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Savannah – Amber Eyes
Story written on June 4, 2012 by kins40.
Tina stared back at the beautiful soft brown eyes. She could not love her wife anymore at this very instant.
"Bahiya and Etana…" Tina choked out still under the spell of Bette’s gaze, pointing to the smaller cub she was holding first and then to the one which was doing his best to climb up and over Bette’s head to see what was behind her.
Bette smiled, grappling with the four legged wriggling fur ball, "Those are perfect names."
"I know," Tina smiled back, "I chose them with you in mind, beautiful and strong."
"Thank you and I love you," Bette gave as her reply. She stood up, gathering Etana before placing him gently on Tina’s lap. "I love you so very much," she repeated once again before placing a long soft kiss on Tina’s mouth. Her long soft brown hair fell forward as she did so, covering the two little cubs on Tina’s lap and causing them to sneeze in unison.
"Bless you!’ the two women laughed.
"I have to go now," Bette hinted, not really wanting to part, "I need to check in with Augustine and then go and see to Kipepeo. She did not go browsing with the rest of the herd this morning… so I need to know what’s up."
Tina frowned remembering with fondness the little orphaned cow, whose rescue she had been involved in.
Bette noticed the worry washing over Tina’s face. "I’m sure she will be alright, she is strong now.." she soothed, "Enjoy your walk and when you’re done, I want to see those two in the surgery to get checked out."
The vet blew the trio a kiss before disappearing.
Tina sighed as she watched her wife walk away. Then she looked back down at the two cubs propped up on their hind legs, front paws resting on her chest. It was as if they were asking what Bette’s words meant.
"Uh ..Oh… Looks like you two are in for your first visit to the vet..can’t guarantee that it won’t involve an injection or two!" she somewhat felt compelled to explain, firmly believing at the same time the two little faces who were looking at her expectantly winced at the word ‘injection’.
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I’m going to take a guess and say that Tina wants to start having kids. Awesome update K, brilliant as usual 😘
Did she say something like Tina wants a baby?
You are just a fantastic writer. Your prose is lyrical. Love, love, love, it.
oookay i have waited long enough now where is the next chapter kins??!! Please post soon. Thanks!! :D
Lovely update, what a terrific story! Thanks for posting.
Hope you enjoy it! – we do ! :)
I still say I will pay for anything you write. I adore your writing.
Amazing update..love this story!
That’s good and what did she say
Okay…so when do we find out what Augustine said!? Great story…I always look forward to your updates! Thank you!
I`m with Vegas513.This is an amzing story.Thank you.
Savannah is so wonderful, I was elated to see you put out a prequel and you have no disappointed. Wonderful, I can’t wait to read more about this Bette and Tinas life in the beautiful land of Africa. Thank you very much.
Great update. Believe it or not google did not give the translation. I found it on MSN. I don’t know what the Mpenzi means but, the rest of it translates to “the laughter of a child brightens the house.” In my comments of last chapter, I said, Tina needs her own babies. This was a fantastic chapter, as all your writings have, this one showed the very depths of their love for each other and what their love could mean for a child in their lives. Loved it. More please! Thanks so much for sharing.
Uhm that was not a nice thing to do – my swahili is a bit rusty to say the least..now you have us guessing all sorts of scenarios. You know, you have to update now..
Oh Kins!! Thanks for another amazing update. :-) LOL.. If only each time we do google translate then we get something in return besides the translation, I think we can support the sites more by this kind of story ;-) and even though I just got the translation, I will not post it here in respect of your wish :-p kekeke..
I have to admit that my suahili is not that good. So please update soon!!
Ah, yes, it is time for Bette and Tina to move into the next phase of their lives, Tina is ready to be a momma… That one was easy to figure out. I love this story and the deep love that these two women share with one another. I love the way you write and this story is one of my favorites. Thank you for creating this sequel. Thank you for the posting!
Wow, so Tina’s “clock” is ticking?… Awesome!…
Okay I translated that line so hahahaha that was funny I love you stories kins every single one
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for this excellent story. Can’t get enough of it.
Thanks so much for this chapter. The cubs are absolutely adorable and Tina is so sweet with them.I hope Augustine takes Bette’s advise and slows down a bit so that she doesn’t wear herself out. She’s a wonderful surrogate mother.
I read three chapters, and I confess that I loved it.
I love this story! Your write these characters beautifully, thank you!