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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 60
With each thrust Bette’s hot, slick and pulsing ***** was rubbing on Tina’s ***** – there would be no need for her to touch herself – this time may be for T, but she knew with each contact of her body on Tina’s, she was going to take this trip with her – and soon. She could feel her ***** building – fast.
Bette knew it would be mere moments before Tina climaxed. She wanted to look into her eyes as they both came. So in a feat of perfect score Olympian gymnastics she got Tina up and turned around and straddling her, putting one hand behind her head, the other alternating between long, slow thrusts that took the full length of her long fingers, and circling and rubbing her ***** with her thumb.
Tina was at the intersection of Mind-blowing and Another Dimension and somehow, someway her body was doing the impossible – it was traveling down both avenues.
“Look at me, T. Tell me you love me as you come.”
Tina was having a hard time focusing. Bette knew Tina was in that special placea place on the cusp of time and spaceand this time she was right there with her.
There were no walls, no bed, no floor, no home, nothing tangible in sight – only the souls of two lovers about to be careened, swept up through the hurricane force winds of their physical love.
“Tell me, T. Take me with you, baby.”
Bette’s eyes were blurred with love fog but held intently on Tina’s. She was going to come this time only from the sheer joy of watching and feeling her T come.
She was thrusting faster now. Tina’s glazed eyes were on Bette. Her hand went to hold onto the back of Bette’s head as her back started to arch –
“TINACome withme..I LOVEYOULOVE.
“I love.youBetteI ***** love.yousomuchOH, GOD, BETTE!!! Tina screamed as the gates of seventh heaven allowed her entrance. Her fingers now dug into Bette’s back as she tried desperately to pull her lover into her body’s orgasmic journey.
As the climatic wave receded, Tina brought her head forward again. Her eyes focused on the face of the woman who unfailingly took her very soul soaring on love’s galactic trip through the stars.
They kissed the kiss of sated lovers. Hearts still beating rapidly, holding on to one another until they were both safely back on terra firma.
“And I love you, Tina Kennard, until Bluebirds turn green and violets turn red.
Tina gave a sly smile and said, “Guess I better cancel my date with Patty then, eh?”
TBC.
p.s. see you all when I come back from vacationhope this chapter will keep Bette & Tina warm and fuzzy in your hearts.
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(37 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
RC, this chapter was so HOT; you burned a whole in my monitor!!
Have a safe, healthy and happy vacation.
WOW..just WOW..have a great vacation..
K
Just caught up. Love this story so much. Very hot chapter by the way. Hope you have a good vacation.
Enjoy your trip snd will see you soon. thanks
Awww, thank you soo much, rc!! I got all teary reading your special wish for me. :)
You know what I love about your writing? You not only write about what’s happening, but you also perfectly describe the depth of Bette and Tina’s feelings. You make me experience the emotions that they are going through. Beautiful chapter, rc. Thank you!! I hope you’re having fun at P-town!
Have a great trip and thanks for this hot chapter.
I don’t remember how to breathe.
My goodness. That ws …. WOW!!!!!!!!!! No words can adequately describe that scene. Have a great vacation and we will be waiting for that next installment in two weeks. Thank you.
OMG! Thank you and have a wonderful vacation.
WOW-EEEEE! Oh my, Oh my!
Thank you much ARCE, enjoy your vacation and trust me you have well earned it. See you when you come back. Can’t wait!
THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE GREATEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!NOTHING CAN EVER DESCRIBE HOW GREAT YOUR STORY WAS…..FUCKING MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!THANX!
Enjoy the holiday and come back refreshed!
Fabulous chapter! Have a great vacation! I’ll be waiting for your next entry, now that I am all wamr and fuzzy! =)
Holy Shit! Good thing my smoke alarm is in good working order! That was very HOT! Have a good vacation.
WOW…thanks, have a great trip!
OMG, that was hot. Enjoy your vacation in P.Town :)
have a good holiday – u definitely deserve it! and gues u be getting lots of loving as well ;)
Wow! That was a nice wake up call this am. I need to go take another shower now. That was indeed HOT! Thank you and have a safe and fun vacation.
OMG… now that was fucking HOT… i think everyone’s juices are flowing this morning… enjoy your vacation…
yes amanda, everybodys juices are flowing this mornng. i reall dot know how im suppose to go to the gym and spin after that. i can barely sit. thanks for that. have a good vacation and be safe and know well be here waiting for your return.
That was beautiful! You truly have a talent for writing a love scene without making it raunchy. I applaud you for that. Enjoy your vacation!
OMFG to the nth degree!! Right now I am sitting at the intersection of Mindblowing and Another Dimension just from reading this…
“My T’s touch can transform my dark night of fears into the bright sunlight of my confidence” how freakin’ loving is that…”I will love you until Bluebirds turn green…” Your tender words so artfully mixed with the HOT BOILING sex makes you a true artist in creating these powerful love scenes with our girls.
…your partner is one lucky gal. Thanks once more for sharing your talent with us and have a safe and happy vacation. Then get your butt back here to post!
Fantastic! Have a great vacation!
Damn I shouldn’t have read that at work. And there is not a cold shower for miles. Ummmmmm what to do. J/K great chapter thank you. Enjoy your vacation.
Arce,
AS for the last four or so chapter.
Yes, another stupendous shock to keep me open mouth and stunned into silence.
Faye’s suicide robs us of a necessary comeuppance however it is the ultimate sacrifice than Faye could offer as a means to repay her debt.
How Kerry and Bette will deal with this should prove interesting and alluring reading. Although Bette and Tina hot sex is certainly one novel way to deal with this news.
Perhaps all of that pent up emotion just had to explode out of both of them.
Your flair for the twist of the knife is remarkable as you tempt and taunt the readers down one alleyway only to spin a mirror and show us the flipside of our location. One minute we are at the start of the maze the next we are in the heart of it. This is a wonderful gift and thank you for your consistent high standards and prodigious posting. This melodrama has fairly zoomed long and yet kept the reader’s attention with every twist and turn. That is down to our phenomenal talent.
Thank you again,
Your Loyal Fan.
PS -have a great vacation and come back to us safe and sound with plenty of creative juices folding.
I like your style saying that there was wasy more to come.
Lucky us seems an adequate response.
FABULOUS & HOT chapter…..I DON’T KNOW WHY I READ YOUR STORY AT WORK, IT DRIVES ME CRAZY…Have a WONDERFUL vacation..THANKS…
have a great trip…!