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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 37
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At once I realized we were still under a cold shower as I hearded her teeth chatter…
*God I love her*
Pushing my unsureness to the back of my head I captured her lips once again, pressing my soaked body against hers, turning on the hot water as well…
When we broke our kiss in order to get some air she shyly played with the bottom of my shirt…
God T… You’re beautifull… I love you so much…
A warm feeling of relieve and love washed over me as I looked into those eyes that were pools of emotions…
Bette:
*God she is beautifull…*
Craving to touch her… Love her… Kiss her… I was afraid… Afraid of al the feelings that were raging through my body… Of course I had felt desire before… But i never figured that the mix of desire and true love could be so intoxicating… I was glad I was pressed against the wall for support because I felt dizzy…
Seeing her blush the way she did made me feel bad about myself, but I couldn’t help stealing glances of her beautifully shaped body… The tension in my lower stomach was worse than even and I felt butterflies tickling the inside of my veins…
At once she pushed me up against the wall… Her soft body pressed against mine, pulling me close for a kiss… I felt wartm wash over me and it took me a while to figure out it wasn’t just the love I felt but that she had actually turned on the hot water…
*She wants to be here with me?*
*She can’t want that can she?*
We broke the kiss to get some air and I let the bottom of her shirt pass my hands, hoarsly whispering what I felt so deep inside me…
God T… You’re beautifull… I love you so much…
A smile.. A beautifull radient smile was my reward for those words. She wrapped her arms around me and hugged me tight, pressing first her lips and then her cheek against my bare shoulder…
*Thank god for off-the-shoulder tops*
I love you too…
Oddly enough I felt like crying… She made me so intensly happy and as I entangled my fingers in her wet blond locks I softly kissed her forehead, feeling the water pour over us as a warm summerrain…
———————————— TBC ————————————-
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Thanks again for your story. It’s so… sigh… There’s no words. What have you done to me ?
‘You’d like to know??? *Smiles knowingly*’ Teasssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee… haha… c’mon… tell tell… oh gosh, how I just love this sweet torture of the guessing and doubting… haha. Is that ur experience? *wink wink*
runnin in for a cold shower* comin back and typing” slow burn and cold shower are lethal”love this story..u are really havin us wait for this story longer than we shud be…lol post soon pls
Ah…what can I say?..WOW..HOT…and so perfect..we are getting there..right? can´t wait for more…please post soon…thanks for lighten up my really bad day…
Oh, Mighty Master of the Slow Burn, I bow down to you! Lovin’ it, as always. Fantastic, I love the hesitancy experienced by both of them. The love and tenderness expressed by them is exactly how the act in Happy Bette & Tina Land in my head… :D Can’t wait for the next installment!
Cute, adoreable…. Great read :D Have a good weekend huni and lookin forward to the nxt chapter…
Your story is the most romantic story I have read in a long time. I just can’t get enough of it. The more you write, the more I want. Have a great weekend and hurry back with another of your fantastic chapters.
This truly is a beautifully written, romantic ‘take’ on B and T. Keep up the good work, I love where you are taking my 2 fave characters. Thanks!
Awwwwwww…. they are sooo sweet, cute and Soooo in love!!! It’s funny that you mentioned about snail pace..lol, I truly enjoy the sweet, slow, beautiful torture of yours. Man, it sounds so S&M. lol.. please continue
firstable i hope you will funny this weekend i will miss so much your chpaters! now to this wonderful story! what a mischievous and cute chapter! did i tell you that i love this story? i think i didn’t said enough! if you make me smile a big smile just with Bette Tickling Tina and a little of water on they i can’t imagine when you write a NC17! have funn, take care!
WOW, and that was just a little fooling around and playing in the shower. I sure hope that they saved me some cold water. I need a few gallons to cool off my body. I do not know what I will need when they finally make love. But you need to have it handy so that I do not pass out or burn up because of the heat and fire. Have a great weekend. It is going to be a very long weekend for me waiting for your next post.
Beautiful…I loved it a lot. The intense, slow motion defintely put me in the grove. AMAZING! WOW! I’M IN A DAZE!!!!!! LOL *she blushes* Thanks for making me smile. :) Bye…
They are cute and hot, and let see some more hot coming in the shower. Ok post soon please, thanks!
After the last chapter I was sore in my face because I kept smiling through the entire chapter, this time my jaw hitted the floor and are now in pain LOL….seriously your writing does things to me, it’s really sweet, tender and beautiful and I demand more :o)) I love how bold Tina is and how Bette is holding back….so cute.
FIRST!!!!!!!!!!! *runs off to read*
YAY justy loving where this is going!!!!! where the hell have you been?? you’ve abandoned me in the chat room, why why why!!!! lol keep them coming
Excuse me. I just need a few minutes to hoist my chin back up off the ground. You see, it went through the floor and hit the ground which is about 18 feet below the bottom of the office (we’re on stilts…yay for being near a river and often seeing floods!). ***Ten minutes later*** Okay I’m back. I thought I was going to have to run home and um, take care of business, so to speak. And this was still just kissing with rather innocent touching!!!!!!! So they woke up still attached at the lips huh. I’m glad they can breathe through their noses. I have a tough time doing that when I sleep as I usually have half of my face buried in my pillow. lol I propose a fanfiction wet t-shirt contest in celebration of this cute shower scene. Have fun this weekend! =D
so darn cute!! i love this B/T couple! please post soon!!!
I’m not kidding, the soft kisses and “what have you done to me” made me sigh… Loved this part, more kissing, more I love u’s, so sweet.
Fantastic! Just wonderful! I was so pleased to see you’d updated and it certainly wasn’t a disappointment. You write so well and I love this story so very much. I can’t wait for more slow, gradual, beautiful moves towards more intimacy. Just love it. Thanks for updating, can’t wait for more.
long slow sweet torture….ahhhh just perfect….pls more, more, more…..
WOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! HOT!!!!!I think i need a really COLD SHOWER right now!!! Amazing… i can´t wait for the ‘love making session’ !!!!Thanks for this post! Have fun this weekend!!!
what a way to start a day, no need for coffee and krispy kream donuts (well, maybe later LOL)…i love they way they are so gentle with each other and i feel happier with htem just kissing…true love indeed…i wonder how i fell when they move beyong kissing ;)
YOU DID IT AGAIN. Luckily I’m at home, on the second floor, I run downstairs, hardly touching the steps…my wife is working in the garden…I grab her by the hand and want to urge her upstairs to the bedroom…ARE YOU F*CKING OUT OF YOUR MIND! she yells…I give her a kiss on the cheek, go upstairs and take myself to heaven on my own. That is what you do to me, aren’t you a shame?Een heel prettig weekend met je liefje en haar ouders. Geniet ervan.
You are such a good writter. I can’t believe how much build up you have put in your story. Make their first time special, because I think that however scared Tina is, Bette is moreso in freight of scaring Tina of. I think that they are both ready. Not in the shower though. Please in bed, romantic, sexy, in love, candlelight, all the fireworks. Have a beautiful weekend.
That was hot and sooo sweet at the same time… great fic,love the direction it’s going in so please post real soon.
good as always! Luck in your trip!
hey hey, that was very cute i loved it. I’ve been away for a couple of days and just caught up on your last chapter which i must say was also great. I love your B & T. Keep up the good work. Cheers :-)
B+T As always your work is beautiful.I wish I could write like U.Keep up the good work =)
hey just i loved this chapter hope to see you in the chatroom
Just so GREAT. Slow AND FUN just how it should be. Thankyou
see i knew it could not last!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you want to burn up my computer, slowly kill me do u work for the mob lol thanks for 6 pages it is sunday yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow – that was like magic – just amazing…keep going. Post soon