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In Too Deep Ch. 3
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“Hello ladies, welcome to my lair.” Shane laughed. Carmen and Helena looked around. “I’m glad to see that you didn’t get lost.” She got up from her chair. “Well first things first, let me introduce you to my family.” Shane walked over to Alice who was sitting at the computer. “This woman is Alice Pieszecki AKA AP. She’s the brain of this operation of mine, and she’s my business lady. She takes care of the business with our pathetic addicts.” Alice waved at the women. Shane walked away from Alice and walked over to Jenny. “This beautiful, but crazed woman here is my best friend and right-hand woman Jenny Schecter. She’s a deadly lil’ bitch so don’t cross her.” Jenny smiled softly, but her smile left shortly after. “And this lil’ guy here—is Onyx.” She patted her black pit. “He’s my baby, but he’s feisty.” She walked over to her desk and leaned against it. “Of course, I’m Shane,” she shoved her hands in her pockets. “I’m Lord LA as the people call me on the streets. So,” she looked at Carmen and Helena and smiled. “Let’s get to business ladies.”
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“All right, Helena come with me.” Helena followed Alice towards the money room. “This is our money room. This is where all of our profit comes to. I’m the one who runs this room besides Shane. We can’t trust anyone else in here, but we can trust you right?” Alice looked up at Helena.
“Yes you can,” Alice smiled and nodded.
“That’s what I like to hear.” Alice leaned closer to Helena. “The last person who worked in here and stole money from Shane. I guess you can say—he took a dirt nap, and it wasn’t pretty.” Helena swallowed hard as Alice told her this. “So Helena, you came from a rich family. Why in the fuck did you want to get in this business?”
Helena chuckled. “I guess because of the adrenaline rush you get. I love the feeling of being bad.”
“Oh do you?” Helena nodded and pressed her body against Alice’s.
“So what are you thinking about right now?”
“I’m thinking—if you don’t take one step back, you won’t be able to walk again.” Alice smiled as Helena backed up. “I’m sorry Peabody, but I don’t mix pleasure with business.” She walked away and clapped her hands together. “Okay, all you need to do is keep count of the money as it comes to you. Write it down in the books, and please—don’t come up short.” Alice winked at Helena and walked out of the door. Helena took a deep breath and put her hand on her hip. Jenny watched Helena through the screen from the security room.
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Damn this is bad. Poor Carmen, Shane is crazy bitch. Helena better careful or Jenny ganna kill her. Oh where is Tina, just wondering why she not in this story. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I just caught up with this story and, even though I read 3 chapters in a row, I’m already jonesin’ for another update. I have one question, though. Are Helena and Carmen supposed to be working WITH Shane or FOR Shane? At first I thought they’d be working with Shane, since they own Miami (or so they claim) and working for someone else would be a big step down for them. But it looks like Helena and Carmen are just Shane’s little bitches. I understand that they would have to prove their loyalty and such, but Shane treats them like dirt, especially Carmen, and they take it. They don’t really command the respect of two women who run a city. Well, that’s the only question I had. Other than that, the story is intriguing (I’m hooked). As far as the rape scene. . . umm. . . I just kept thinking of Carmen crying while this was all happening to her. And how fucked up it is for her. But Jenny is awesome as a total psycho. Alice’s “I don’t mix pleasure with business” motto is cool; she’s fricken cool (probably one of the more sane members of the family). Great work. I’m looking forward to the next update.
Okay I will admit ‘guiltily’ that this post was fucking hot. But I think it’s too early for Shane to start feeling guilty even though she just :raped: Carmen. Perhaps after a couple of days…then the guilt can set in. After all, Shane is psychotic ~eg~. I love Alice in this. And leave it to Helena to be so forward. She’ll get her fingers chopped off if she’s not careful. Jenny rocks like crazy…I love it. But back to Shane…should Carmen be in her bed this soon? Well,…can’t change that now except maybe turn it into a dream :p But still, I’m looking forward to more of this story and this update was hot as hell. PPS! Ah…poor Pam and Paul. muhahahahaha!!!….in light of the ‘evil’ of course.
wow wow wow! what a smashing chapter ACB!! uhm yeah… that whole ‘rape’ scene was a bit full on but pretty… hot… :S anyway , i love alice and jenny!! jeny is just well… u know, fucking crazy and i love it!!… and alice is pretty damn cool too.. but maybe she needs more scenes??… pretty please?? hehe.. fantastic work!! PPS!!
I’m still loving our evil trio! I agree Alice needs more screen time and so does Bette and Dana however this is so original and I think you’re doing an awesome job so far. PPS
i think this storey is fantastic. well done. pps x
i think this storey is fantastic. well done. pps x