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Maybe This Time
Tina stood in the kitchen watching Bette lay atop a float in the pool. She had on a white bikini that highlighted her mocha skin. Tina could feel the familiar throb begin between her legs and willed herself to stop. Bette was with Jodi now and Tina was just a visitor in her former home. The baby monitor crackled next to her, just the normal interference that came through when all was quiet in Angelica’s room. She had arrived to pick up Angelica to take her back to her place, the little girls time with “momma B” over for the week. No one answered when she rang the bell so Tina tried the door and found it open. She had noticed Bette in the pool and realized that Angelica was still napping. She used the opportunity to watch Bette and take in her beauty. She didn’t have the opportunity to do this anymore as Jodi was usually around or their other friends whenever they did get together for social reasons. What she wouldn’t give to have Bette be hers again, but it just wasn’t to be. She had chosen a different path and by doing so had given Bette the opportunity to meet someone new. What the fuck had she been thinking? She wasn’t thinking that was the problem and now she had to pay the price. She had to stand by and support Bette in her new relationship. She owed her that much and wanted her to be happy.
Tina looked away hoping to shake the feeling of arousal but was drawn back to watching Bette. “Oh my God” whispered Tina as she focused on Bette once again and saw her slowly remove her bikini top. Tina was rooted to her spot in kitchen, her heart beat accelerating as Bette massaged her breasts with both hands. She watched as Bette dipped her hand into the water and splashed the cool water onto her chest. Her nipples became hard in an instant and so did Tina’s. Tina was in turmoil. On the one hand she knew she should look away but on the other hand she longed to see Bette like this if only for one last time. “You’re so beautiful baby, what did I do? Dear God, what did I do?” Tina found herself pinching her nipples, mimicking Bette’s movements. She longed to take those brown nipples into her mouth once again. She felt her tongue swirl around her mouth at the thought and felt her underwear getting wet as her essence dripped out of her core. She almost lost it totally as Bette slowly moved her hand downward and slipped her fingers into her bikini bottom. Tina felt her own hand move quickly into her jeans her fingers slipping slowly into her folds and circling her clit. With her eyes closed she imagined it was Bette’s fingers stroking her and she soon silently climaxed. When she opened her eyes she saw Bette’s body arching against her own hand, her hips moving up and down. She froze mid air as her climax came and she screamed out “Tina”.
Tina snapped to attention as she tried to clear her brain from the fog that her orgasm had left her in. “Holy shit, did she just scream my name?” She again watched silently as Bette lay there, floating with tears streaming down her face.
TBC???
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(36 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
TBC???Absolutely!!!
Ho my god please continue the story it´s great! :D Please post more soon!
You should definitely continue this. Great job!
Of course! Continue. How does Tina get Betet back?
OK, OK…you got me hooked!! This was a VERY good start and I like the angle you’re playing. Please post more, very well written! Thanks!
Love it! U must continue!
Continue and continue soon.
Oh yes!!! Love the set-up. Please continue.
OMG, can’t Tina find a way to quietly slip int the pool.
Great start, please update and soon…:))))
WOW! I have no idea where you are going with this story, but I hope it is with Tina walking through the french doors and into the pool so they can do a repeate knowing they are watching each other. PPS.
WOW!! Yes, please continue.
Damn this is good and please continue soon, thanks!
wow girl … please continue this has a great start … and I cannot wait for your next posting
TINA! :) Post more. And soon! I don’t think I can wait!
Oh my god u read my mind or I read your mind…I had imagined Bette out there knowing T was watching & teasing her…then finally calling out to T “Come here”…but oh well singular sex, co-jointly enjoyed…of course after that tantalisingly Act 1 U must bring on Act 2, now, immediately, soon anywayz…lmao
You didn’t just ask TBC??? did you… OMG of course, like right now would be a good time to keep writing and post the rest of this story cuz we know you already have it done you tease!!! ha ha GREAT START!!
You sure got my attention with that scorching, beautifully written scene. A follow-up is most definitely in order!
Yes, please continue. Let Tina soothe Bette’s tears and quench her fears. Very well written dph! More please!
Oh my, that was awesome. Can Tina see her crying? I hope she can and goes out there to comfort her wife, because in their hearts they are still very much married and in love with each other. Just let them admit it and please send Jodi packing, or is she already gone. By all means please continue, we never get enough of “our girls.” PPS
tina should go to bette right now, even just to comfort each other
Loved it. You should definitely continue. You could go so many places with the story: Tina could go to Bette now, act like she just came in but start to make a play for Bette, leave but start getting closer to Bette in the long run knowing that Bette obviously still has mad feelings for her. All of them are areas that would be cool to explore. Plus, I love a good TiBette story.. and I can’t imagine that Bette has any real feelings for Jodi. It hasn’t come across in the show to me like that.. so I dig this take. PPS.
WOW! You definately have my attention (LOL) Please post more.
oh double hell yea please continue….this is an awesome start….matter of fact, feel free to post another chappy or two tonight…..i wont be dissapointed…..lol……god i love me some tibette…..
great start
Oh yea you better continue.
Don’t even pretend you won’t continue
Holy Hell! How did I not find this story earlier! how hot was that! wow! Can’t wait to read the next one and hope there is more!!!
oh my god! you should so continue!
Oh yes, definitely TBC.
definetly. true love never dies.
YES! More, More, More…please, Please, PLEASE……that was wonderful, but I kept worring that someone would walk in and bust Tina. I could never leave if my love was crying, couldn’t T go to Bette now?
OMG!!!! Yes Please continue!!!! Great Jobs so far. PPVS
Definitely continue.
Holy afternoon delight Batman!
Oh my I bet she wasn’t expecting none of that to happen, first the bikini, then Bette got naked and played with herself, icing on the cake screaming Tina name while cumming….Hot Damn! I love it