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Reflection
Previously:
When I finally came down and relaxed onto the bed, my body felt heavy, like I couldn’t move if I wanted to. I was comforted by her weight on top of me, like she was shielding me from an outside force. I felt her stroke my cheek wanting me to open my eyes.
“Wow, that was…I’ve never come that fast or hard before” I hadn’t. Not like that. We had barely just begun and I was gone.
“That was just the beginning T.”
Tina’s P.O.V.
Just the beginning, I could hardly move and she was talking about going again! Then again I was getting a second wind…
“At least give me a second to catch my breath.”
“Sure baby, you just lay back and relax. I’m gonna explore a little bit.” She wiggled her eyebrows at me comically and I couldn’t hold in my giggle.
She started with the little hollow behind my ear. She nuzzled a bit and I could feel her breathe in deep. When she finally licked me there I felt a shudder run through my body. She felt it too because her lips stretched into a smile against my neck and she did it again. I shuddered again.
“I’ll have to remember that” she whispered almost inaudibly. Yes please remember that, and do it again. And again and again and again. I loved that the softest touch from her can make me melt. She pressed her knee between my legs and my eyes immediately shot open. I was still so sensitive down there and the sudden contact sent me reeling. I know I was staring at the ceiling, but I didn’t see anything, my mind could only register the slightest movement of her well toned thigh. I started to grind myself against her, my copious wetness coating her skin. On my third grind I felt her still my hips and I whimpered without even realizing it. I didn’t want to stop, not now, not ever.
“Slowly T, I want to make it last.” Her lips were on my neck then and she bit me lightly and sucked my pulse point into her mouth. My thighs clenched and I started to grind again but her hands held me still. I let out a frustrated sigh, torn between drawing out my pleasure and needing release. I willed myself to relax, to let her have control. She knows what she’s doing Tina, clearly. I gripped the sheet with my right hand and the velvety skin of her shoulder with my left. My chest was heaving with every breathe that I took and she hadn’t even made it past my neck. I didn’t know how much more I could take.
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(50 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
damn HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
powerful only word my brain can find at the momment
Only I can say Is Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOT
You have certainly brought these NC-17’s to a new level…I can hear your audience panting for the next, can you? The beauty is that you have a great story going along with this…thanks!
It’s quite obvious that the past hour I spent trying to become centered and grounded was certainly a waste of my time. I am now so out of balance and uprooted that I can barely breathe. In fact, like bluesf said, I’m panting. It’s like I’ve just run a few miles but I haven’t, I’ve been right here. Well, that’s not totally accurate. You indeed took me somewhere & now I need a cigarette. Okay, I don’t smoke but I need something…Damn.
Wonderful detail and imagery. Loved it. You still in school? Chuck it!! Just kidding (again).
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it. Damn what an amazing chapter, let see what’s next. Thanks!
PHEW! ok in slowly recovering…lol i have to tell you you are one talented writter that was awesome, tho after your last few chapters i knew it would be! delighted your continuing with a few more ill go to bed smiling tonight…lol thanks
OMFG!!! This is so hot, my monitor is steaming…I’ll send you the bill for the new one!!!!!
quite satisfying. Thank you.
OMG, like how am I suppose to get anything done now. Damn Porter your reputation is so well derserved. Can’t wait for Tina to recriprocate, but I think I better read that one at home. Just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo HOT.
OMG!!! I can’t move from my chair ’cause my jaw is lying in the way!!! that was incredible!!! thanks!
Wow! You’ve got an amazing talent. I’ll say it again..WOW!!!
holy mother of god..that was unbelievable hot!! damn ayns!!
CURIOUS & MOONSHADOW – holy mother of god is right.
ayns – my legs are clenched so tightly together that i dont think ill be able to move even if i wanted to. god dayum.
DAMN! After reading this, I am so turned on, my girl would be in trouble….
So glad you decided to make this an endless amount of chapters, “Cold Shower” Award Contender it is then!
OMG… yeah tina.. go get her… hmmmmmm… so glad your continuing…
W.O.W. You made me giggle and blush like some virgin instead of a 27 year old woman who has had sex before….
You don’t have to worry about us reading anything you write…we will be here anxiously awaiting a new chapter..and now I will get up and splash cold water on myself. that was hot.
(Note to self)..stop reading the “naughty” chapters at work. That was HOT HOT HOT!!!
I need to drop my husband and get me a woman like Bette…lol. That was realy HOT!
Oh my God…that was awesome and I loved the detail that you provided. I was actually on-line reading this when I was watching my tape of season 2 and Tina popped on the screen giving me an even better visual of how she looks! Wow – glad I didn’t read it at work!
OMFG!!! Woman you are killing us!!! More soon….goodness!! How am i suppose to get any work done?
Where to begin? I found this site in May 04 and have read dozens and dozens of NC17’s and enjoyed most of them (hard not to enjoy a NC17, lol).
However, what I appreciate most about your NC17’s and your writing in general, is that it’s not about the act of sex, it’s about the acts of love, longing and that shared place of intimacy that is reserved for two.
Thank you for your time and creativity. You are gifted. This chapter was truly incredible, it will rank as one of my all time favorites. Again Ayns, again.
Let Tina give Bette as good as she gave, Go for it Tina. Thanks
Bloody hell, hot, hot, hot!! I’ve just called my girlie and ordered her home…. Certainly pleased that you will be continuing this line of penmanship. Cheers luv.
jks tipped me off to your story holy smokes I think I held my breath for the whole story and WOW WOW WOW was that HOT!!!!!