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    My Immortal

    Story written on February 24, 2006 by corona.
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    Words: 3815
    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=59718
    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina. set at the end of season 3 so possible spoilers.

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                            Bette had been sitting in the same place for over an hour now. In the bedroom looking at Angelica. She had been all set to pack up and leave she even had two bags packed and ready to go. They were by the door just waiting to be picked up.

     

    She couldn’t do it.

     

    But she had no choice. It was either leave with Angelica or live without her, how could she make that decision. Break her own heart again or break Tina’s. Despite feeling that she owed Tina nothing, Tina was the one broke up this family!!

     

    She sat there just looking at her, tears streaming down her face. Could she be in her life as she was intended to be as a mother or would she end up being an aunt figure? So many unknowns.

     

    Bette got up and sat at the edge of the bed, she was making small circles on her baby’s back not trying to wake her just enjoying the time she had.

     

    She was whispering to her, “You are my angel. You define me now. Without you and Tina I have nothing. I am nothing”.  

    Tears were still streaming down Bette’s   face she made no effort to stop them. She felt like she was losing everything.

     

    Bette was sitting on Tina’s side of the bed when she saw Tina at the door. She hadn’t been there long. Tina saw the tears running down Bette’s face.

     

    Tina “what’s going on?”

     

    The way Tina even asked that question made her cry harder. There was no emotion in Tina’s voice, she really didn’t care. I was crying, clearly upset and she asks, “What’s going on?”

     

    Bette took a deep breath trying not to get more upset. She ran her hands through her hair.

     

    “What’s going on? Are you serious Tina? Have you really no idea what’s going on?”

    Bette just looked at Tina, Tina just looked back. Bette wasn’t really expecting an answer to be honest.

     

    Bette stood up she knew she couldn’t face Tina saying what she was going to say. She walked over to the window, looking out at the pool, which was so still and calming it relaxed Bette, she knew there was no point in shouting at Tina especially with angelica in the room.

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    1. This was an amazing first start and I do hope you continue. This is what we have needed to see or at least by the end of the season and I don’t think we will. So no you have the opportunity to give that to us with your story. Please continue. Thanks for the post.

    2. this was great, they way bette opened up and let tina see what she is going to lose…i love that song, one of my favorite…i hope though that this story will end on a more happy note, with B&T back together

    4. Nice start. Please continue with it. I’d like to see different authors coming up with different TiBette s/ls according to the rotten stuff we already have from S3.

    5. Tina now has otherness. He has a ready made fanily and Tina has her man. How do you exolaine a bi=racial child into the world that she is heading? Tina can handle it but can he? So glad that Bette told Tina how she felt.Its all behind Bette now. Go and fine your life and world again. thanks that is a wonderful start. thanks

    6. amazing! just amazing! finally, Bette has a voice, and has managed to make a connection with Tina that the writers of the series can’t or won’t seem to do! thanks! x

    8. Wow! This was great, Tina has hurt Bette so much… I am glad Bette finally found the courage to express her feelings. Hope you continue with this story.

    14. i’m hoping that tina will go after bette she does love her bette worked to get tina but tina never went to see a professional i think thats whats really wrong with her this s3 so bette’s leaving could be good bette ytold her she loves her now write again its a good start

    15. I hope you continue with this. It is really a great story and you have so much possibility with it. and I am with Seahurst on this and the “otherness” Please post soon.

    18. YOU Have to continue with this ok really it was great writting and very emotional i have to admit though its killing us all the way Bette left Tina there wispering “I love you” and walking away that was powerful stuff Please continue some mmore with this,Thanks

    20. Great star of this story! congratulations! this first chapters was sat but i like the way Bette opened to Tina, i really hope that in your story they can wort out all their problems. Post soon and congrutulations again!

    21. You know, you just proves to everybody here how one can write for the first time – at least, “officially” ! – and make us the gift of such a marvellous piece of writing.It’s so emotionally intense, truly powerful and deeply moving… Through Bette’s devastated yet so clear words, you expressed everything I would have love to say to Tina since this third season never stopped to break my faithtful Tibette heart… And in a way, even through such a hard road, you just gave me a reason to continue to hope a future happy end for my favorite two in the show (… thanks god for all the wonderful authors here, who bring us so much consolation and joy ! ^_^). — These two pages of yours speak volumes and contain every possible emotions and feelings, until an almost unbearable point. Awfully heartbreaking but highly realistic. That’s such a beautiful and intelligent work, please don’t stop to write ! We need authors like you, full of talent, sensitivity and fine psychology. Thank you a lot for this chapter – truly hoping it will not be your only one !

    22. hey there — you HAVE to continue this — this is really good. Loved Bette telling Tina how much she had hurt her….how can we talk you into another chapter or even two or three ??

    25. Corona corona corona…you’re ‘only’ fanfic? Na huh…no…can’t say that…not acceptable. I like the way this chapter ended. It’s got a lot of anticipation built up. The next chapter has a whole hec of a lot of potential. I await your return.

    29. This was a very powerful start. Thanks for reminding me of the “otherness” conversation. You are right, Tina now has her white, male, ready-made family. And, thank you for allowing Bette to say what was in her heart. I am very much looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you.

    33. That was amazingly powerful. Bette finally told Tina everything that was in her heart. She left no room for misinterpretation or misunderstanding. Loved how the song plays so well into this beginning. Excellent start, please do continue.

    34. Ah man!!! this story is great. Bette’s emotions are so raw I can feel them jumping off the page. You have made and excellent start. Please continue.

    37. you know its authors like you that totally breaks my heart everytime, I have to sit here and feel the pain and emotions that Bette is going through and aint shit I can do about it…shame on you!!!…ok my rant is over I sooooo love this and please don’t tell me that Bette has let go…please Bette fight til the end

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