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Masked Feelings CH 22, Don’t Let Me Go…
Bette – I think you better call before you go over there.
Tina – What…. and give Dana the chance to get away from me again. I need to know what is going on with her.
Bette – I wonder how Alice is doing. Dana isn’t the only one who needs us…..
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Lara had her breasts pressed against Dana’s back, running her hand on Dana’s inner thigh.
Lara – Good morning.
Dana stirring….
Dana – Mmmm….. haven’t you had enough already?
Lara – I can never get enough of you….
Dana tries to go back to sleep.
Lara – Come on, Dana. Wake up.
Dana – No… let me sleep. I’m tired.
Lara was pouting.
Lara – I’ll get you up, Dana.
Lara begins stroking her….
Dana – Stop it.
Lara nibble on her earlobe, whispering in her ear….
Lara – You know I’m not going to give up till I get what I want.
Lara was grinnning.
Lara – You’re wet, Dana.
Dana, now breathing heavily.
Lara – Still want to sleep, Dana?
Dana – OH, God….
Lara – Turn around.
Dana rolled over to face her.
Lara took a breast into her mouth. Sucking gently, teasing her nipple till it was hard.
Lara – Make love to your wife, Dana.
Dana – I’ll make love to you, Mrs. Fairbanks but first you need to finish what you started. I’m aching…… go down on me, babe.
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Alice spent the night in Gina’s guest room. It was fun to torment her but now the real work needed to start. Time for Alice to be Alice again. Gina needed to trust her….. completely.
Gian was still in her room, the door was locked, no doubt. Alice went to the kitchen to make coffee. While the coffee was brewing, she picked up the phone to call her editor. Gina was already on….. talking to someone. Placing her hand on the receiver, she listened in.
Gina – Tony, if you’re there pick up. Come on, I know you’re there. Get your ass out of bed and answer your phone.
Tony – Christ, Gina! Ever think I might not be alone.
Gina – You’re never alone. Who is it this week? Anyone I know?
Tony – No… no one you know. What is it this time? What is so damn important?
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awesome chapter! the love scene made me gag. roxy better kick lara’s ass or knock some sense into dana. now that alice has found out about the marriage, will she speed up her plan?
I realize that Dana’s hurting, but she has made so many poor decisions. Why don’t you make her stay married to Lara for being so stupid. Ok, that wasn’t nice. When will things start to unravel for Gina and Lara? Thanks for the update. It’s great to see you back so soon.
roxy should pay gina a visit. u know threaten her a little. brteyes, go to sleep sweetie. i don’t want u to become crazy b/c of sleep deprivation.
Nice update. I think a visit from Roxy would rock.lol I guess Alice may be seeing the errors in her plan. I hope she has an alternate plan in the works.
Roxy needs to come into the picture and knock some sense into Dana’s big head. She doesnt love Lara. Poor Alice. I really hope she speeds up her plan now. Great update.
I think Alice needs a partner i hope she confides in someone about lara!! I am also really hurt that Dana keeps having sex with lara I hate that!! Listen I love ya, but you are killing me here and it is seriously time for lara to get some payback!!
Woot! another awsome chapter, about Roxy, I can see her comming in to help. Thanks for the post, Hope you post soon!
Okay, Alice needs so help here Roll in the big guns. Let someone kick Lara butt and slap some sense in Dana before Alice gets hurt more. thanks
Ok wow. What has happened to the world! All the other commenters make a good point with Dana, all that great sex with someone she doesnt love? Then again, sometimes sex is just, sex..eh? It was a great update though. I love Tina, the voice of reason. Alice, or poor troubled Alice, trying so hard to make everything ok, and the plan back fired. Now there’s no reason for her not confess everything she knows, put Lara and Gina at her mercy. Damn babe you’re killing me. I think Dana’s just feeling like her life will always be shit now, so she’s trying so hard to make it work with Lara. Just to find SOME sort of happiness in all this termoil. Can’t say I blame her really. Roxy hmmm, I wonder if its too predictable for Roxy to come in a save the day you know? I do see her helping somewhat, but I think what really needs to happen is, everyone ganging together and finding the truth in all this, and really kicking some ass you know? Everyone plays their part in the happiness of Alice and Dana, as it should be. But it’s still like, how do they get there? Oh man, I’d hate to see you lose sleep over this thing, but your isomnia brings true brilliancy into our lives. Seems like my comments are getting longer and longer. Oh well, it’s my job as your biggest fan right? ;) So, I have some crazy ideas for your next masterpiece, but i’d hate to give it all away to your many faithful readers. Perhaps you have an email address I can share my secrets with, that is if you really want you know. ;) Brilliant update sweet heart, you keep it goin. Can’t wait for next. :)
Mmh, why did this story trouble me? It was mostly the way Dana was acting around Alice (agressive in the beginning, and ‘not caring’). I liked the talk with Tina. I hope Dana will give it a thought.
No I don’t stop reading I read all the danish stories :D, it’s only I’m not sure if I wanna Alice with Dana, how can she has sex every six minutes with Lara if she really loves Alice?, besides Lara is ewww, and right now there are a lot, but a lot of coincidences and nobody can suspect at least a little bit, any answer that Lara gives to them, specially to Dana is o.k. ????
I dont know why i stayed silent for so long its just what i do but im always around especially the danish stories….oh trust i will stick it out…its just so damn hard to do so….dont worry though this is still one of my favorites its kind of a love/hate thing.
Sorry got a little trigger happy…I wonder if Alice is going to tell Bette what she knows since she’s witnessed the huge mess in Alice’s house…this should be interesting how this all unravels…Update soon!!!
Great update! Yeah Dana is not in a good place right now, I definitely think it’s time for our girl Roxy to make an appearance! I wonde
I love it and I think that dana may become a bit of a bitch though some of this story and I love it and yes I think that they will need roxy’s help in this but I think that roxy may help alice with gina and lara please post soon
Nice chapter. I’m a little bit sketchy on the way Dane is acting… I mean loving Alice and then going over and being with Lara every other day… seems a little strange. But it’s good, very emotional!
Dana is annoying me. What’s up with all the great sex with Lara? You don’t do that if you don’t love someone and you also don’t enjoy it that much. I can’t wait for Roxy to come back and help Dana get some sense and kick some ass. Btw, I missed last chapter, and you almost lost me with the marriage, but I trust you and I know you’ll work it out. Great update, thank you!