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Out of Hatred to Love – 12
Chapter 12
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Helena : I know what you want Bette and I agree with you, this isn’t only based on lust but I can’t help myself. You’re a very attractive woman and when I’m with you you drive me crazy and I can’t resist you. It’s a lot stronger than myself, bloody hell even thinking about the two of us the other day wets my pants. It felt so good Bette your body is so soft and your mouth damn I can still feel your mouth on my body.
Bette : yes I know what you mean cause I feel the same way and I can’t get my mind off how your lips felt on my body and how it responded to your touch. Gosh I’m getting all hot out here. I need to go inside and take another shower and take care of some business
Helena : oh … well I wish I was there now to take care of your business.
Bette : yeah I wish you were to bad though. Bye Helena
Helena : bye darling, have a nice shower and night
Bette closed her cell and headed back to the shower for the second time that day as she suddenly felt her body respond to the steamy conversation she had with Helena
Bette (thinking) : dang that woman gets under my skin so easily these days.
She quickly undressed and got in the shower letting the cold water stream all over her heated body. She stayed in the shower like what seemed for ages untill she heard the doorbell. She quickly got out of the shower, put on her rope and went out front wondering who it could be. When she opened the door she gasped and stepped back……
Present Time
Alice : Porter what the fuck took you so long as she pushed Bette aside and stepped into the house.
Bette closed the door still not knowing what hit her and before she could even say a word Alice already continued her rambling.
Alice : and where the hell where you last night. I called you to let you know Tina was in the damn hospital and you don’t even care? what kind of…
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(32 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Good job ladies.You are doing well in your writing,for the end was perfect.Are we looking at a cat figth in the making?Or will they just tell Tina what the deal is. Either way I’ll be waiting patiently for your next post.
I love this fic! Indeed! Tina is now getting some of her own medicine! Helena and Bette are two so wonderful alpha women and you’re so good in exploiting their continuos struggle for control in love and in life, it’s so funny! Keep it up :D
Uh Oh! Who ever invented the doorbell must die (LOL) I mean really first it’s Alice (that was cruel by the way b/c I totally thought it would be Hels)and now it’s Tina…..great. Now Tina is really going to go off the deep end now that she has seen Bette strolling down Helena’s stairs. Please post soon. Why is Tina dropping by Helena’s so early? She’s out of the hospital so I’m guessing the baby is okay so what could it be???
The dynamic duo is back. Great update
Hello ladies…I see you are continuing this Bette & Helena story…I guess one could say that this was kinda hot…you know with the sex and all…one could say that if they were a Belena fan…but I am a Tibetter so it was aiight…lol. What will Tina say is the question. Isn’t this the story where they all got it on in the hotel? She shouldn’t be surprised if that is the case.
Phhheeewww!! Just caught up girls and i. am. loving. it!! So bloody HOT!! B&H just smoulder together. Now what the hell does Tina want? Interrupting them like that, the nerve!! That’s a mean cliffhanger girls *shakes head* bad, very bad! Can’t wait for the next one! :D
F*ck, girls what are you doing to me, I’m sitting here with a dry mouth, out of breath and completely turned on. Why not put a warning above the chapter to warn your readers. What an incredible writingstyle, it was as if I was sucked right in the story. Wonder what will happen now, because you’ve put a huge cliffhanger there on the end. I applaud you ladies, again you did a great job here. Thanks at lot. Thanks for posting real soon.
Oh, f.ck, indeed ! This is a great cliffhanger, girls ! Drama, drama, drama ! I really wonder what Tina is up to this time, but one thing is for sure, she was not expecting this ! I like this. Please keep posting, ladies ! Should we prepare for a threesome ?… LOL! Nah, I don’t think so… It could be fun though… LMAO !
whoa, didn’t see that coming! I really went ‘aaargh!’ when Helena saw it was Tina at the door!:D good to see you back girls, hope you have more for us soon! Thanks!
Ahh yeah…wow…phew! Ok..good job really. As for Tina intruppting..damnit!! what the hell??!!OK OK…Get to it another chapter please…
Damn they are so hot and love it. Oh drama coming and let see what Tina gonna do now. OK post soon please, thanks!
BTW! I forgot to mention- that was Fu*king HOT!!!! :)
wow, how did I miss this update! I just love this fic girls, you always write it so well…Now why is Tina there? And more importantly, what’s going to happen now that she is! Mmm…my guess is that your next update is going to be fireworks! PPS. :)