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Over me: chapter 2
Gradually she slowed against me and then wearily pulled away, slumping onto her sofa as if she hadn’t rested for days. All I could do was stand watching her as she put her head in her hands and ran her fingers through her blonde locks. I was about to go to her, to try and make things right somehow, when the unmistakeable sound of her doorbell rang out shattering the tense silence.
Alice’s head jerked up, her tear-streaked face was panic-stricken. Not knowing what else to do I ran into the bathroom and locked the door behind me, my heart racing so fast I felt dizzy.
I heard the deep tones of a male voice echoing through the apartment, and realised with a sinking feeling that it must be Alice’s boyfriend. I listened hard, as his voice, joined by Al’s grew softer.
I could barely hear Ethan when he said: "You’ve been crying."
I pressed my ear as hard against the door as I dared. Alice was speaking.
"…out of the blue, that’s all."
"Come here." Ethan again.
There was a pause and I realised they were probably kissing. Jealously twanged sharply in my chest. Why shouldn’t they kiss? She’s with him now, not you. Yeah, and who’s fault is that? I thought bitterly.
There was silence and then I heard footsteps getting louder and louder… shit. I listened harder and then stepped back abruptly from the door. They were mere inches away now.
"Have a shower after dinner, baby… please?" Alice. I silently nodded behind the door.
"I’m all sweaty, Al."
"I like you sweaty."
I actually heard them kissing this time, and found myself wishing for premature deafness.
"Mmmm… ok, ok, you’ve convinced me. I’m gonna go get out of these clothes though."
More kissing. Then footsteps and Alice, further away: "Cool. I’ll be in in a minute."
I let out the breath I’d been holding. The floorboards creaked outside the bathroom door and there was a light but urgent tap on the door.
"Open up!" Alice hissed.
I did as I was told.
She looked pissed. Very pissed.
"You have to go. Now!" She grabbed my arm and quickly led me to the door.
"Al?" I was outside the apartment now and the door was closing on me rapidly.
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(25 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
This is awesome. I feel like I should go crawl into a hole in shame. You’re great at this, and I really hope you post soon because this story is officially one of my new addictions!
I love it too and can’t wait to see where you take this! So please post soon:) Fantastic work!
That was a real good chapter!! I soo cant wait to see what happens next soo PPS
Really good. There just can’t be enough Danish in this world. Keep up the good work!
Get these soul mates together soon! Oh, but wait, drama, no matter how much it is hated, makes for a good story! Just dont kill off Dana, and I think I’ll be able to handle anything you throw at us until you get Danish together…which you better! :-)
Awesome! Update soon!
I can’t wait to see what happens next with Dana and Alice!! I’m really enjoying this!! PPS!
Great update! I am loving this story! PPS
loved it! :)
this was great, but too short. : ) post more soon!
YAY!!!! I love new Danish fics & especially good ones … which fortunately this happens to be. Can’t wait until the next post.
Crap! Dana is in big trouble… :S So many choices to make for someone whos having a hard time making then :S
Really like this story. Cant wait to see where it goes xx