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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(10)
“Oh my god it’s beautiful!” Bette said her eyes full of wonder, she had been in the place several times but it was at that very instant that she only saw the spectacular view of the setting sun. No words escaped their mouths as both women took in the sight of the magnificent view before them. The orange sky, the dark brown mountains, the green and flowery surroundings and the sunset giving off the most amazing purple, pink and orange hues; a perfect picture of a romantic landscape.
Bette closed her eyes and breathed in as she engrave the moment into her memory bank she only opened her eyes when Tina started to speak again “you know for the longest time I didn’t want to be here in this very spot because this was where my older brother Danny died” the brunette was shocked at what she heard, she turned to the blonde but Tina’s eyes were staring at the lake “he was only thirteen when he was diagnosed with leukemia and I was seven, the doctors did everything that they could do but because it was already in its last stage when it was discovered then there was nothing that they could really do to treat it.”
Bette could hear the pain in the blonde’s voice as she spoke “we were so close, me and Danny and we loved playing here and he was actually the one who taught me how to swim…” the blonde paused as she remembered the happy days she had with her brother “… and then one day while we were sitting here doing our little drawing contest he just suddenly lied down on the grass. I thought he just fell asleep but when I told him that I wanted to go home he wouldn’t wake up anymore that’s when I knew that something really bad was happening…”
Tina took a deep breath preventing the tears from spilling then turned to the brunette and laughed “I’m sorry, am I boring you with my sad story?” Bette smiled at her “no Tina you’re not and I’m sorry about your brother it must be really hard for you I know how it feels to lose someone”
“Yeah…” silence enveloped the air for a few minutes
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oh c’mon! we all know this is not just sex! tina is already inlove and bette well shes just confused and blinded by her low self steem. im pretty sure after making love shes gonna realize shes falling for tina. i dont know the rest but i want my nc-17 XD pps.
oh c’mon! we all know this is not just sex! tina is already inlove and bette well shes just confused and blinded by her low self steem. im pretty sure after making love shes gonna realize shes falling for tina. i dont know the rest but i want my nc-17 XD pps.
“I’m ready…” – yay !
Great update, both are ready to pop that cherry. Thanks for this it.
mmmmmmoooooorrrrrrrreeeeee your story is great thank you for this amazing update post soon!!!!!!
That was one great first date…. I’d go on one like that for sure! ;0) now for the scary part…. But Tina will do everything right, right? Thank you and yes I do remember! Kx
Tina planed a romantic date, even it was simple but still romantic. But Bette can’t think of anything but popping the cherry, LOL ;D
The ‘date’ that Tina planned was actually very sweet. If Bette’s really ready, then I hope it goes well. Thanks for the post. :)
lets see where you take this… pps
Omg..I’m ready too. …”oh don’t go breaking my heart” They’re theme song should be. thanks for the post.
Amazing update. Love the date so far. Thank you.
I’m glad Tina made an event out of it. Even if it is a planned seduction it was sweet. I half expected her to go to Bette’s house and take care of business. Happy to see that she tried to make it special inspite of it being what it is. Hope Bette knows the difference between love and lust.
Still not a fan of ‘just sex’ but this story is too good not to read. PPS
Yes Im ready too for hot stuff coming ahhahah, this is so good and please post more, thanks!
Looking forward to the next chapter.Thank you for the update.PPS
Loving this story… so romantic.
I’m with rorymel haha and I can’t wait for the next chappy ;)
Loving this romantic place that Tina planed for their first sex. Feel hot hot hot. Can’t wait to read more. Thanks.
Okay wow this is so beautiful and no my first time wasn’t memorable at all I was writing nc-17s like that as a virgin because I had already learned everything about sex when my first time came along I just had to apply what I already knew and to be honest I was better than she (the so called expirienced one) was hahaha