Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 4
Login to add story to favorites
(6 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 4
Chapter 4: Love is an illusion…when you love a scoundrel (Elizabeth wants to know what happened to her and Tina wants to know what happened to her friends)
Place: Orange County, CA
Year: 1885
(Previously) Suddenly, he grasped her breasts possessively, while his mouth moved back to Elizabeth’s ear and he whispered with sneer, “I’m gonna show you how the real man feels, and when I’m finished, you’ll beg for more, Princess.”
At that moment, Elizabeth’s body froze all over and all she could manage was a feeble attempt to get away. Her mind was desperately searching for the meaning of all that was happening to her and her movements to free herself became more determined.
During the struggle, she fell on the floor and knocked over her unfinished canvas that she had been working on that morning. Elizabeth tried to scream but couldn’t make any sound other than a wheezing shriek, which was muffled by Eric’s hand. Eric pulled Elizabeth up from the floor by her hair while continuing to use his free hand to cover her mouth.
Elizabeth felt frightened and absolutely helpless against his power. ‘What is happening? Where is he dragging me? What is he going to do to me?’ but it was the last thought before her mind went blank and she fainted to oblivion…
The bird stopped tapping its ridiculous melody and the atmosphere in the room was almost eerie because of the sudden silence. It brought Elizabeth back from her dark memories. She finally opened her eyes and realized that even the thought of last night made her feel as if she lived through its horror again.
~~~~~~~~
Elizabeth tried to remember more but everything was jumbled and chaotic.
Before blacking out, Elizabeth remembered that Eric was dragging her somewhere and whispering into her ear, “If you even try to scream, I’ll make a mark on your pretty face that will stay there for the rest of your life.”
She felt his right arm grabbing her waist from behind, while the other arm was covering her mouth unable her to breathe, speak or even think clearly. Elizabeth was suffocating and trying to break free but she was powerless to do anything against Eric’s strong arms. She didn’t know if he was serious about leaving a mark on her face, but could she blame herself for not wanting to find out?
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Hey BetteandTinaForever, great chapter again ! Well, not that I particularly enjoy this part of the story, as you may imagine ( I can think of more lighthearted chapters you’ve written in the past… LOL ! ), but I’m definitely hooked on this fic for it really is riveting. Great job ! I can’t wait to read more of this. PPS !
I’ve read this story before and I still get the same feeling of disgust with these two scoundrels! I know it gets better, though. Thanks!
Wow, looks like Eric is a bad guy in both dimensions. Great chapter B&TF, I nevr read the old one, but I can tell you that I’m really enjoying this one.
I read this one before too. But am enjoying it as much the second time around, (of course the men are disturbing.)Any changes gonna happen?
I hope that Bette and Carmen will be okay and that we will not have to deal with Eric much longer. He needs to pay for what he did to both women (if it is the same guy).
With the Eric’s of the world,will women be safe? I read this before. and still get sick at Eric.
Eric… Baaaaaaad, Alicia/Alice… Cooooool, Shane… Awwwwww, Dana… LOOOOOOL, B&T… Foreeeeeeeever!!!! Thanks for the post, PPS!
I still remember this story, I’m still waiting and hoping you will continue to post, but now you rewrited and its fun to reread it again, and I’m still hate eric in this story lol. Anyway please post more, thanks!