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    Retaliation (A Bette Porter Story)- Part 9

    Shane could feel the tension between the two and decided to step in.

    So sit down stranger, Shane said.

    Well guys, Im already sitting over there with Mimi and Ivy and the gang.

    Tina knew what that meant. Layla was here. She acted like it didnt bother her and scooted closer to Carlie. This didnt go unnoticed by Bette.

    So youve ditched us already for new friends, Alice said scolding Bette.

    No, its not like that. They are just who I ran into first, Bette lied.

    I tell you what. Why dont you all come over and sit with us. There is a table next to us thats empty.

    They all just looked at each other.

    Come on guys it will be fun. Its Mimi, Ivy, and a few of their friends.

    Tina thought to herself, Their friends. Now Layla is their friends. She wasnt two nights ago Bette. She was a close friend of yours too.

    Sure why not, Shane said. They all started gathering up their drinks except for Tina and Carlie.

    Come on Tina. Dont start this *****, Alice said. We are here to have fun.

    I promise I wont bite you Tina, Bette said with a smirk

    Tina glared at Bette, then turned to Carlie. It looked like she was asking Carlie, with just her eyes, if she wanted to go. Carlie shrugged her shoulders and they got up.

    The whole group made their way over to Bettes other table. When they got there Mimi and Ivy introduced the whole group to each other. Kim, Vee, and Layla to Alice, Shane, Dana, Tina and Carlie.

    When Mimi went to introduce Layla to Tina, Tina said Weve already met. Mimi was a little too blitzed to ask where they had met before and neither did the rest of the gang, but Bette caught it and so did Carlie. Carlie just looked at Tina wondering where the ***** she could have met Layla before, but she didnt say anything.

    Shane and Alice pushed all the tables together and they all sat down. Since most of the group knew each other it went well. It was just like a whole bunch of friends just chatting and drinking. Layla and Bette were sitting next to each other and Tina was watching their subtle movements. When Layla would laugh she would touch Bettes shoulder. And Bette kept doing this winking thing at Layla. Tina was getting more pissed by the second. She decided to retaliate. She took Carlie by the face and started slobbing her down. It went on so long it got the attention of everyone at the table. Bette was just looking at them mortified by what she was seeing.

    ***** Tina, go get a room, Alice said playing.

    Maybe we will, Tina said looking at Bette.

    Bette looked down and she could feel Layla rub her leg under the table trying to comfort her. Just then Dana jumped up.

    That is my song. It was Yeah by Usher.

    Come on everybody lets go dance.

    Everybody jumped up and started making their way to the dance floor. Layla grabbed Bette by the hand, Come on and dance with me. Bette reluctantly stood up and followed her to the dance floor. Layla got extra close to Bette. She was rubbing Bettes shoulders and grabbing her by the waist so they could feel each other. Tina was watching them the whole time.

    Carlie, do you want to dance?

    Sure.

    When Tina got on the floor she stopped right next to Bette and Layla.

    She instantly started grinding her ***** into Carlies hips making sure Bette could see her. She then turned around and was running her hands up and down Carlies thighs and grabbing her *****. Bette was getting mad. She knew what Tina was doing and it wasnt necessary. Okay Tina, I see you want to play.

    Right then she turned Layla around and started grinding her from the back. Bette raised Laylas arm up and started running her hand down the length of Laylas arm while she held Layla tight around the waist with her other arm. It was looking too ***** because Layla had her eyes closed and it looked erotic.

    Just then that song went off and the DJ yelled out, We got a double play of Usher. All you couples get ready to slow drag to Burn. Bette and Tina were still breathing kind of hard to the last song, but they still had their eyes on each other.

    The song began to play:

    [Intro]
    Girl, understand why
    See it’s burning me to hold onto this
    I know this is something I gotta do
    But that don’t mean I want to
    What I’m trying to say is that I-love-you I just
    I feel like this is coming to an end
    And its better for me to let it go now than hold on and hurt you
    I gotta let it burn

    [Verse 1]
    It’s gonna burn for me to say this
    But it’s comin from my heart
    It’s been a long time coming
    But we done been fell apart
    Really wanna work this out
    But I don’t think ya gonna change ya
    I do but you don’t
    Think it’s best we go our separate ways
    Tell me why I should stay in this relationship
    When I’m hurting baby, I ain’t happy baby
    Plus theres so many other things I gotta deal with
    I think that you should let it burn

    [Chorus]
    When your feeling ain’t the same and your body don’t want to
    But you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain’t jumpin’ like it used to
    Even though this might bruise you
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    Deep down you know it’s best for yourself but you
    Hate the thought of her being with someone else
    But you know that it’s over
    You know that it was through
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    [Verse 2]
    Sendin’ pages I ain’t supposed to
    Got somebody here but I want you
    Cause the feelin ain’t the same find myself
    Callin’ her your name
    Ladies tell me do you understand?
    Now all my fellas do you feel my pain?
    It’s the way I feel
    I know I made a mistake
    Now it’s too late
    I know she ain’t comin back
    What I gotta do now
    To get my shorty back
    Ooo ooo ooo ooooh
    Man I don’t know what I’m gonna do
    Without my booo
    You’ve been gone for too long
    It’s been fifty-eleven days, um-teen hours
    Imma be burnin’ till you return (let it burn)

    [Chorus]
    When your feeling ain’t the same and your body don’t want to
    But you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain’t jumpin’ like it used to
    Even though this might bruise you
    Let it burn (let it burn, let it burn, you gon’learn)
    Let it burn (gotta let it burn)
    Gotta let it burn

    Deep down you know it’s best for yourself but you
    Hate the thought of her being with someone else
    But you know that it’s over
    you know that it was through
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    [Bridge]
    I’m twisted cuz one side of me is tellin’ me that I need to move on
    On the other side I wanna break down and cry (ooooh)
    I’m twisted cuz one side of me is tellin’ me that I need to move on
    On the other side I wanna break down and cry (yeah)

    [Breakdown]
    Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh oooh
    Ooh ooh oooh (can ya feel me burnin’?)
    Ooh ooh ooh oooh ooh oooh

    So many days, so many hours
    I’m still burnin’ till you return

    [Chorus]
    When your feeling ain’t the same and your body don’t want to
    But you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain’t jumpin’ like it used to
    Even though this might bruise you
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    Deep down you know it’s best for yourself but you
    Hate the thought of her being with someone else
    But you know that it’s over
    You know that it was through
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    >>

    Mimi and Ivy, Kim and Vee, Alice and Dana had all stayed on the floor slow dancing. Shane jetted. Both Tina and Bette stayed on the floor with their partner. How they were facing, Bette and Tina were looking dead at each other, while Carlie and Layla had their backs to each other. They couldnt see the exchange of looks Bette and Tina were giving each other while the song was playing. They had no way of knowing how much the lyrics to this song summed up their relationship at this point. Tina basically told Bette last night to let their relationship burn. Something in Bette didnt believe her though so she decided to go all the way and test Tina. She took Laylas face in her hands and started kissing her deeply. Tina could feel the blood rushing out of her face. Enough of this *****. She let go of Carlie and went and grabbed Bette by the arm.

    Bathroom. Now, she said looking directly at Bette.

    Carlie and Layla was just looking at them.

    Tina Im dancing. Give me a minute.

    Now Bette!

    Bette just looked at Tina. She could see how serious she was.

    Layla spoke, Go ahead Bette. Ill be over at the table when you get back.

    Tina, what are you doing? Carlie said confused by Tinas behavior.

    Ill be right back Carlie. Dont worry, I just need to talk to Bette for a second.

    Carlie just threw her hands up and walked off the dance floor. Tina didnt care, she would deal with Carlie later.

    Tina pulled Bette all the way in the bathroom. There were two girls already in there giggling while freshening up.

    Get out, Tina screamed at them.

    Who are you talking to? one of the girls said.

    Im talking to you so get out now before I throw you out.

    They could see that Tina wasnt nothing to play with at this moment. They both gathered up their items quick and ran out.

    Tina turned and locked the door behind them and turned back to Bette.

    What the ***** do you think youre doing Bette?

    Bette stood there shocked. You cant be serious Tina?

    Bette you wouldnt believe how serious I am right now. Why are you tonguing down some woman you just met? Are you that loose?

    Bette started to laugh. Tina you are drunk and this is humorous.

    I am not drunk Bette, Tina yelled.

    Okay Tina, you need to calm down. Must I remind you that you started that ***** on the dance floor. You were obviously trying to upset me. Not to mention the all out make out session at the table. What was that Tina, huh? Whats good enough for you isnt good enough for me? Stop being a damn hypocrite.

    Hypocrite. Me, a hyprocrite. Youve got to be kidding me Bette. Just yesterday, you were ready to throw that little huzzie to the wolves, but tonight you got your tongue all down her throat.

    Bette was really starting to get upset. You know what Tina, thats enough. Ive had it with your games. I never would have thought you would have stooped so low.

    They just stood there looking at each other.

    Goodnight Tina.

    Before Bette could get by Tina, she grabbed Bette by the arms and pulled her to her. They were so close they could feel the heat of each others breath. Tina grabbed Bette by the head and pulled her in for the most desperate kiss of her life. Bette was surprised but she went with it. They were urgently rubbing their hands all over each other. Tina had grabbed Bettes *****, and Bette was rubbing Tinas *****. They didnt want to let go of each other, and they were fighting the urge to want to separate enough to breath. Bette backed Tina up to the locked door. She lifted up Tinas shirt and pulled her bra to the side so she could take in Tinas rosy nipple that was hardened stiff.

    Ohh God Bette, Tina moaned.

    She was running her hands through Bettes hair while she was sucking on her breast.

    Ohh T, its been so long, Bette said coming back up to Tinas face. Tina didnt want to waste no time talking. She started unbuttoning her pants while they engaged in another kiss. Bette pushed Tinas pants and panties down to her knees. She went right for Tinas womanhood. She entered Tina easily with 2 fingers.

    Uhhhh, they both said together. Bette was rapidly going back and forth inside Tina. She was so warm around her fingers that Bette could have came just off that alone. Tinas back was banging hard against the door, but they were oblivious to how much noise they were making.

    ***** me Bette. Harder. Bette took another finger and put it inside of Tina.

    Tina you feel so good, Bette whispered in Tinas ear. Since she was there she decided to stick her tongue in Tinas ear.

    Tina was getting weak. Her legs were starting to give way.

    Is this what you like Tina? Youve been waiting for me to ***** you.

    Uhh huh, Tina moaned unable to speak with all that was going on in her lower extremities.

    Bette couldnt believe this was happening. She had wanted Tina again so bad, she wasnt even thinking about what she was doing. She had always pictured them two making love again for the first time in their home. Not in some bathroom in a club. It wasnt right and she knew it. She slowly stopped moving her fingers inside of Tina.

    No Bette, dont stop. Im almost cumming. Please keep going, Tina pleaded.

    No Tina. I dont want it like this. If we are going to do this, I want to do it right. I want you at home in our bed.

    Bette lets just finish and we can talk about it. Tina was starting to come back to the world.

    No Tina. I love you and Im not going to do it like this.

    Tina was just looking at Bette. She felt anger starting to well up in her again.

    ***** it then Bette. Just forget it.

    Bette looked at Tina. Her fingers were still inside of her. She put her face up to Tinas.

    ***** it? Is that all you can say Tina? Im thinking about us and our future. But obviously you dont care about that.

    She rammed her fingers all the way up into Tina again.

    Tina inhaled sharply.

    ***** it huh? Bette said still looking at Tina. No Tina, thats what I just did to you.

    With that statement she pulled out of Tina and pulled her hand up beside both of their faces. “You see this Tina.”

    Tina turned and could see her juices oozing down Bettes wrist.

    Can Carlie do this to you? Can she Tina? Bette said with a smirk on your face. See Tina your body betrays you. You say you dont want me anymore, but look at my hand and fingers Tina. She got close to Tinas ear. No matter who you are with Tina, your body belongs to me. Only I can ***** you good enough to make this happen.

    She backed off of Tina a little and looked at her hand. She took all three fingers that she had inside of Tina and put them one by one in her mouth.

    God, you taste so good Tina, she said closing her eyes. I almost had forgotten.

    She opened her eyes and saw Tina looking at her. It wasnt anger that she saw looking back neither. Tina was looking at her with pure lust and desire.

    Umm, Umm, Umm, Bette said taking her finger out of her mouth. She walked over to the paper towel dispenser and grabbed some so she could wipe her arm off. Tinas juices had ran all the way down to her elbow.

    Dont worry Tina, Im not going to rinse you off me with water. I want to have your smell on my hand for the rest of the night.

    Tina just stood there shocked by what Bette was saying and doing. She was so turned on, she wanted to jump on Bette again.

    I know that look Tina. Ive seen it a million times. I know you want me so bad you can taste it, but Im not going to give it to you.

    She got close to Tina again. When youre ready to stop playing games, you know where I live.

    With that she grabbed for the door and unlocked it. Before she opened it she turned to Tina. You really should pull up your pants and underwear. That could be real embarrassing for you if someone is waiting to come in.

    Bette half smiled and opened the door slowly so Tina could move out of the way.

    Goodnight Tina.

    Tina just stood there as the door closed behind Bette. She couldnt believe what had just happened. She knew then that Bette wasnt nothing to play with. And especially not the old Bette Porter.

    Comments

    1. You are just un fucking believable that the bette I know and love. Tina is so in awe of bette, is she going to dump carlie right then and there or is she going to act stubborn.damn girl you are too good.bette is like a drug tina knows she has to have more!! soon post soon!!!

    2. I am always patient, but you now have to put up another chapter
      asap. This is a page turner, on the edge of my seat. This is just TOO GOOD!!! TOTALLY INTENSE.

    3. OH MY MY! They’re little getting-each-other jealous dance was hot… erotic dance. Not to mention Tina getting mad after all the stunt she pulled. And the short fuck session in the bathroom. I also like the fact that Bette didn’t let her dignity get bulldozed by Tina just because she’s on the wrong side. Damn girl, this chapter Rocked! It’s just too good.. thanks for the quick post by the way. Thanks for your time too.. can’t wait for the next one! (WINK)

    4. Okay that did it. I’m just going to go ahead and give you my opinion. Just mine and nobody else’s so I hope no other author takes offense. You are the best writer on here! Your originality and creativity are too much. I never would have guessed the chapter would have went in this direction. It’s priceless. This was scorching hot. Waiting for your next chapter.

    5. Believe that Ms porter is fed up with Tina shit, Let her have a good time tonight with Layla. Let Tina stew in her own juice Pun intended. Hot hot story. More more more Dont let Tina mess Up Bettesevening .

    6. HELL YEA!!! This is the Bette we know and love, Tina better quite playing games and get her wife back before its to late. Love this story, so HOT…..can’t write now, cold shower needed!!Fantastic.

    7. INTENSE……….Well It’s time for Tina to pee or get off the potty. OMG Bette Porter is back in all her glory………No more feeling sorr y for herself. GREAT CHAPTER

    8. NOW this is the Bette I like to read about this Tina has to make a choice follow Bette home pronto.
      I just came home form running think I going back out again.FANTASTIC writing!
      Did I mention my monitor just had a heartattack.WOOOO

    9. Bettefan- you mentioned that you would of nevered quessed that tgis chaptr would never gonr in this direction? Just read the previous titled, and this is Retalliation? Especially what Tina saw Friday Night with Bette and Layla Not to Mentioned in their Home. This chapter expressed all the Angier that Tina has pent up for Bette since their last Night and we know how Tina reacted towards Bette by Biting her and Hitting her and finally having that dysfuncitional sex. Will tonight was just the same, but Bette went along with it with her Angier. Next chapter I just hope that the next chapter will be Reconcillations?

    10. Karma, you’re my choice of drug.You got me hook.This chapter is smoking hot.Please let Bette have a steamy sex with Layla tonight. Tina is too mean to Bette. Layla,in other hand,seems really care for Bette. I love this Bette.

    11. Great chapter karma!!, but I find it really funny how everyone is saying that tina needs to stop playing games and stuff when they know they would act the same way if their wife cheated on them..I mean you have emotions right? they &$^() with you..you can’t help it….ne ways…post soon!

    12. Wow. This is the best. I love the direction you are taking Bette in. Although I love Tina, how many times can Bette say she is sorry? I love the desire in Tina I would love to see her go to Bette and beg!!

    13. That was like The War of The Worlds,
      Bette can bring it when she needs to.
      Wow! Good work!
      I feel a little sorry for Carlie. Layla knows the score already. I don’t blame Tina for not wanting to get hurt again and moving on but she needs to get real with herself. Bette has shown Tina that no other woman will do. That song was perfect for the scene.
      How will they get gracefully through the rest of this night out?

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