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“Line of Sight” – (MAR Fan Fic Challenge) Part 2 of 2
“You’re going to have to wait a little longer, T.” She played with Tina’s hands, gently caressing her fingers, lifting Tina’s right hand up to suck on her fingers. Tina shivered and moaned softly. Bette leaned in and gave her a firm kiss on the lips then flicked her tongue across Tina’s top lip. Tina swayed in response and Bette caught her around the waist.
“Tina Kennard, are you swooning?” Bette got a little smile and started backing Tina towards the bed. She kissed Tina firmly, guided her to the edge of the bed and then lifted her shirt off. Tina leaned forward and unbuttoned the bottom of Bette’s shirt, kissing her stomach. She unhooked Bette’s jeans and helped them fall to the floor. Bette stepped out of them and kicked off her flats.
“I have been waiting to get you alone since we were in the car this afternoon. I thought dinner was never going to end.” Tina stopped unbuttoning long enough to toss her bra to the floor. Bette bent forward and kissed her deeply.
“This has got to come off,” said Tina as she unhooked Bette’s bra and her lips found Bette’s skin. Bette moaned softly as Tina caressed her breasts then started licking and sucking on them, alternately teasing Bette’s nipples with the tip of her tongue and her finger. Bette leaned into Tina and they tumbled onto the bed. Bette lightly stroked Tina’s chin with her thumb then moved her hand down Tina’s neck, following it with nibbling kisses.
“Fuck, you make me dizzy,” said Tina.
“You were swooning,” Bette said triumphantly. Tina hurried to pull off the last pieces of her clothing then pulled Bette completely on top of her, silencing the gentle gloating first with kisses and then by rhythmically pressing her hips against Bette, who responded enthusiastically.
Chapter Four.
It was a perfect day with a bright blue sky and little scattered puffs of white clouds and Angelica was determined to not waste a minute of it. She ran along the pathway dragging her grandparents towards a closer look at a family of seals sunning on a rock in the bay. Bette and Tina kept them in sight, but walked several hundred yards behind, arm in arm and deep in conversation.
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(46 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
Really like this and hope you continue with it. Keep them talking and loving each other and happy together. PPS
Simply marvelous, I love that Tina’s parents reached out to Bette and Tina. Angelica is just plain ADORABLE! You did a great job and I hope you will continue.
love how tina’s parents get them alone and speak with them… angie is adorable…PPS! :)
What a great premise! Thank you for taking us on this road trip with Tina, Bette, Angie and the Kennards! I really enjoyed reading this. Hope to see you writing again soon!
I think this story should be more than just two chapters!!! Hope you’re going to continue with it. PPS
This was a Great Short story!!! I do hope you write more for us. Thank you PPS
I caught up with this story and am throughly enjoying it. I love to see Bette and Tina try to work out things. It is also nice to see parents (Tina’s) who love their daughter and are willing to give Bette another chance at happiness and love with Tina.
Hello again… once again super awesome… just remember to update the challenge thread… you super rocked it out and you better be coming back with something else. Sincerely, JC
very nice start, looking forward to the rest!!
Hope you continue with story.
What a nice story – really well written and thoughtful. Love to read more from you!
angie just make things so perfect for our favorite couple..they really are the perfect family….pps