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    Pretty Women, episode 5

    Story written on August 11, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=62033
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    ‘Don’t talk just…’ A Bette and Tina beginning based on the movie ‘Pretty Woman’

    Hey… Whats wrong?

     

    Tenderly the young mother stroked the brunnettes cheekbone, capturing her chocolatbrown eyes with her own hazel ones, while letting her hands slide over Bettes strong bare arms untill theys hands met and their fingers entwined… A feeling of completeness filled Tina as she rose, and pulled Bette up. She felt the onepiece outfit that had been resting on her hips slide down, revealing a triangle of black fabric that matched her bra. The brunette gasped and followed the other womans gorgeously shaped legs as she stepped out of the garment.

     

    Bette was not a woman who had been speechless many times in life. After her 10th birthday she had always known what to say and when to say it, even to Alice who had been known for her sharp tongue and quick mind. But now her mouth seemed made for so many other things that talking was the least important. She looked down at her hands, and somehow not being able to make out with fingers belonged to whom made her heart jump… She looked up, and saw something in those hazel eyes, something she longed for…

     

    Care…

     

    Bette’s voice sounded hoarse when she answered the question that Tina had uttered earlier but that were still in her eyes…

     

     Nothing’s wrong… Nothing at all…

     

    Tina let out a quivery sigh… She had interpreted Bette’s behaviour as hesitation, and the thought of not being able to sleep with the gorgeous brunette made her sad… Because she knew this night would be all they could ever share. The relieve when she saw the desire in those chocolatebrown eyes made her heart pound heavily against her chest as she began to lead the gorgeous woman to the bed.

     

    Bette’s knees were shaking as if she was about to make love for the first time… The brunette blinked at her mind’s choice of words. Love… The same amount of letters as that other word she had been mesmerized by… Tina… She tried to shake off the thought, but couldn’t shake off the feeling this beautifull hazeleyed woman was giving her, and she surrendered to it, drowning in Tina’s eyes…

     

    Tina had never experienced a bond like this one.. A bond just by holding hands and looking into eachothers eyes… They just stood there for a while, taking in eachothers beauty. Tina let her fingertips follow the muscles of Bettes arms, and couldnt get enough of the feeling that gave her. The brunettes lips folded into a smile when the caring, sweet touch became ticklish. And the velocity of her reaction startled Tina. With one smooth motion she threw the fake-redhead on her back on the bed, quickly covering her with her own body.

     

    Bette’s hands on each side of her face, those beautifull full lips only inches away from her own, their breasts, still captured in the tantalizing fabric, rubbing agains eachother, Tina let out a sigh. The urge to kiss Bette was almost beyond control, but the young mother knew that she would be lost if she did.

     

    Yet the space between them minimized… Too slow and too quick at the same time…

     

     

     

    ———————- TBC ——————-

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    6. Yehaaa I’m doing my happy dance here M, you did indeed keep your promise and fast, thanks. I can see you’re still a BIG tease LOL, but the tension you’ve created between our girls is just amazing and full of magic, I love it. The only problem with this post is….now I want more :o)) and it’s ok if it’s not NC-17 (did I just say that!!!! LOL. A big hug back to you.

    8. Oh man, YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!!!!!!! Is that how you treat your long waited fans! I really missed your stories. Please let them kiss! Great chapter, please post more often. :)

    9. Where is the dance floor? I wan’t to happy dance to.Where have you been i was going through post withdrawl syndrom lol (that must be a dieses right?).please post again soon. =)

    12. wow! you did it! i thought that you will take more time in post but here is a wonderful chapter, what a way to let me hook! you are a big teaser! but i think that you enjoy so much make us suffer waiting for the NC17 chapter. thanks for the post! take care!

    14. Ohh you are soo bad for leaving us like this….jesus. Glad to see your post again – I missed it and I love this story and I want more so please continue. Soon I hope, post soon

    16. Ok… I kno it seems silly to leave a comment to your own story LOL But I forgot to thank my friend Lu for her contibution in this story by a word she taught me… Thank you for the mesmerizing word Lu!

    22. I just found this story and I love it…Pretty Woman is one of my all time favorite movies and I love your spin on it. Now that I have found this story…please post soon.

    26. Ok JLBT, its been a long time my friend and good to see you back. You know when the moment of B&T get excited and hot and I say to myself oh this is what Im (we) talking about and waiting for and Im getting so excited here and then bOOm the next thing I know is you leave us hanging just like that, not nice my friend lol, you such a tease and hope you will post soon, thanks!

    27. AAAARRRGGGHHHHH!!! this was the 1st story since 8:45am ish this moning and it was a shcok to see it there and fun to read, but was sad to only get 2 pages and to b teased with promises of an NC17……WHEN OH WHEN WILL IT B POSTED????!!!!!!!!

    28. Ahhh.. you’re back.. I was just thinking and missing your stories dearly :D Oh wow.. this is HOT!! You’re such a big tease you know that? Please continue soooooooooon~~~

    29. !!!!! I was on the verge of my sit waiting for the kiss!!!! I have to admit it, the whole moment was sensual, don’t know how you do it but I know your readers never get bored.

    30. WoW…I’ve just read all your chapters of Pretty Woman…and I just love your writing style babes! I can’t believe I havent read your stuff before! I must remember to say thank you to Dani for getting you to PM me!!! You’ve got a fan for life now! :) Can’t wait for the kiss! Ok, I’m off now to start your other fic! Thanks.

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