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Roxy’s head was slumped over. Her hair was matted with congealed blood. The streams of blood that were running down her face were now dry and flaking off. She was slow to wake and moaning softly. Then the moaning got a little louder when she started to come to. Her head hurt like a mother…. probably worse then when she was hit over the head the last time. She couldn’t move and it took her a few seconds to realize why, Roxy was bound to a chair.
Before Roxy had the time to figure out where she was, David quickly stuck her in the arm with a needle and emptied the syringe into her. She had no idea what was happening to her, but it wouldn’t matter in a few seconds. Her body was relaxing and her head didn’t feel anything like it had moments before.
David – How are you feeling, darlin?
Roxy – Oh fuck….
David – That good, huh?
Roxy groans.
Roxy – Where am I?
David – Why don’t you leave the questions to me. Just relax and say whatever comes to your mind.
Roxy – Let me go.
David – You must get very lonely, Roxy.
Roxy – I do…. just fine.
He takes another syringe with sodium pentathol and gives her a little more.
David – I don’t want to give you too much. I know it feels good but I don’t want you to fall asleep on me. How do you feel now?
Roxy – So good….
David – Do you miss your friend? Andrea… isn’t it?
Roxy – Yes.
David – What kind of a relationship dd you have with her?
Roxy – She was my friend.
David – But she was more than that at one point… what was she?
Roxy – My lover.
David – I thought as much. Have you ever really had a relationship with a woman without sex?
Roxy – Not really.
David – Have you ever had sex with men?
Roxy was struggling to gain control of herself.
David – Roxy….. I asked you a question. I promise this will stay between you and me. I know you’re dying to open up to someone. It might as well be me.
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This chapter was full of emotions and that’s what actually gets to me. I love the way you describethe feelings of each character, their thoughts, their insecurities….their fears. There’s always a new detail that makes you want to change your mind about a person at some point. Until now I thought Dana as a weak (mentally spoken), shy and goofy woman with an adorable personality. At the very moment she seems to me very insecure of her own feelings yet passionate and determined about her actions. I hope she’s not driven by revenge because this would be fatal in the end. A woman who fights with her heart is the most dangerous ever. Both Dana and Roxy are in love with Alice which is a very unsuitable combination. In this case though I wouldn’t say that Dana is willing to fight hard enough only because she’s not sure about Alice’s inner emotions towards her. I suppose Dana’s in a phase in which she’s pretty uncertain about herself and Alice. I fear she would let Alice go if she had to. It’s time for Alice to make a final decision. For Dana, for Roxy and most important, for herself. I’m glad Roxy’s still alive. After this crash I wasn’t so sure whether she survived or not. I hope David won’t be too severe with her although she more than deserves this treatment. What I’m asking myself from the very beginning is why David wants Dana and Alice to be together? Basically, he should hate Alice and get rid of her, right? I have no idea what he plans and why the hell he protects both Al and Dana but I’m sure you’ll reveal it sooner or later. So, you’re telling me that the therapist won’t get into Dana’s pants because she’s straight? I don’t think being straight is a good argument. Everyone wants to get into her pants, lol. What I’d be willing to do for my beloved one stays with me, missy. A woman needs her secrets, don’t you think so? What about Kristen? I didn’t hear from her in a long time. Is she missing? I’m curious as to how Roxy gets out of the mess she had created. Now that David knows pretty much everything about her past it’ll be another obstacle for Roxy to pursue what she’s actually seeking. I hope the conversation between Dana and Al will clear all that’s between them. The sex scene was freakin’ hot. I’m at a loss of words whenever I comment on it. You’re a damn brillant writer brteyes. I adore you and I absolutely love your story. Hope you post soon, darlin’. Like always I’ll be awaiting your next installment……
I like the fact that Alice and Dana are starting to communicate the tiniest bit. Not much, but it’s still something. I’m glad Daan’s still going to therapy though. Not sure I dig Roxy being held by David since I’d really love to see her fuck up and be put in jail herself, but meh. Still a really good chapter, and one that’s necessary if Alice and Dana hope to go anywhere in the future. Still worried about David, but I guess with all the bad guys gone you’d have nothing to write about, huh? Lol. Great job babe. I hope you had a great holiday.
Well where do I start … Hello wud be good i spose being a first time at commenting on your story which i apoligize for it’s just you’ve been writing a long time now lol and i wasnt sure you would get the comments until i was up to date with this fantastic story. I have been hooked and love your story from the first chapter and it just keeps gettin better, althou i had my fair share of shocks and always been left wanting more lol. Thank god Alice and Dana are actually beginning to communicate properly without the feeling of uncertainty being there so much. Cant wait for ur next update and maybe now im up to dat with ur story i can carry on with my own lol.Carry on with the best work on here pppplllleeeeaaaasssseeee lol sorry.x x
Hé, just thought I would let you know I’m still here and reading every chapter. Time and inspiration has kept me from leaving comments all this time. Sorry for that! You’re story is still one of the best out there when it comes to Danisch story lines. Keep up the good work….your silent but loyal fan!
brteyes, I am totally in awe with your creativity and ability to write this thriller meticulously. I have enjoyed all the past chapters and this one is equally incredible. Thanks for ensuring me that the therapist was ok. In a perfect world, they would set a time to talk openly and honestly about all the craziness and the kidnapping while maintaining their cool. But I know that would be too easy and boring. The good thing about Danish is that they could not stay mad at each other for too long. Loved the way you brought them together after each time they fought. Yes, it was fine what David did to Roxy and she deserved it. The way David tortured her was quite clever. I am going to take a stab at this plot. I believe David’s ultimate goal was to help Lara getting back D and Lara was still in hiding. He acted like a director of a play carefully setting up all the scenarios and watching the events unfold. With his mental sickness, he was enjoying the process in eliminating all the people against A & D. The prize would be to hurt A in front of Lara. That is just my guess. Nonetheless, please do not go too far in hurting A & D. The thought of them getting hurt physically pains me a lot. Thank you for your continual dedication in writing this amazing story.
It will be interesting see to if Alice believes Dana, this time or will she continue to give Roxy the benefit of a doubt.I do feel sorry for Roxy, as twisted as she is David is ten times worst.Good to see Alice and Dana talking, I think Dana is much healthier now thanks to Carrie. I hope to get some insight in Alice state of mind and heart. Maybe for Christmas? pps
What can I say? David is one sick, evil..genius!! Roxy deserves everything she’s getting right now and I love it. The one thing that worried me was David saying Alice and Dana’s won’t be so happy next halloween. How much time will he allow them to be happy before he inflicts his sick brand of torture on them? How ever long it is, I’ll be along for the ride. Speaking of Alice and Dana, you’re gonna make me have to buy another monitor cause the hot scenes betwenn those two are melting my screen!! Don’t worry though I’ll buy as many as I have to as long as you keep writing ’em like that. Alice really needs to get some professional help. Dana can’t be the only one. I can’t wait for the talk because Dana needs some kind of reassurance tat Alice wants her and only her. One talk won’t do it but it’s a start. Alice has a lot of proving to do. Anyway this was another brilliant chapter and I can’t wait for the next one so please post soon.
I must say that I am a tad worried that when you say “there are soon to be more changes in the story”. Eek. Must make sure to have a glass or two of wine before reading future updates. I love that Alice seems to have Roxy out of her system. And damn you for making me feel sorry for Roxy some more. Can’t we have her go off for some intensive therapy somewhere and she can live her life happily and far away from Dana and Alice? Love that Dana and Alice finally seem to understand the need to communicate. I also like that you mention the possibility of couple’s therapy in your author’s notes. That would be a very good thing. And the fact that Alice took the lead in their little morning encounter? Hot. David is a very interesting character. Too bad he is a psycho. The video equipment he dragged into the room with Roxy has me a bit concerned. I’m not sure if he is going to film or is going to have a show-and-tell. I know he is just protecting Dana and Alice so he can punish them later for Lara. This will continue to be a rough ride, but, I’ll stick with you. I look forward to your next post. Thanks for the great chapter!
all i have to say is… kill her david!!!!! please!!!!loved the chapter, but as always i want more more more.