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Secrets – Chapter 11
I woke up with Bette’s body still pressed close to mine. I turned around to face her and smiled at the sight of her. She looked so peaceful and innocent as she lay with her eyes closed and her thick hair sprawled out over the pillow. I stroked her cheek and she stirred in her sleep before opening her eyes, squinting at the brightness of the room.
“Hey” she said in a groggy voice smiling at me.
“Hey” I leaned in and planted a soft kiss on her lips as she brought her arms around my hips pulling me in close. We lay there kissing for a while before I moved so that I was lying on top of Bette.
“I’m sorry” I whispered looking into her eyes.
She looked confused.
“For leaving…”
She looked at me intently before bringing me down for another kiss. As we broke the kiss I looked at her again “So does that mean I’m forgiven?” I smiled at her.
“Yes” she smiled “Just…” her voice cracked “Just don’t ever do it again ok?”
I stroked her hair back “I won’t”
“I was just so scared Tee…I…I didn’t know where you were or if you were ok or anything” she said with tears in her eyes.
“I’m sorry” I whispered as I leaned in and started kissing her slender neck. I found her most sensitive pulse point and Bette moaned as I started sucking it hard, leaving a mark. She was squirming beneath me, moving her hands over my ass dragging her fingernails over it.
I moved down to find her nipples already erect. I took one into my mouth as I moved my fingers over the other. I kissed between her breasts looking up at her.
“What do you want?” I asked in a low voice.
“Come here” she smiled.
I moved so that my face was just inches from hers. She brought her hand to the back of my head pulling me down for kiss. I moaned into the kiss and unconsciously started grinding my hips against her. Bette sneaked her hand down and started to slowly circle my clit.
“FUCK” I exclaimed as I threw my head back. Bette sat us up and licked from my neck to my ear breathing heavily into it.
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(14 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
Love that’s all, for the better and the worst!!! love it!!!
TY Great post :)
It would be interesting to see how they do after Tina returns from an isolated, secure environment to the rigors of real life.
Well, you could like skip years and then let them have a son or daughter that is obese…
last chapter? :( i just started reading your story and really enjoying it. maybe you can write about tina’s struggles while in rehab and bette terribly missing her. then how tina will cope once she returns to real world. then marriage and babies, lol.
well if the next chapter is the last chapter then go out with a bang!
Wonderful update. thank you.
Great chapter. Sad to know there is only one chapter left. As for suggestions, you could show her struggles at the clinic while in treatment; when Bette comes to visit her and the closeness that develops thru the struggle; show the successful outcome of the treatment that also delved into her background as to why this all started in the first place; show when she comes back home and if there are difficulties living at home and going through everyday life with Bette and their friends, the stress of the job situation if there is any and how it affects her now after her stay at the clinic; show how their relationship develops after she is back home, marriage, children, promotions, etc, etc, etc. Thanks for posting.
Only one more chapter?It´s a pity.Thank you for the update.PPS
Thanks, loved it.
That was hot and sweet, love it. Please post more, thanks!