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Part 23: The Rain (Alice & Dana)
New York and get her back because she’s getting married!! I think she’ll be happy
that your gonna be there!! So just ***** take my car and I wish you happiness for
the rest of your ***** damn life!!
Alice turned around and carried on walking.
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At The Planet…
Shane, Carmen, Bette and Tina were sitting drinking their coffee. It was raining harder
than before. There was a flash of lightening.
Shane: I have a bad feeling.
Tina: Me too.
Carmen: It’s raining so hard.
Bette: Something bad just happened.
They all nodded.
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Dana chased after Alice, they were both soaking wet. Dana finally caught up to Alice
and ran in front of her and gave her a hug. Alice tried to break from it but Dana
was too strong.
Dana: Alice I’m sorry. Please forgive me. I’m really sorry.
Alice, crying as hard as the pouring rain, felt the warmth of Dana’s body. She felt
that her head was aching really badly.
Dana: (crying) It didn’t mean anything. I love you, Alice. I love you, it didn’t mean
anything. I’m sorry.
Alice head hurted, her eyes rolled back and she fell unconscience. Dana felt Alice’s
body was slipping and she got heavier.
Dana: Alice?
Dana realised that Alice’s eyes were closed. She stroked Alice’s hair and felt that her
temperature was awfully high.
Dana: Alice?!
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At The Planet..
They were all still sitting there, looking at eachother. Finally Shane took a deep breath
and stood up.
Shane: I can’t take it anymore.
Carmen: What?
Shane: I know something’s wrong and we all know that it’s about Dana and Alice. I’m
gonna go look for them.
Bette: Your right. We’re coming too.
Tina: Okay, babe. Let’s go.
Carmen: Okay.
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Dana carried Alice’s limpless body back to the car. She didn’t care how heavy she
was, Alice was sick, very sick.
She put Alice inside and closed the door. She hopped in the drivers seat and started
the car.
Dana glanced at Alice every five seconds, making sure if she’d woken up. She put
her hand on Alice’s forehead and it felt like her temperature was getting higher and
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(34 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
I love it and can’t wait to see what happens next with them please post soon
oh the drama… the good new is that you post everyday, waiting for the next, thanks.
Don’t leave hanging for too long! Really good!
hey this is good. I really like it!!! hope you´ll go on soon!!