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My Skin is Painfully New – Chapter 10
Previously:
Bette rolled over and curled herself in the fetal position. Her longing for Tina was so great she could even smell Tinas perfume in the room with her. She sobbed for everything she had lost and gave herself over to the crushing grief.
Tina stared at Bettes back for a minute, transfixed, and then silently turned and walked out the door.
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Tina ran to her car, tears streaming down her face, wildly yanked the door open and jumped inside, as if being chased. She sat, her body wracked with sobs, an ache washing over her like a wave, pulling her under and rolling her around in a swirling vortex where she could not distinguish in what direction she would find air. It took her several minutes to realize that the thickness of the air and her inability to breathe was most certainly enhanced by the noon sun beating down on her car, closed up tight, no window cracked, no air conditioning running on a 93 degree Los Angeles day.
She opened the door and turned to dangle her feet out to the side. She gulped in the cooler air and wiped away some of the sweat that was pooling between her *****. She had to go to Bette. She had to climb into the bed with her, curl herself around Bettes broken spirit and breathe life back into her. She had just witnessed a profound truth that touched the very core of her being. Bette loved her. Bette wanted her.
She stood up and began making her way to the porch when her body was overtaken by another wave, a wave of nausea so strong that she had to grab on to the post to keep from falling over. Unable to contain it, Tina vomited, violently, trying to direct it to the ground rather than the stairs. Coughing and shaking, she dragged herself to the door and knocked weakly, unable to reach into her pocket for her keys. As the swirling vortex overtook her again, Tina scratched at the door, whispering help me, seconds before her world went black.
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I can totally understand why you couldnt be with Robin, said Shane as they pulled into the driveway. She was representing everything you dont need in your life right now. How can you make a commitment to someone when you dont know what the ***** you want?
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(52 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
Nice update. You and Seahurst are gonna do me in this week, though.
luv it keep it coming dont leave us hangig too long
AARGH! Cliffhanger of note!! Please keep going, your sense of drama is excellent. Love your style!
Your Jenny is very real (i.e. Shane taking 4 bags and Jenny taking the bag with the toilet paper and a jug of milk. Jenny’s inability to call 911 in an emergency.) Very nice!
OMG!!! You write so well, no matter what you are attemting, I love this story.
This is such a great story !! I can’t wait for the next update…
Oh my god !!!!!
please update soon.
OMG………….hurry and post again SOON. This story is so good.
dang it u made me burn my lunch, but it was worth it :D Now please write us the next chapter soon cause it’s getting addictive.
Thanks for the advance warning on the cliffhanger. (Though my heart is still pounding!) Great update.
girl you are doing a really good job,please post soon.
I’m so glad you decided to do this story! I hate dangling out here but you’re worth waiting for…
Oh my god. You have us by our toes right now. What a turn…Tina on her way back to Bette and now this. You do know how to keep us hanging here. Post soon. Real soon and let´s see what happens to B&T.
I’m really enjoying this story, looking forward to next post.
Nice and Sweet,that was awesome the way that Tina was forced to see that Bette is still “inlove” with her, and now this. Please hurry back….
Your writing is exquisite. I am hoping Bette and Tina are reunited for good soon. Keep writing because I know it makes you happy!! Love your partner for life.
very nice- gotta love the cliffhangers, huh?
amazing writing, and how tina saw a true confession of love, oh please continue soon!