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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty One (a HYD-inspired fic)
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TUESDAY. The Players Resort and Casino, Penthouse Suite. Las Vegas. 8:10 AM.
“Mmmmmm..”
A throaty moan near her ear woke a very naked Shane McCutcheon up with a start. Oh God, she grimaced, her head throbbed and her ears were ringing. She couldn’t remember the amount of alcohol consumed last night, but it was more than enough to warrant a very bad hangover this morning. “Shit.” She cursed under her breath and slammed her eyes shut as her world started spinning a little bit. Uh-oh, she inhaled sharply when she felt an arm pulling her closer and hugging her from behind. Alice is gonna kill me! She swallowed hard. Despite making a pact, she ended up sleeping with someone after their champagne binge inside the club. Great, she sighed and shuddered as her companion started to rub her belly and place small nipping kisses on her shoulder. Just great, she stiffened a bit as she felt a wet tongue tracing small patterns on her back.
“Coffee Girl..” A breathless whisper tickled her ears.
What the fuck?! Shane’s eyes shot open as she heard a very familiar voice behind her. Her world was still spinning.. but she was sure it wasn’t because of the alcohol anymore. “A-Abby?” She called out tentatively, her voice cracking a bit. The last thing that she could remember was that she was flirting with a hot redheaded waitress last night. Holy shit.. she sniffled in despair.. please tell me I came home and slept with Abby.. or anyone else except..
“Abby?!!! What the fuck Da–” Alice shook herself awake from her semi dream-like state and violently flipped her companion around to look at her. She froze when she came face to face with an ashen and traumatized-looking Shane. The two stared at each other for a minute before..
“Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!”
A housekeeping lady passing by Penthouse Suite #1 dropped her feather duster in surprise as an ear-piercing scream reverberated through the thick, hotel walls. What happens in Vegas.. she shook her head and smiled. She bent down to retrieve her fallen cleaning tool and ambled on.
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“Fuck me!” Alice cried out as she paced the room wrapped in a sheet, her equally disturbed friend was rocking back and forth by the edge of the bed in her golden, slightly pimpy robe.
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(4 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)
Crikey, I just love this story. I often find myself laughing like a loon. I totally love Bette in this story. PPS
Fantastic chapter so funny wit Shane n Alice would been funnier if they had made a fake marriage certificate lolPPS
pmsl that was funny. It willteach Alice and Shane. Bette Tina loves noodles,don’t worry. Alchemy you are a star
That was great..can’t wait for more! PPS:)
i have to say i have felt the gambit of emotions on this story……last couple chapters laughing my ass off!! PPM!! :0)
OMG that was so freaking funny about Alice and Shane. Bette is so cute and funny too. Please more, thanks!
Poor Bette. Cooking is not her strong suit, but she is crazy smart and gorgeous so I think T will keep her!! lol. Love the story.
That was a really funny chapter with the cooking problems and the line about the instant noodles and the Alice and Shane thing LOL.So glad that you posted a chapter today because this story really brightens my day up.PPS
“I hope you guys like instant noodles.” – LOL!
Just loved how B&S got A&S back . That last line was so funny. This story is so Great!!! Thanks PPS
I am so glad U are back-I was getting spoiled by your Fab writing. Nice update. Love the last line about I hope U guys like instant noodles. Classic. Love the joke on Alice & Shane-that was great. I laugh so hard every time I read one of your updates. Thanks a lot.
This story never fails to keep me laughing! I love the revenge on Shane and Alice. Bette trying to be all impressive and having to admit her failings is so darn CUTE.