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Laid Up: Another Season 3–Chapter 25B
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Carmen hopped out of the car and joined Alice at the back of the vehicle and they headed across the parking lot toward the restaurant. “Butch up your shoulders, stick out your chest.”
“Won’t I look more girlie with my tits sticking out?”
“Nah. Brush your hair back.”
Alice ran her hands through her blonde locks. At the door, Carmen stood and waited for Alice to open it. Alice stood beside her.
“What?” Alice said.
“Open the door.”
“You open the door.”
“I’m not some butch dyke, you are? Look at these shoes.” Carmen looked down at her feet, stuffed sexily in ‘come on and fuck me’ heels. “Are these the shoes of a butch? Hardly. Open the door for me.”
Alice paid attention and opened the big wooden door like she was bringing down the drawbridge for Princess Buttercup’s return.
“Look tough. Come on.” Carmen walked in, clicking her stilettos across the highly varnished hardwood floors.
The maitre’ d stopped them. “Good evening, how may I help you. . .” He looked them up and down. “. . . ladies this evening?”
Alice barked at him. “I’m here to pick up my woman. Dana Fairbanks.” She looked past him and into the main seating of the restaurant. “There she is.” Alice took a step forward.
“Miss. If you don’t mind. . .” he tilted his head, trying to encourage decorum on her part.
“I do mind. Excuse me.” She brushed against his shoulder and moved into the restaurant with Carmen following behind.
Alice walked straight up to the table. Stephan saw her first and looked up in surprise. “Yes?”
“No,” Alice said to him categorically. His head came forward in a question, but Alice looked down at Dana who was just turning to see her. “Dana, it’s time to go.”
“Hi, Al.” She grinned at her and gave her the once over–twice. It was an immediate and heated reaction to Alice in the black leather jacket, jeans, and sky blue Converse high tops that had Dana standing and reaching out for her. Normally, she would have been reluctant to show any kind of public display of affection, but Alice truly was her knight in shining armor. Stephan’s conversation had become stranger and the way he gazed at her made the hairs on her neck stick straight up. She took Alice’s hand in hers, but Alice let it drop before she really had a chance to touch her flesh.
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Oh. My. God. That was freaking awesome, but WHO TOOK BABY A?!? Already, it seems like a hours ago that I was laughing at Al and Dane and the armpit licking, and Bette whooping as she left the retreat, and wondering what Carmen was gonna do after she ran out of beers to pour out, and hoping Henry didn’t yell once that EEG showed Tina’s been dodging the pills, and hoping that Steph didn’t get too crazy with the vengeance, and that Hels would hear some news about Dylan and that Peggy would help her daughter track Dylan down, and fanning myself over that call of Bette’s that didn’t quite make it to voicemail, and cheering on Al and Carmen’s rescue of Dana from that Aryan-esque creep-all freaking bloody AWESOME- because all I can think about now is that SOME NUTJOB-Steph? Josh? Marcus?-TOOK ANGELICA! For the love of all things, I so hope you’re posting soon, Portia. But still, this was so good I have to say it thrice, AWESOME! Thank you for the chapter. I literally cannot wait for the next chapter. Cheers
Loved the quote: Gladwell who told a story that a friend of his told him: ‘to a worm in a jar of horseradish, the whole world is horseradish.’ … Glad you’re turning S3 & S4 horseradish into something far more palatable… ;-)
This was beyond belief, every time you post you amaze me, your writing is without fault, exceptional, brilliant, outstanding. My head is swimming…I see the season being what it should have been, thankyou. I know you take a while between posts, obviously it takes time to write…but plspls if you could don’t leave us hanging too long…really it’s going to kill me to wait…but I will, every patiently…THANKYOU PORTIA
Bette’s struggles at the Buddhist retreat, her desperate, heartbreaking attempts to communicate with Tina, that amazing “voicemail,” and all the other storylines are a tour de force, pure and simple. How totally cool to discover that you drew on Ossie Davis’s own words in your wonderfully rich portrayal of Melvin. Missing Baby A, needless to say, is a cliffhanger extraordinaire. A huge thanks for the effort you’ve put into this awesome story.
thanks! the time and effort that must go into this is unbelievable. please know how much i look forward to one of your updates.
What an absolutely brilliant story you continue to weave! I am awed that you are able to develop each character so fully. Loved, loved, loved your description of Bette lost in her memories of their reconnection during the ultrasound and subsequent afternoon delight. So sizzling hot while tender at the same time. Great read, Portia!
oh no, not the baby…what a cliffhanger…please,please keep the baby safe and get bette home asap…great as always
what a chapter… there was so much… stephine is a nut case… henry is at times not all there either… and i’m glad tina is getting better… all those meds… damm… enough is enough… but now to the important part… WHO THE HELL TOOK ANGIE… i hope it was maybe alice or shane and they just turn around with her in their arms… it better not be josh… if it is… well he will be dead in the next chapter… PPS…
First, I must say thank you for this extraordinary chapter. I’ve been home sick for three days and barely able to focus on anything but your 82 pages (damn, 82 pages!) kept me awake and reading. For some reason I had thought that you were finishing this story with this chapter (I don’t know why I thought that) so I was really excited to see that this wasn’t the end. I know how much time and effort it takes to write just two or three pages so I am truly impressed with this magnum opus!!
I’m leaving a comment in advance as there’s no way I can read 82 pages right now. FUCKING AWESOME! I didn’t even have to read the chapter to know that. lol
Wow!That was awesome! by far this is the longest psot I have ever reading! If your not thinking about a book please do so. You have some awesome talent!!! As for Baby, the suspects were set-up perfectly! Stephanie, Josh, Marcus. But you know I somepoint I had a feeling this would happen and for some reason I had Theresa as the perptrator! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Amazing, this chapter was just amazing the journeys you take us on in Bette’s memory are priceless. The advice her father gave her to the different expereinces between her parents have all been such amazing insight. Excellent. I just needed to tell you what an awesome job you’ve done. Thanks for writing it.
i can’t wait for the next chapter either this story is the bomb i enjoy stories that includes most of the gang..the arm licking was funny, weird but i thought it was cute lol :) grrrrrrreat work you do danish so well!!!
Fabulous! Please don’t let anything happen to Angelica, especially cuz her mama B is on her way home. I don’t know how either women could cope without her. Bring Dylan back for poor Helena. And tell Carmen to get that stick out of her butt :). Love, love, loved it! Can’t wait for more! Thanks Portia