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Let it Ride- Chapter 5b
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Chapter 5a. "The After-After Party" or, as Dana might call it, "The Post -Game Show" and edited because I’ve learned to spell.
Alice was propelling herself and Dana through the crowd like heat-seeking missiles. Dana had followed mostly mutely, still stunned from Alice’s skilled attack in the bathroom. Alice was looking around purposefully, suddenly sober and almost unbearably desirous.
Fueled by the alcohol, the memory of touching Dana’s body was nearly overpowering everything in her brain. Her need to continue what they’d started moments ago seemed to have simplified everything so that she had only one goal. Find Shane and get the hell out of Dodge.
Feeling the nervous energy radiating from Alice’s body, Dana finally pulled her own thoughts together and questioned thoughtfully, "Alice, where are we going?"
Through teeth gritted in concentration, Alice muttered darkly, "Where is Shane when you need her?"
Dana grinned at Alice’s desperation, finally surmising why Alice was in such a hurry. Squeezing Alice’s hand encouragingly, she replied to her earlier question, "Probably screwing a straight girl in a stranger’s bedroom."
Alice shot Dana an endearingly frazzled grin and then muttered sadly, "Fonzie would never do this."
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It took them twenty more minutes to find Shane and when they did the sight was almost enough to make Alice wish they hadn’t found her at all. Almost.
Closing the bedroom door with a shriek, Alice fell back into the hallway clutching her eyes in horror. Dana caught her easily, pulling her into a loose embrace as Alice called loudly, "Freaks!"
There was a sharp clink and a rattle as the keys to Shane’s car impacted against the door and then Alice was covering her eyes, ducking inside again and emerging with the keys.
During the brief moment that the door remained open, Dana clearly heard the unmistakable sounds of moans and panting filtering through.
Blushing, and finding herself somewhat embarassed over being in a similiar state earlier, Dana grabbed Alice’s hand again and said, "Let’s go home."
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There was a brief but spirtied argument over who should drive, if either of them, and then they had their first stroke of luck. A tall, familiar form was walking toward them, her arm raised in greeting.
Alice murmured happily, "Helena Peabody, as I live and breathe!"
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Hey fripster, this was a great sexy chapter of Danish. Loved how they played Helena, but really she didnt really deserve this, I like to see her have some fun too,great writing and I can understand trying not to use the same words over and over again!!!
Three words: HOT, HOT & HOT! Wow, I have read plenty Danish NC-17 before, this was impressive. I was amazed how naturally Dana interactd with Alice. Gee I guess there is no need for any schooling when it comes to love. I was glad to see Dana confessed to Alice and took one giant step out of the closet. And Dana deserved her happiness. Back to Helena. I sort of agree with you. It would be good to see Alice having someone like Helena, truly good buddy and resourceful at the same time. However, looking around me, I have seen really long lasting female friendship based on trust, respect, caring and extraordinary generosity without any sexual relationship. I think H & A in the context of the show had demonstrated these qualities. It would make it even more precious to remain this way. God forbid if something would happen to their girlfriends, they would still have each other to fall back to. And thank you for dropping the hint on another story to follow. You are amazingly good at this. I am looking forward to reading any stories you will post. Last but not least, I appreciate you taking the time to comment on our comments.
I feel like an ass for being so lax in my comments recently. I’ll try and justify it by saying that you post insanely fast, and I go to school full time as well as work two jobs. But, I’ve definitely been reading them all, and this is obviously no exception since I’m here. Duh, that was a really stupid thing to say, but I did it anyway. Kinda like my stories. This chapter…how can I ever do it justice with a few words? It was incredible. You made their encounter so sweet and loving that it almost made me cry. I love, love, love this story and if you end it anytime soon I’ll be depressed.
WOW!! That was amazing. I just love those two together. Is Dana gonna return the favor or are you gonna make us wait for it? It doesn’t matter either way because I’m hooked on this fic. And I’m loving how quickly you’re posting. I can’t keep up with the comments. But no complaints here just keep doin what you’re doin. Who needs IC’s L Word when we have your version? Keep it up and post soon.
THAT WAS HOT!!!!! WOW! Are you sure this is your first story?? You are great with it. Danish is hot together! I’m glad that you’re going to catch with my story and thank you for commenting. Anyways, back to your story..Dana and Alice are amazing together. I love the part with Alice finding Shane in the bathroom. I love how they did trick Helena to get them back to the apartment so they can y’know. lol Anyways, come back with a new chapter!!!! PPS.
Woohoo – score for Dana. Hot chapter Fripster, very nice indeed. I like the little observational details you write which together with the believable dialogue give this story really good depth. Oh and I gotta say Helena’s britishness comes through well in her dialogue – ‘throttle you’ is a classic. Looking forward to the next chapter and Dana having her way with Alice?! Thanks for the shout-out too.
Wow – great chapter – hot, but well written with just the right amount of comedby before the really good sex scene – I hope you next chapter gives us Dana recipricatng the act!!. As you can see, Danish is my favourite pairing and you write it great – more please and soon.
your a freak man the way you write this story is just amazing i wish i had your talent and here i was thinking i wouldn’t see another danish writer aggh!! just fabulous ur story makes my afternoon lol so cannot wait till next chap, very nice!! love scence too:)
“Post Game Show”! Priceless!!If you characterize yor writing sometimes as “lazy”, then I would absolutely LOVE to read your work when you ‘put a little effort’ into it :)!! I may not post comments often, but I definitely read Danish fan-fic on a regular basis and want you to know that I am amongst the legion of your fans. Your writing talent and story telling are on par with those other Danish Masters like Muted, Sammy’s Girl and Dreiser, to name a few.
i don’t usually read stories about alice and dana, but i have to say this has been a fun story, and i think you did a great job with this chapter, it was so sweet and loving, great job!!!!!!