got Tina wet in more ways than one. Works for me! Hmmmmmmmm so I guess chapter schfifty-five is the big one. THE BIG ONE. Oooooooo just don’t take a month or two to post it, YOU HEAR ME?!!?! xD
Dear Mom, I don’t have just faith in you… thing is: I don’t even know how to express in words how I admire you. You’re a great person (YES!) and you’ve always been as supportive of me as you say I have been of you. Amazing girl you are. We’ve been through a lot, yes. Hard times? Yeah… some, in fact. You leaned on me and I leaned on you. You kicked my butt and I kicked yours! LOL — But we’ve shared thoughts, opinions and precious and trustful things. We’ve shared priceless moments too. Lots of fun and so many emotions… Well, we do know what emotions means huh? — I am proud, very proud of you, of your writing and of your award, like it was mine. I was with that big goofy grin on my face when I saw your name there. I was… mesmerized, yeah! ;) I’m truly happy for a friend so special that I love so much. I wish you many more awards and tell ya I’m lucky to have you as a proof reader and as a friend. Take care, dear. And about tomorrow! UHU! Getting older! Gonna partyyy! – HOHO! Did I embarrass you? LOL xx Lu
Wow! … now there’s the reason you got the dozen red roses award and very well deserved it was … this story is just so adorable, can i get all mushy on you? .. this was the first story on this site I ever read and I love it as much now as I ever did then, congrats on the award and please please please please please post the next one soon if you can :)
Wow, another chapter, thankyou, I love this story and have faith that you won’t make us wait terribly long for the next few chapters. I can feel my addiction starting up all over again…ahhhhh
Hey! You came back! Congrats, by the way. Even though I knew this wasn’t going to be THE chapter, I sat here holding my breath going “This is it! This is it!” and then remembered… No it’s not… Fantastic as ALWAYS, and I cannot wait for the next one! ;)
Sooooo perfect soooo deserve the award love it please post soon
Wish I could sen to you my young friend a gross of Roses. when I seen the Pin today by your story I just laughed out lound been waiting to see it when you posted. I believe I felt like a proud Mother Hen that her baby got it first pin feather. Oh,my dear the pride you should feel. I love this story and if you continue to write as beautifully as this you will have many more by your name. Again I love this story. Take care of school and post soon thanks
See i told you that the pen beside your name looks great! doesn’t it? you let me spechlees since the beginning of the chapter you know that i have no words to thanks you for be there, for support me and be my friend and because the confidence, thanks for let me know the wonderful person that you are because as the lovely way yoy write as lovely you are! a lot a lot of hugs you friendship means a lot for me. and now keep writing i need to read the 55 if not i will go and kick you! (kidding you know i won’t be capable to hurt my friend!) congrats again
Award is totally deserved!!! Loved post. Tina’s revelation was a long time coming. NOW looking forward to the BIG MOMENT!!!Please post SOOOON!!!
After several hrs of thinking what are the perfect words to congratulate you I didn’t find them… Im the short-word girl… I was tempted to reply only “Oh” (our ‘secret’ code) :S As I told you before, Marjan is a very lucky girl, all your words are so ‘hearted’… you find the right way to express your (and B+T’s… Bette and Tina… not Bitch + TripleSex… come on!!!!!) feelings and that’s why you won your (first) Dozen Roses Award. I’m very proud of you!!!Now that I’m surrounded with writers (you’re annoying!!! hahahahaha kidding!!!!) I’m considering your suggestion of start writing… I don’t know when… so if someday you find a weird story of a writer called AddisonMcCutcheon (or another exotic combination like that… I’m still thinking…) it will probably be mine :P
congratulations on award…and this was a great chapter, they are so connected already and now tina is so ready…so bring it on
Hey mate – thanks for your words in the Author note, really beautiful :o)) And so was the chapter – again congrats on the well deserved award!!
Oh they are so ready to make that next step. They complement each other. It is like the sun in the sky and the rain to clouds. They are Bette and Tina. Thanks for the post and hopefully you will get to return home soon.
Congrats on award JLBT. Damn B&T are hot and you killing us here my friend. Now please bring more the hot stuff and can’t wait to see more, thanks!
Congrats on the award.
Firstly congrat’s on your dozen roses award (hopefully the first of many). It was well deserved!! as for your wonderful talent for blueballin, oh i think we could let it slip ;) Seeing as this chapter was BLOODY BRILLIANT the next one i am very much looking forward to! Ahh ya just gotta love thunder and lightning storms!! haven’t had one over here in ages.. Anywoo, congrats again Doll :D
Dear friend and wonderful author, what could I say either ? I’m feeling SO deeply touched receiving this ‘4th rose’ from your more-than-deserved award – the one I never stopped to hope you’ll get one day, for you’re such a true romantic heart… like me !! ^_^ Yes, you just brang sunlight in my day, the same way you always brang warmth and emotions in my heart through each one of these jewels that are your stories. I’m so happy and proud to be on your author’s notes, my Lady M : a lot of thanks, a big smile and an affectuous hug for you, my friend ! *** I will comment this new chapter later, simply because I’ll have to savour it slowly after having read the last ones I unfortunately wasn’t able to read and comment. And you know why : this particular story of yours is more than my biggest reader’s weakness here. It means so much to me, more than I could say… Each part of this Beginning of a Friendship I so love owns a piece of my heart and makes it beat so loudly. *** You deserved any possible awards but this one was simply the best to depict your sensitive and poetic talent, for your words always seems to have been dictated by all the beautiful, genuine feelings your heart and mine are full of. I cherish your friendship a lot and I’ll forever stay truly grateful to you for everything your endearing talent gave to me. Don’t thank me, I’m the one who thank you ! Dear JLBT, I… Just Love your Beautiful Talent so much ! ^_^ Very fondly – A.
… God, of course one has to read ‘all the beautiful, genuine feelings your heart and MIND are full of’ ! I certainly didn’t have any intention to mix my own feelings with yours – but of course this written slip-up just revealed how much I commit myself in your stories ! (*wink & grin*)
Thank you for the rose pal.. you totally deserved the award. Keep the good ideas for your stories floating, your fics never become boring even though you may think they’re not going anywhere.. we’re here to prove you wrong. If the next chapter is THE chapter, hope you can get the perfect song. Kind regards!
Hey you… Thanks so much for the rose, but really I’m the one who should be thanking you! How could I forget that BOF and you are the reason I registered on this site… I always knew that you were an award-winning writer, my friend, and i am so proud of you!!! I really felt thrilled when I saw your name, but you know that already… I’ve known this site for a little bit more than a year now, and as you know, from the very beginning, BOF has found a very special place in my heart. And as one of my fellow commenters said above, the love I have for this story has never lessened, if not improved with every chapter… And as it is, I now love that story for more reasons than just the obvious… You are an amazingly talented writer, dear J, but I also feel blessed to be lucky enough to know you as a friend! You are a wonderful person and I enjoy our talks so much! And know that I’m very touched and more than honored by your words… Now about this chapter, you know that, like you, I’m a slowburn lover, and this kind of chapter is pure delight for me! I’m a very happy reader right now… Of course, i can’t wait for the big long awaited chapter, but I’m quite happy with the progress of the last two chaps! On the JLBT scale, that’s quite huge! LOL… Just teasing, my friend… Hell, you know I’m right!… Tons of hugs and congrats’ to you, my dear, and talk soon!
Your writing evoke a lot of feelings… emotions that have been buried deep down inside… your writing hit home in so many ways… but not everyone is as lucky as our favorite couple in your story :P You’ve made love seems so beautiful and wonderful… regret… to have missed out these wonderful things that come with love… Thanks a lot for your generosity… you’re the first writer to have share her ‘Dozen roses’. We should be thanking you for you to have pick out time from your busy schedule to write for us… Thank you very much… and congrats on the award… you so well deserved it :D
1st brb
Hey there! I happened to click on this story because I recognized your name…lol! I read it…excellent and gosh 6 pages putting some of us to shame (me)! I wanted to tell you, I am going back and reading the previous chapters. You’ve hooked me! I don’t have a lot of time to read if I want to continue my story, I do read Jo and Ally and Skipton and Tiff_Duke on a regular basis…I’ve added you to my list. Thanks for the post and I’ll catch up! I promise!
First of all I’m overwhelmed by your kind words towards me, I feel like an award winner myself now. But you don’t have to thanks me, we can never thank you enough for the joy you bring by giving us the opportunity to read you beautiful and touching stories. I love reading them so my comments try to match the feelings they evoke in me. Winning one award is great, winning your next, something I truly hope, will be great too. Bedankt voor dit prachtige hoofdstuk ook al weer, nog een tiental hoofdstukken en de lang verwachte NC-17 komt eraan ;). Grapje, niks overhaasten, het tempo dat jij aanhoudt maakt 80% uit van de charme van jouw verhaal.
‘oh my, this was just…amazing.’ i thought. and that was just after reading the author’s note. even that was a brilliant piece of writing. and that doesn’t just say something about you as a writer but as a person. and to agree with my fellow commenters, you shouldn’t be thanking anyone else. we have to thank you. for the amazing job you do/did with this story. there are many really good stories around here, but yours is one of the best! you’re so f***ing talented (*jealous*) and you deserve that award so much. congrats, again……it’s not very surprising that this chapter is yet another awesome piece of work. your style of writing is just amazing. every paragraph, every sentence, every word touches me. you are a genius. and i’m grateful for every minute you can spare to continue this astonishing story. though i’ve been coming across your story rather late, you had me hooked from the first chapter. and there’s not a day when i don’t log on to see if you posted an update. and every time i see that you have my heart jumps. and i start wondering what you have for us this time. and never i have been disappointed. you are an amazing writer. i can’t express how much i love your story (in fact, all your stories). and in case you haven’t noticed, i’m not the only one. so please remember: you can’t let us wait to long for the next chapter. PPS