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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty One (a HYD-inspired fic)
“I don’t..” Shane started.
“Excuse me..” A sweet voice interrupted their little discussion. “Your bottle of Crystal.” The waitress presented the bottle of champagne to the two with a smile before slowly bending down to fill their glasses.
“Thank you–” Shane trailed off, looking at the gorgeous waitress expectantly. Her eyes traveled the woman’s sexy and kinda skimpy uniform and smiled appreciatively, something the girl didn’t fail to notice.
“Abby.” The waitress supplied and smiled seductively as she placed the bottle on top of the table. “Do you need anything else?” She addressed the two in a polite manner, although she kept her eyes trained on Shane.
“I’m sure I can think of something you could give me later.” Shane half-smiled, her resolve to keep her end of the deal with Alice waning a little bit. A cough and a warning glare from the blonde in front of her brought her back from the pull of her libido. “Or maybe tomorrow or some other time..” She changed her tune to appease her annoyed friend.
“Okay.” Abby smiled lopsidedly. “You know where to find me.” She winked as she turned around and walked back to the bar, slowly swaying her hips the entire time.
“Damn.” Shane shook her head, her eyes glued to Abby’s magnificent ass. Alice rolled her eyes and lifted her glass once again to propose another toast, calling her friend’s attention back to her by snapping her fingers repeatedly.
“To you and your lifelong ambition of world pussy domination.” The blonde jeered, earning a chuckle from Shane.
“To you and your incurable and sleazy pussy and dick addiction.” The brunette countered as she lifted her flute and clinked it with Alice’s.
The two shared another hearty laugh as they downed their drinks. Declarations of ‘more’ and ‘one more time’ were exchanged and soon after, their glasses were once again filled to the brim.. ready for another round of merriment and celebration before they faced the music tomorrow morning. Their loud laughter cut through the noisy club air, calling attention to themselves from a few partygoers.
Abby reached the bar and smiled as she stole a quick glance at the VIP area. “Nice work.” Two drop dead gorgeous brunettes stood on either side of the waitress as they discreetly observed the toast happening in the distance. “Thank you Abby.” One of the girls slipped a hundred dollar bill inside the waitress’ pocket and smiled.
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(4 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)
Crikey, I just love this story. I often find myself laughing like a loon. I totally love Bette in this story. PPS
Fantastic chapter so funny wit Shane n Alice would been funnier if they had made a fake marriage certificate lolPPS
pmsl that was funny. It willteach Alice and Shane. Bette Tina loves noodles,don’t worry. Alchemy you are a star
That was great..can’t wait for more! PPS:)
i have to say i have felt the gambit of emotions on this story……last couple chapters laughing my ass off!! PPM!! :0)
OMG that was so freaking funny about Alice and Shane. Bette is so cute and funny too. Please more, thanks!
Poor Bette. Cooking is not her strong suit, but she is crazy smart and gorgeous so I think T will keep her!! lol. Love the story.
That was a really funny chapter with the cooking problems and the line about the instant noodles and the Alice and Shane thing LOL.So glad that you posted a chapter today because this story really brightens my day up.PPS
“I hope you guys like instant noodles.” – LOL!
Just loved how B&S got A&S back . That last line was so funny. This story is so Great!!! Thanks PPS
I am so glad U are back-I was getting spoiled by your Fab writing. Nice update. Love the last line about I hope U guys like instant noodles. Classic. Love the joke on Alice & Shane-that was great. I laugh so hard every time I read one of your updates. Thanks a lot.
This story never fails to keep me laughing! I love the revenge on Shane and Alice. Bette trying to be all impressive and having to admit her failings is so darn CUTE.