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Leap of Faith (Chapter 10)
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“If that’s the case,” Shane said, making no effort to hide her discomfort, “you might have called rather than making your grand entrance at The Planet.”
“Point taken,” winced Carmen. “In fairness, though, I honestly believed that Jen told you.”
“What the fuck is her problem?” Shane’s explosion made Carmen jump. “I’ve had it with her!”
Dana was beginning to feel a bit foolish. While the pain had been horrible, it hadn’t happened again. In fact, she’d only had twinges since she arrived at the hospital. She gripped Alice’s hand as another hit her.
“This isn’t so bad,” she tried to reassure Al. “It’s probably nothing.”
“The good news is that these are not contractions, Dana,” Dr. Wilson said as she read the screen of the baby’s monitor. “But we need to find out what’s causing your pain.”
Tina snapped her phone shut, listening from the hall as Bette sang to Angel. She was certain that their daughter fell asleep by the end of the first verse, but knew that Bette wasn’t ready to say goodnight yet. She rarely was. Bette was faithful to her promise of never taking a moment with Angelica for granted. They’d had a nearly perfect day and, sexual harassment suit or not, Tina found herself wondering if tonight might be the perfect night to approach Bette with an idea she’d been toying with for weeks.
“Eavesdropping again?” Bette’s playful tone brought a smile from Tina, who’d been leaning against the wall.
“It’s the only way I get to hear you sing,” Tina giggled.
“Kit’s the singer in the family, not me,” Bette blushed.
“Babe,” Tina kissed her lightly, “you have a beautiful voice. Angel loves it too.”
It had been over an hour since the last twinge and Dana was restless. She asked again if she could go home and come back to see the doctor in the morning, but Alice put her foot down.
“No dice,” she answered with a fixed smile. “Dr. Wilson wants you for observation and you’re going to be observed, got it?”
“Yes ma’am,” Dana gave in, “but you should go home and get some sleep.” Even as she said it, Dana knew that Alice would not leave her side. “At least you should get your car out of the parking garage so it doesn’t get towed.”
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OY!!! Please don’t let the baby die or Dana in that matter!!! Poor Lara, I am glad Helena is there for her through this horrible time! Yay on B&T thinking about another kid!! YAY on Shane holding her ground with Carman, I think Shanes better off with Beth!!! Jenny will be Jenny GRRRR!! Another gr8 chapter Sammy, u know I love ur writing!!! PPS and I might need some help on the next chapter, I am not really a writer like you! Gr8 job again!!!
OOhhh new post exciting… or not, as a Danish obsessive you’re breaking my heart with these baby issues! I have faith that you’re gona bring our little family out unharmed but not before some torturing angst! I just know you’re a sucker for a happy ending lol… Anyway, I still love it! I feel bad for Lara, happy for Shane and Beth, confusion as always for Jenny but hey it’s all part of her charm – I was rewatching series 5 actually and I love her all over again, she’s annoying enough to be hilarious! Too much info? I think so… I’m done THANK YOU
Sorry for the delay in comment…thank you for writing as always…I really hope Dana and the baby are going to be okay…I wish I too could write my own life sometimes, but if we knew all the endings what would be the point of waking up every morning…Keep on writing, as you know this is my favorite fan fiction…
Ok OMG i searched Danish and fall upon this one…So i had alot to trail through but i eventually got here in the end…and sad to see its been a while since an update guessing that youre busy but i seriouslyu want to know if Dana and the baby are going to be okay.Are Helena and Lara heading for a break up??Too many thoughts on this one so update soonies
aaawww what u left me there??? sorry I left u a tall order in my previous comment. I’m okay altho the arthritis progresses into my hands. Really like your story. Can u plz make Dana not die? And another TiBette baby sounds wonderful. Look after Lara, she’s such a honey; as for the rest they seem okay for now. Look 4ward to next post.
Poor Dana! And Alice too. How heartwrenching that must be. I just hope the difficult decision leads to a healthy mother and baby. Poor Lara, too, but at least she has Helena with her. I’m not sure I quite understand what’s going on with Jenny and Carmen, but I like that Shane finally seems to have some happiness. This is excellent as usual!
I was having a pretty rough Monday morning, but, it certainly got better when I saw you posted. Even through the chapter had several sad parts, it was still excellent. Poor Lara and Helena. I hope they can find some way to make it through. Bette and Tina seem to be doing well. I am glad they decided to answer the phone. Shane and Beth seem to be surprisingly well matched. That is another couple I hope can make it. Shane seems to be able to be herself and finally maturing. Jenny and Carmen? Meh. I am glad that Dana made it safely to the hospital. Alice is doing a great job in supporting her partner. I can’t imagine the stress the two might be feeling as they wait for the results. I am very concerned about the “difficult decisions” that lie ahead. Thanks so much, SG!! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
i’ve read this a dozen times but i kept forgetting to comment….omg im scared this is such a happy time for them after everything..pls let baby and dana be okay! :S