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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 51
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Previously in ‘The beginning of a friendship’:
Bette:
She looked at me with so much powerfull emotion in her eyes, a warmth filled my heart and veins when I let her slide into my arms, holding her tight and yet carefull… She pressed herself agains me and again I was amazed by the way our bodies smoothly fitted into eachother. As if we were cut out of the same piece of wood…
I’ll never be able to put in words how much I love you…
I whispered tenderly into her ear, and, shivering she wrapped her arms around me tighter. Suddenly, the realization that only the white soft fabric of the towel prevented me to see, touch and straddle her was unbearable, and I felt hot flashes run up and down my spine with the speed of light.
Her hands wondered over my back, slowly discovering all the curves and making me crave her even more. My knees gave up on me and I had to take a step back to hold my balance… With one hand I leaned on the small table that was behind me, which gave away just as fast as my knees had done…
In less then a second I was sitting on the floor, glancing up to meet her blinking, ashtonished look… The sudden urge to laugh, also due to the surprise of my fall, hit me like lightning and was uncontrolable.
The way her lips, jerked into half a smile, pushed me right over that edge, and the deep and true laugh that exited my mouth amazed me, as did the feeling that overwhelmed me yet again…
It was as if, with every heartbeat, a wave of happiness and love raged through me… My fingertips tingled oddly, as did the aera of my chest that hid my heart. My blood tickled the inside of my veins, as if thousands of jittering butterflies tried to get out and fly to her…
Tina, so unaware of the power she had over me, of the love she had evoked in me, that only she could ever evoke in me, so unaware of all those emotions inside of me, making my heart pound with more velocity and strenght…
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Gah, meanie! Though, I have to say, at this point I kinda want Tina to innitiate their sleeping together. If Bette’s going to keep stopping, Tina might just have to take matters into her own hands…
That was mean!!!! I hope they get together soon. you are killing me here. Thanks PPS
Oh my friend, not nice to leave us like this and please let them have some love coming and cant wait to see some hot stuff. OK post soon please, thanks!
Okay, Captain, I think i’ll speak for everyone here telling you that this was the WORST tease that you’ve ever given us… And God knows you’re a pro! (Of course when I say ‘worst’, you know I mean great but a goddamn killer one!)… You know what? You had me here, even though I KNOW you’re the queen of tease, i really thought that this was it, and that next chapter was definitely gonna be NC-17! But you got out of it again!!! Damn… Please, please, puh-leeaase, tell me it was the last time. I’m taking the hint that Tina’s fear is totally gone and that next time will be THE ONE! And to borrow your own words, “…that thing in her eyes, that unnamable precious thing, held a promise that soothed me…” Yeah, that soothes me alright… for now! ;) No scolding here, you know I just love your writing, but hell, this was HOT! And i can’t believe they were actually able to stop this (Correction: How could YOU stop this? ;) lol… Anyway, also had to say: “… she smiled while the tear that had formed in her eye made its way down her cheek into my waiting handpalm. And somehow, I expected a rainbow… For sun and rain appeared at the same time, and the same place…” TRIPLE WOW!!! Beautiful writing! Thanks for an amazing chapter, J!
That was the most sensual, descriptive, amazing writing I have ever read in my life loved it
what can i said? you let me spechlees! in the middle of the chapter i have to run to open all the windows in order to refresh the enviroment cause i didn’t think what was next but then they stop!!! wow it was so sensual my friend that i don’t know if i will read the N17 without die! take care right now i will go to take a glass of whater with a lot but a lot of ice!
Arghh… tease!! Is this how you treat me after I thinking about your whereabouts and your stories whole night? :D Anyway, thank you for making my wish come true ;) But my friend… I was wishing for the gravity to… you know… pull the towel all the way down to the floor… LOL *slap myself at the head and stop being such a pervert* Ok, that was really hot… I swear I stopped breathing at some points in the story :D You make the love between these women really beautiful *heart warming and melting at the same time* And me with Kword, this line is really beautiful… “And somehow, I expected a rainbow… For sun and rain appeared at the same time, and the same place… ” B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L~ Can’t wait for the next chappy… I bet it’ll be more brilliant and romantic (should I be wishing for an NC-17 and that my wish will come true again? You know a girl can dream right?) ;)
My goodness! what’s next???
I’m such a happy Son… I think I could cry… hehe;)
man ur in the dog house first cause it took u way too long to post this but u made me happy i got 5 pages then u kill me with teasing grrrrrrrrrrrrr longer
I have missed this fic. Just love the love between Bette and Tina. But lets let them get down to some loving. Please bring in Tina’s little niece for a short stay as a guest appearence or longer. Wonderful JOB!!!!
I think that you just like to torture me. Make me all hot and steamy and then leave me hanging. Taking a cool shower will not do it either, so please put me our of my misery soon.
Ohhhh god – that is soooo mean (laughing) wow – you are really killing us here and you know it too. Post soon and I mean very soon
Dammnnn talk about getting the shivers.. I think i’m about to fall off the chair with this one Just… Seriously can’t wait to read the nxt one :) Seriously love your story!!!!
O.o o.O TEASE! xD
Tease, tease, tease…god girl what are you doing to me huh.