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Leaving Through the Window ~ Ch.8
“I don’t mind if it rains forever Let it rain, rain, let it rain I said I don’t mind if it rains forever Let it rain, rain, let it rain” Carl Thomas – “Summer Rain” Bette and Tina had just finished dinner and were heading out to Bettes car when it started pouring down rain. Both girls let out girly shrieks and ran the rest of the way to their destination; Bette stopped at Tinas side and opened the door for her, ever the romantic. Opening her door she slid into the seat and let out a dramatic sigh closing her eyes and leaning her head back as she listened to Tinas laughter. Opening her eyes again she smiled at Tina who smiled back and then started the caror tried to start the car as the engine kept stalling. Rolling her eyes and pushing the hair back out of her face. *****. She murmured to herself. Quickly she got out of her car and went back around to Tinas opening in wide and putting a hand out for Tina to help her get out. Sliding her warm hand into Bettes, Tina stepped out of the car and into the downpour. Feel like taking a walk in the rain? Bette asked with her smooth and even voice. Tina couldnt help but feel that she would follow that voice anywhere, as she slipped her arm around Bettes waist and slid her hand into the other girls back pocket. About a block from Bettes house there was a sudden streak of lightning across the sky followed by a huge boom of thunder that made both girls jump and take off running, hands clasped and giggling all the way, until Bette slipped and took herself and Tina down at the same time. Still laughing uncontrollably, *****.myass hurts! Bette said laying back flat against the pavement as the rain pounded her face. Tina was clutching her chest and gasping for air. Babeyouyou making the motion with her hands of someone running, slipping, and then falling on their *****, she busted up laughing again until she could control herself. Getting up she stood up and reached a hand down to Bette who was still giggling loudly. Come on babe, youre gonna wind up drowning, and were both gonna get sick. Yes mom, Bette said grabbing the hand and pulling herself up, both the girls took off down the street a little more carefully this time chuckling slightly under their breath. Rounding the corner to the Porter home the girls bounded up the porch steps and Bette stopped to unlock the door. Feeling herself all over, checking every pocket, she gave Tina a nervous grin. Ooops? she said as she sent a beaming grin Tinas way. Bette? You forgot your keys?! Tina asked, slightly agitated. She was cold and wet, her jeans clinging to her uncomfortably. Bette nodded, Theyre in the ignition. Damn. Dont worry I can get in through the basement. Stay here, Ill let you in in a second. Bette skipped down the steps back into the rain and around the side of the house. The basement window was a small square at the very bottom of the house, considering that the basement was underground. Bette had to lay herself in the mud and shimmy backwards into the tiny little window. She dropped down onto some of the boxes below, her shoes being wet from the water and mud, slipped out from underneath of her and sent her crashing down onto her already bruising backside. She got up rubbing her sore ***** cheek and looking down at her muddied t-shirt. Well this is turning out to be a great date, she said to herself. Tinas really gonna want to jump into bed with me tonight. She talked quietly to herself as she made her way up the steps to the front door. Reaching the front door she pulled it open to find a still dripping Tina leaning sexily against the doorframe. Well hello there beautiful, Tina joked nice of you to finally get around to letting me in, Im freezing my ***** off out here. She finished as she walked in. Leaning against the door Bette watched as she walked into the kitchen. Nope, still there. She called out lightly. Bette followed Tina up to her room and gave her a pair of sweatpants and a t-shirt to change into. While Tina was changing in the bathroom Bette stripped down to her just her panties and was currently standing in front of the dresser looking for more pajamas when Tina walked back in. Oh, shitsorryI didnt even think. Tina blushed but didnt turn away as she met Bettes eyes in the mirror at her bureau. T, its okay. Bette laughed as she pulled a tank top over hear head. By this time Tina was paying attention though. She was watching the muscles move in Bettes back as she pulled her shirt on, her gaze traveled lover at her girlfriends long trim legs and then back up to her firm, perfectly shaped *****, which was now only covered by the lacey material of her black boy cut panties. She couldnt help the throbbing that was quickly shooting from her center and sending tiny shockwaves of warmth through each appendage. And at that moment she knew. Going home and taking care of that ever growing itch wasnt an option. She wanted Bette. She needed her. So slightly trembling and very nervous, Tina walked over to where Bette was with her back turned and let both of her hands rest of Bettes thighs, slowly running them up until they rested under the material of her shirt on her firm stomach. Bettes eyes once again met Tinas in the mirror, she saw the desire, the need, and yes; the fear in Tinas eyes. She turned around to meet the eyes that had cast that reflection and let herself sink into them for moments, trying to read what Tina was feeling, but she was met with lips instead. Soft, hot, and crushing against her own, Tina wrapped her arms around Bettes waist and pulled her gently until the back of her knees hit the bed, and she fell back with Bette on top of her. Tina Bette said quietly as she pulled up the blonde girl and helped her take off the t-shirt and sweats, then removing her own tank top. Bette gently pressed Tina back into the softness of the mattress and pulled a sheet over their semi-naked bodies. The sweetness of their ***** pushing together, their hips slowly rocking against one another, and their hands clasped resting on the pillow above her head was starting to become too much for Tina. As she felt the warmth growing in her center it was beginning to match the warmth growing behind her eyes as unshed tears began to swell, Bette saw it all and was worried. Tina, we dont have too, I just thoughtsince you But Tina cut her off. No, I want to. Its just soperfect. Tina removed her hand from Bettes and slid it up the other girls back to cup the back of her neck and pull her down to meet her own lips. They kissed for what could have been hours, but more realistically was minutes, until Bette broke the kiss and moved her hands down Tinas soft frame stopping when she was met with the elastic of Tinas underwear. She slid her hands under and pulled them down, letting Tina kick them off the edge of the bed, and then let her own join Tinas on the floor. Resting herself back in between those warm thighs she couldnt help herself when a moan escaped her lips at the feeling of Tinas wetness against her own. Bette Tina voice was low, almost like a raspy whisper and Bette strained to hear it not wanting to miss anything about this moment. She buried her head in Tinas neck, faintly noticing that she smelled like cherries and vanilla, and kissed and sucked her way down to her collarbone, to the valley between Tinas perfectly formed *****; taking time for each to flick her tongue over and nipple and suck on it gently. Feeling this beautiful woman writing underneath of her was like a dream, but she wanted heaven, so she continued her journey southwards; kissing Tinas stomach and bellybutton until she came to her shaved center. Placing a kiss on her mound, Bette sent a glance up at Tina who was watching her with half-lidded eyes, her pink lips slightly parted and glistening from her the saliva on her tongue, her strawberry and blonde hair still slightly damp from the rain was beginning to dry and curl about her shoulders leaving it wild and untamed. Bette had never seen anything as ***** as Tina her entire life. Snapping back into reality and the current situation at hand, Bette lowered her lips to meet Tinas soaking core and ran the tip of her tongue over her slit, opening Tina up to her greedy mouth. At this point Bette became insatiable, sucking and flicking Tinas ***** with her tongue, then adding two fingers into Tinas opening, setting a matching rhythm to Tinas already undulating hips. Moments later she felt Tinas right hand enfold itself in her silky brown curls, Bette brought her own right hand up and let it grip Tinas left resting on her stomach, as the blonde girls inner walls began to clench around Bettes fingers. Seconds later Tinas sweet voice filled the almost silent room. Ohah.mmgod, Bette she voiced as her ***** crashed over her sweat glistening body, filling her with warmth and unadulterated ecstasy. Bette pulled away after enjoying the rest of Tinas juices and moved back up Tinas body, placing a soft kiss on her lips making Tina open her eyes. They stared at each other for sometime before Bette felt Tinas thigh press gently into her, followed by slim fingers finding their way down to meet it. Unhh was the only noise Bette could muster as Tina rolled Bette onto her back and began thrusting into her gently. Bette was practically being driven crazy. The musty erotic scent of ***** in the air, mixed with the smell of Tina was filling her head. Faster T, oh please faster. She said breathlessly, and Tina complied, picking up the pace and letting her palm grind into Bettes *****. Both girls were breathing heavily and sweating, Tinas head buried in Bettes shoulder and Bettes fingers digging into Tinas back. Bette, come for me babe Tina said as she pulled back and looked at Bettes face, her nose was scrunched up like she was concentrating really hard and Tina couldnt help put laugh and put a kiss there. Open your eyes Bette. Bettes eyes opened and Tina whispered, Hey you. Bette gasped out, Hey, before being swallowed whole by her *****, Tohhh, Tina. Tina kissed her quickly and collapsed on top of Bette, attempting to roll off of her she was stopped by Bettes hands on her hips. Stay. Tina glanced at Bette with a raised eyebrow. I like feeling you. She said quietly and Tina grinned, me too, She said before snuggling her head onto Bettes shoulder. They laid like that for a bit until their breathing returned to normal and Tina rolled off to the side of Bette and shivered. Are you cold? No. Just a chill. Bette grinned at her and pulled some blonde strands back from her face. It felt like the room kicked up about 20 degrees as Tinas warm smile filled the room. The moment felt so far from real, like they were lost in a dream, a beautiful mess of tangled sheets and beads of sweat still trickling down their exhausted bodies. Bette wanted to know what Tina was thinking about when she was screaming out her name, what she was feeling, but it sounded so terribly clichd and girly to do that; so she kept quiet. She was just comforted by the fact that Tina had showed her love againfor the first time. Did that even make sense? she thought to herself. She looked back over at Tina who had dozed off and kissed her temple still damp with sweat and whispered, I love you so much. Tina, however, was not fully asleep, and was also not ready for the declaration. She wanted to say that very same thing to Bettebut hearing it made it so much more real. She was scared, she was young and right now, here, lying in Bettes bed was where she felt like she could spend eternity. Thats a long time for an 18 year old to grasp. So she panicked. She couldnt settle down, pretty soon her and Bette would be living together, then what? Theyd be an old married couple by the time they were 21Tina didnt want to be tied down, not now, not in the best years of her life. Scared out of her mind, Tina waited until she heard Bettes soft snoring and got out of the bed. She moved around the room silently, using what light she had from the outside to maneuver, she grabbed her clothes, well, Bettes; and put them on hurriedly. She scribbled a note and left it on the pillow besides that beautiful sleeping form. Tina walked to the window and cast a longing look back to the warmth of the bed, and a desperate look out into the rain. Silently she padded back over to the bed and placed a feather light kiss in between mocha colored shoulder bladed before moving back to the window, climbing out onto the small rooftop and using the nearby tree to get down the rest of the way. Her feet hit the sodden ground as she took fleeting look back at the window before running off down the street, bitter tears mingling with the sweet rain as she fled possibly her only chance at true love.
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(66 votes, average: 3.70 out of 5)
that was great. i cant wait to see bettes reaction when she realizes tina left. i hope everything works out for them.
You wrote a great love scene firecracker, don’t sell yourself short. Tina’s feelings of being tied down at a young age are very believable. I hope she comes around and doesn’t break Bette’s heart.
hmm.. I suppose Bette will wait for her. she has waited for Tina for how long?
Amazing…I love it! I think that it’s perfect that you are having Tina run from Bette like this. That is a big thing for an 18 year old. I should know…I’m only 19!! Just don’t keep her away too long…and let there be great make up sex!
You did an excellent job with the love scene and I love the way you keep things very realistic. 5 Stars!
One forgets the impetuousness of youth. You bring it back for us. Does anyone else think of Romeo and Juliet? Their (B&T) young love certainly has its obstacles – peer pressure, familial expectations, class differences, personal tragedies, and that watermark of youth, self doubt.
Thanks for making it new again.
So young,so full of love .So much to think about at 18. They both have so much to do in life.. If it doesn’t work out now it will in a few years. Beautifukly written .Thanks
Wow wow wow! This is great great story and great love scene for Bette and Tina. I
why? why? why? but insert before that wow! wow! wow!
WOW!!!so sweet…wow …Beautiful…tina go back….
Firecracker you write great sex! cant wait for the next chapter
That was amazing.
The rain storm at the beginning was perfect and set the story up for such a beautiful love scene. Thanks for another great chapter, can’t wait for the next one.
Good one firecracker. Poor Bette and Tina. Love is a big issue at such a young age. I hope Bette doesn’t feel too rejected and heart broken when she wakes up. I hope they can work this out.
Oddly I did not find myself in anyway mad at Tina leaving Bette after connecting with each other like that. She’s 18 after all and this fear, lost, confused but so intensely in love and all I find believable because you have made sure that the build up supported this reaction from Tina. I don’t think I have even felt this overwhelming empathy towards this character (Tina) as much as I feel for the Tina in this story and I credit this to your excellent story telling and writing style.
FireCracker… thank you for sharing this … it was indeed a beautiful read for me.
Tina turn around and go back…I guess you can’t blame her for getting scared and I too agree Bette will wait for her…I can feel Bette’s heart breaking already…great chapter, you did great!
Firecracker, you keep doing this. Every chapter is so amazing that I have to sit there afterwards and try to find words of my own to praise it. This chapter was incredible. The scene you wrote was so true to teenagers. Don’t sell yourself short…you captured the essence of the emotion. Your description of Tina becoming overwhelmed was dead on target.
I love seeing your updates! Can’t wait for the next.
You wrote awesome sex, if that’s how it happens, I’m on my way over. LOL. Thanks for writing, it made my day, and made me forget about my own sore ass for a bit. LMAO. You did great. AND… you are a cheeky lil shit!!!!
They have some rough waters to navigate…but with you as their captain I think they will eventually get to smooth sailing. Lovely and well done B&T connection.