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    Split — Ch. 13

    ShAiN – I am pleased to know that you were impressed with that chapterhopefully this one will do the same.

    CFone – Haha, I think this yet another quick update, dont you think? My fingertips are dyingjust kidding. Hope you enjoy this one

    Amazed – Oh, yes, definitely a lot of going onand this chapter adds to that. Hahaand again, pleased to know that you are addictedit tells me Im doing something right. As for Le Tigreme tooand theres two more songs from them in this one! Enjoy

    california – I know..that scene was quite short I knowbut Ill make up for it later ;) . Anyways, I read your comment in the morning and saw that you wouldnt be able to read again til Saturday, so your comment pushed me to write this one quicklyalthough I think 4 hours have already passed.. oh darn. ~snaps fingers~



    Casa de Crazy: Part Three

    When I feel like I get too close I put you right down
    I never really leave, I just slip away
    Well, it’s not my purpose to break your spirit
    I’m not really interested in what’s in your heart
    I don’t want you to fall in love now, so please don’t start

    I only want you
    I only want you
    I only want you
    I only want you


    Bobbing her head to the music, Shane sat in a chair behind Carmen who worked the crowd with the music. She quietly laughed as Carmen would throw her arms in the air and start to dance for her. She bit her lip as she watched those curvy hips sway side to side. Carmen turned around and that finger of hers motioned for her to get up. Shane shook her head, although she could not help but smile at those dances moves of hers. Aw, come onnnnn, Carmen whined, grabbing both of Shanes hands to pull her up. Yet, Shane was still reluctant.

    I know that it’s terribly cruel but then I like it
    Because you try to love me you just can’t stay
    And I’m not gonna lie just to spare your feelings
    Cause watching you suffer feels much better to me
    I’m about to lay destruction on you
    I’m the lover man that you want me to be
    I said well

    I only want you
    I only want you
    I only want you
    I only want you


    Anna stumbled her way over, drunk as *****, Shane! WHY ARE YOU SITTING! GET YOUR ***** UP! She began to dance with Carmen, who of course did not mind.

    Shane finally stood up, but only to tend to Annas drunken self, Whoa Anna, I think you should sit down, take my seat”

    Not until you dance withME! she laughed haughtily and grabbed onto Shane. They moved around slowly, and then suddenly Annas grip went limp while Carmen kept dancing.

    Anna? Her eyes went wide, trying not to flail her arms too large since she had to keep her up, but it was enough to get Carmens attention, A little help here! She just passed out!

    Carmen walked over and looked at Anna as Shane held her up, Okay move her into the house. Get her to wake upsober up a little. And Ill check up in a few minutes. Dont let anybody notice shes out, theyll freak, seriously.

    Okay, Ill go do that Shane gulped as she looked at the heap of people she had to haul Anna through, but slowly and surely, Shane made it to the backdoor and she quickly set her down on the couch. Shane went to grab a bottle of water and some ibuprofen”knowing Anna would wake up with a major headache. She kneeled beside the couch, putting the bottle of water and pills on the floor as Anna slightly moved, Hey Shane reassured her with a hand on her arm. Then she started to snore softly, and Shane laughed, good night

    She sighed and patted down Annas hair softly before turning around to sit against the arm of the couch. Well, nothing like a party when the person who the party is for is knocked out.

    ***

    Tab sat in the back of the car, as Alice drove with Jenny trying to give her the directions. Tab rolled her eyes and put on her headphones to listen to some soothing music. However, she decides to give them her two cents, If its a big party then just listen for the ***** music, we should be close anyway

    Jenny looked back, Youre a genius!

    Tab scoffed, Right.

    Alice pulled into a nearby driveway, across from the house. Jenny laughed, Borrowing a strangers driveway, Alice?

    What? Itll be there tomorrow! Im only using it for a few hours. Alice sighed and unbuckled her seatbelt, Come on, time to party.

    Tab leaned back in her seat, On second thought, Ill stay here. Shane was serious about not seeing me ever again.

    Alice got out of the car and opened the back door, Look, its great that youre trying to obey what Shane said, but do you really want to pass up one great night over the fact that Shanes in there?

    Ive had enough parties in my lifetime already

    Jenny pushed Alice out of the way and warmed Tabs hand with hers, Come on stranger.

    Tab looked into her humble blue eyes and caved, *****, fine She put on her hood and shifted to get out of her seat.

    Aw dont do that, theyll think we want to rob the place, Alice said aloud. Tab groaned and placed herself back in her seat. Im just poking fun! The lack of sense of humor kills me these days.

    ***

    The television put Shane into a daze of boredom, while the party still went on outside. She sighed and grabbed Matthews drawing out of her pocket just to stare at it again. She heard footsteps come through the sliding door and she looked up, Hey, decided to finally check up?

    Yeah Whats that? Carmen asked, tilting her head at an angle so she could see it. She sat beside Shane who put the drawing on her lap. Carmen picked it up, reading the words, Me and my friendawwwhe likes you.

    Shane sighed, Yeah, the little runt likes meand Im okay with that.

    Carmen looked at Anna, who was still snoring, Still asleep, huh?

    And still snoring. Shane laughed and pulled her knees up so she could rest her arms and head on it.

    Tired? she rubbed small circles along Shanes back.

    Nahtonight is good. Last night was a *****. Until I got home of course

    Oh really? Whys that?

    Shane folded the drawing and put it back in her breast pocket, Well, it was rather tough had to help Tab out of this situation but its all over now. And weve also went our separate ways.

    Carmen looked at Shane, How do you feel about that?

    Shane pouted her lips and shrugged, Best thing to do. I dont want to deal with her anymore. She just brings ***** to my life. And I always have to get her out of ditches that she dug herself.

    ***

    [A few minutes earlier]

    Jenny hooked her arm around Tabs as they entered the open front door”Alice went her own way and went through the back. The house was empty, seems as though most of the action was out back. Tab pulled away from Jenny, Look, I like you, but youre a little too close for comfort right nowno offense. Im going to hang out in here you go mingle with Alice out back And if you see Shane, dont tell her Im here.

    Jenny sighed and folded her arms, Is it just your nature to push people away every ***** time they get close? I mean what the *****? Is it something you mooched off Shane? Im trying to be a friend. It seems like youre running low on those.

    Look, Im doing you and me a favor”Now listen dont get involved with me. Tab shook her head and walked into the kitchen, leaving Jenny to throw her hands up in air with frustration. Tab looked around to see the pictures along the walls in the hallway. She saw a television on in the distance. She sees Carmen walk in through the sliding door, and she jumps out of sight into the bathroom. Tab listened closely to the other voicea familiar tone. One she could never mistake for another. She cursed to herself, and then silenced herself as she overheard their conversation. Tired? Nahtonight is good. Last night was a *****. Until I got home of course Oh really? Whys that? Tab raised her eyebrow. Well, it was rather tough had to help Tab out of this situation but its all over now. And weve also went our separate ways. How do you feel about that?

    Tab stuck her head slightly out of the door to hear more clearly. Best thing to do. I dont want to deal with her anymore. She just brings ***** to my life. And I always have to get her out of ditches that she dug herself. She sulked her way quietly out of the bathroom to Shanes words. She walked back out through the front door and glanced over at the club like scene. Whats wrong with me I cant let Shane control how I feel I dont love her anymore wait, does that mean I did love her? ***** it. Not the time for that. Step by step, Tab immersed herself into the back. She grabbed a beer and guzzled it down, loving the atmosphere, Just like old times she muttered to herself.

    I take you home now watch me get you hot
    Your just a parrot when your screaming
    And your shouting “More crackers please, more crackers please”
    You want what you want but you don’t wanna be on your knees
    Who does your, who does your hair?

    Who took the Bomp from the Bompalompalomp?
    Who took the Ram from the Ramalamading dong?
    Who took the Bomp from the Bompalompalomp?
    Who took the Ram from the Ramalamading dong?


    Tab froze as she felt a hand creep up her back to grab her neck. She took in a gulp of air and glanced over her shoulder, and sighed, What the ***** is your problem, Jenny. I told you to stay away from me.

    No, you said dont get involved with me hahaha, Jenny said, mocking Tabs voice and nearly falling, but Tab kept her up.

    Tab eyed Jenny, Youre drunk.

    No *****, Sherlock, she spat in Tabs face. *****, sorry, I didnt mean to spit She leaned in to wipe it off, but ended up kissing her.

    ***

    Carmen patted Shanes thigh, Why dont you go back to the partyIll watch Anna.

    Shouldnt you go back to the party?

    Youre right, I probably should, she laughed and sat up, But you should go back tooI mean, Anna will be fine.

    Shane looked back at Anna, placed the bottle of water and pills next to her, Yeah, youre right She stood up, patted down her pants, and smiled, wrapping a playful arm around Carmens shoulder.

    They walked through the door, and slid it closed. Shane looked around, Well, looks like nobody noticed the absence of Annas presence.

    Carmen rubbed Shanes stomach with the palm of her hand, Hey, thats a good thingshes fine, and theyd be too serious about it. Im sure shell wake up in a few minutes.

    Shane nodded and examined the crowd; she raised her eyebrow as she saw what it seemed to be Alice dancing at the center of the crowd, What the fuckAl?

    Alice is here? Carmen followed Shanes stare. Hey, she is.

    Howd

    Carmen thought for a moment, She must be here with Jenny.

    Oh Shane said, and looked around for Jenny, Well, I dont see her

    Shes right there, Carmen pointed, shesall over someone.

    Shane looked down at Carmen, who sounded a bit disappointed, but ignored it to see for herself. Her eyes grew wide to see Jenny so wild; eating the face of whomever it is, hiding under that hood. Shane focused a little harder, the person looked so familiar. Her arm slipped off of Carmens shoulder, What the ***** is she doing here

    ***

    Tab pushed Jenny off of her and wiped her lips, What the ***** is your problem?!

    Jenny smirked as she regained her composure, You kissed back. Jenny looked passed Tab and saw Carmen along with Shane.

    Tab looked over and quickly looked back, *****, its Shane. I gotta go. Just as Tab was about to run, Jenny grabbed her wrist, Tab sighed Let me go.

    Uh huh.
    Got to, wanna, got to, wanna.


    ***

    Raise your hand. Raise your voice.
    Raise your head up from the desk.
    Look who’s here.
    Well well well.
    Guess it’s time.
    For show and tell


    Carmen raised her eyebrow as Shane began to walk off, Shane. Shane! She folded her arms and decided to follow her through the crowd. She grabbed her arm, and Shane looked back at her. Carmen sighed, So what if it is her?

    I told her I didnt want to see her anymore”

    Carmen rolled her eyes, Well shes not here to see you.

    Too bad, because I see her”

    Carmen rubbed her forehead, I dont get it Shane! Shes clearly trying her best to stay away from youso what your roads cross at some point? Shes not doing anything bad. Unless you feel something for her.

    Shane clenched her jaw and looked away, I dont feel anything at all. Im just going to talk to her.

    Fine. Carmen let go of Shanes arm as she watched her disappear into the crowd, and then to go her separate way back to the DJ table.

    ***

    Tab sat at the curb, smoking a cigarette as Shane walked up to her. Tab put her hand up without turning around to look at her, I know what youre going to say, Shane. You dont want to see me anymore. I know that. Its my last night here. Im just trying to have fun. Shane began a sentence but Tab cut her off, as she turned around to throw down the cigarette, Look, I let you talk last night, now its my turn. Just listen to what I have to say, okay?

    Shane slipped her hands into her pockets and mumbled a soft, Okay.

    Im sorry for putting you through my shitId like to blame Jamie for bringing me to the salonbut no. I never meant to see you again. I never meant to have you save my sorry ***** again. Im ***** sorry if my life is a piece of *****. God knows I should be dead right now. But Im not because of you. I realize that you got a great life going for you nowand me trying to be a part of that life”it just doesnt fit anymore. It is pulling you back down, and putting you through stuff that you shouldnt have to go through. So dont worry, Shane. Ill be gone soon. Nowgo back to the party

    Nah Shane squatted, took off Tabs hood, and grabbed a cigarette from the box, Im fine being herewouldnt hurt for old times sake.

    Tab scoffed, Nostalgic freak.

    Shane lifted her middle finger and smiled, ***** you.

    Oh your girlfriend definitely wouldnt like that.

    Shes not mine, Shane muttered.

    Tab laughed and shook her head, You know shes not going to wait forever.

    I know Shane took a puff of her cigarette.

    Well what the ***** are you waiting for?

    Shane looked up at the stars and held the cigarette close to her mouth, You know, thats a good question.

    ***

    [A few hours passed]

    Carmen guzzled down a beer as she saw Shane walk back into the scene with her arm around Tab. A fume of jealousy enraged her whole body”well hey, she just had that arm around her shoulder, and then it slipped off at the sight of the mysterious Tab. Alice walked over and elbowed Carmen, Arent they always a sight to see together? Theyre like equivalents. Carmen flashed an evil glare. Alice fixed her statement, But you and Shaneare likeopposites! And everybody knows opposites attract. Right? Right. Yeah okay, Im shutting up now.

    Yeah Carmen sighed and hung her headphones at her neck as she watched the two converse with each other. I dont get it. Theyre not doing anything bad, but Im sofuckingjealous.

    Alice nodded and saw Jenny, wanting to come over to talk to Carmen, Its lust. Youll get over it. But hey, it was a great party, she said, touching Carmens arm before walking off.

    Jenny walked up to Carmen slowly and waved her hand, Hey there

    I must sayYou look really wasted. Carmen smiled and looked down at her feet. HeyIm glad you showed up And brought company with you. I saw you kissing Tab.

    She held her head, beet red, Yeah, definitely wasted when I did that

    Wellhow was it?

    Jenny looked up, still holding her head, massaging her temple with two fingers, The kiss?

    Yes, Jenny, the kiss you had with the mysterious Tab.

    She thought for a moment, Different. She is different. Actually somewhat nice once you get to know herI think. But shes very protective of herself.

    Carmen looked over to see the equivalent pair, envy still at the pit of her stomach, I guess Ill have to get use to having two of those walking around.

    Jenny shrugged, Theyre just friends now. Theyre harmless together when friends. Well, from what Ive heard.

    I guess youre right.

    Well, Ive got to get going nowIll see ya around, Carmen.

    Carmen smiled, See ya, Jenny Carmen sighed as she let her cousin take over the DJ-ing for the rest of the party.

    And so it is
    Just like you said it would be
    Life goes easy on me
    Most of the time


    Carmen walked off to the side and bumped into a lovely mane of brown hair, and warm skin, Wow, Im sorry, I didnt see you there.

    The woman turned around, her mellow brown eyes gazed into Carmens deep soulful pair. The woman smiles, Well you see me nowits fine. Youre forgiven.

    And so it is
    The shorter story
    No love, no glory
    No hero in her sky
    I can’t take my eyes off of you
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    I can’t take my eyes off of you
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    I can’t take my eyes…


    Carmen blushed and bit her lip, Are you a friend of Annas?

    Whos Anna? The woman chuckles, Oh waitwell, I guess Im a friend of a friend of a friendits that sort of deal.

    Well, a friend of a friend of a friendDo you have a name? she said in awe of this woman.

    The woman leaned down and kissed her lips softly, this took Carmen by surprise, but it only intrigued her more. Yes, I do have a name

    Carmen smiled, flushed from the extremely soft kiss, Are you going to tell me?

    Should I? The womans thumb caressed Carmens cheek.

    Well Im CarmenI just gave you my name willinglyI think I deserve yours now The woman leaned into Carmens ear.

    ***

    And so it is
    Just like you said it should be
    We’ll both forget the breeze
    Most of the time
    And so it is
    The colder water
    The blower’s daughter
    The pupil in denial


    Shane gave Tab a friendly hug, So when are you really leaving?

    Tab shrugged, Im headed out tomorrowbut I still have a few things to settle down here before everything is permanent up north.

    Im sorry, Tab, I didnt want you to leave your home here.

    No dont get me wrong, haha, my home will always be here for me, Tab smiled, Its just not me anymore. I have to start fresh Be good, Shane.

    Shane watched her run off with Jenny and Alice. She turned to walk towards Carmen. She smiled, seeing that Carmen seemed to be fine again, no sign of jealousy through her expression. Then once a few bodies moved out of the way, she saw some woman kiss her, and Shanes jaw dropped. She looked to the ground, not believing her eyes, but only to get hit twice of the sight when she looked again.

    I can’t take my eyes off of you
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    I can’t take my eyes off of you
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    I can’t take my eyes…

    Did I say that I loathe you?
    Did I say that I want to
    Leave it all behind?


    Carmen pulled away from the woman, to stare into those entrancing eyes of hers. Beautiful name

    The woman nodded, Thanks. Yours is too With those last words, she walked away and vanished in the crowd quickly”just like how she appeared out of thin air.

    I can’t take my mind off of you
    I can’t take my mind off you
    I can’t take my mind off of you
    I can’t take my mind off you
    I can’t take my mind off you
    I can’t take my mind…
    My mind…my mind…
    ‘Til I find somebody new


    ***

    Shane grabbed the box of records and walked it back to the car, with Carmen trailing behind her. Carmen opened her mouth, trying to make a sound, but she didnt know what to say to break the silence. Shane put the records in the back seat and closed the door. Shane opened her passenger door, sat down, buckled her seatbelt and looked out of the window, without making eye contact with Carmen. Carmen felt the awkward silence, but did not dare to acknowledge it”for she is still caught in the moment with the captivating woman, whom seductively whispered her name into her ear. She knew that Shane could have seen the moment she had with the woman, but she saw Shane having a great time with Tab”even though it was just an innocent conversation. She gripped the steering wheel tight as she drove the both of them home in silence.

    Comments

    1. Dude, Dude, this story is still kicking some ass, i wonder who that chick that carmen kissed, although im pissed that she would kiss her, Shane certainly sees very jealouse, i lov it, keep writtings sweets

    2. Oh no don’t tell me it was Diane, no, no and no. I don’t want to. She’s gonna used her for revenge on Tab through Shane. Great update and just in time, but pay attation to those fingertip, they are precious.

    3. Man that was an exilent chapter! Is this gonna fuck up the relationship between Shane and Carmen?..I can`t seeme to make up my mind, but I think I rather want Tab and Shane to get together again…I`m absolutely loving this Crimsy;) Waiting for another chapter in exhitment! Thank you for writing

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