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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 5

    Story written on May 27, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=54196
    Author Notes:

    Tina tells Helena hit the road..it’s downhill from there.

    "The sonogram was great. It was a wonderful experience."

    I caught the wince on Helena’s face, her bruised ego from the fact she was not at the sonogram – she was not invited to be there. It’s evident she’s still seething from this morning when I told her I was going with Bette.

    "You look a bit flushed, Tina. Are you feeling okay?"

    "Im feeling fine, Helena. Look, we need to talk.  Actually, I need to talk to you."

    "Fine, darling, let’s talk over dinner. I’ve made reservations at this wonderful restaurant near -"

    "Helena, I don’t want to go to dinner with you tonight."

    Just come out and say it, Tina, don’t beat around the bush, just tell her.

    "As a matter of fact, Helena, I don’t want to have any more dinners with you, or breakfasts or lunches."

    "Oh, darling, you’re just experiencing a little bit of hormonal blues. It will pass -"

    "Helena, read my lips, whatever you and I shared, whatever this was between you and me, is over. What.where are you going?" She rushed past me, headed right for my bedroom, looked in and then turned slowly around to face me. Here eyes were cold and narrow with anger.

    "You know, Tina, I’ve learned some things about you these past few months. One thing that always struck me is your neatness and your sense of order for things. You never would leave a bed unmade."

    "Helena, stop, don’t even go there."

    "Oh, Ill go there, Tina. Your sonogram visit with Bette lasted a bit longer now, umm? For God’s sake, one can still smell the ***** in that room!"

    She came at me so fast I didn’t have time to put up a defensive reaction. Her hands clamped down on the lower half of both my arms. It was only a nanosecond, but in that moment I looked down and saw bruises forming on my arms spreading out from beneath her white knuckled vice grips. I looked up and saw in her eyes the definition of hate, the hate for someone or something that causes one to do unspeakable things – and I was afraid.

    "Helena, let me go. You’re hurting me. Please let me go."

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    5. OMG you had me yelling GO BETTE once I read she pulled up there. I can not believe how much I get drawn into these stories….. Please please please POST SOON… Pretty please with sugar on top…

    7. What the…? You can’t leave us hangin’ NOW!!! I have already chewed my nails, clenched my fists until they turned white…Soon there will be nothing let to do so please post soon…Thanks.

    9. OMG!! That bitch is crazy, and you are just as bad, leaving us hanging like this. Please update tonight??? I wont be able to sleep unless you do. Dont do this. Great chapter, I hope I see more of you by bedtime.

    11. Hey arceextl! My first time commenting for you. Excellent series! I love how Bette and Tina are picking up the pieces and getting their relationship back on track. Bette better hurry and get in there soon to save Tina!!

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