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I wish i could remeber you Chapter 2
Tears welled up in her eyes as she turned to Alice. we need to go to the hospital Bette has been in a accident
L.A Emergency Room:
The EMTs swarmed Bette as she was brought into the emergency room. What have we got? A young woman asked dressed in scrubs and a white coat. Her name read Dr.Harris. We have a young female found in a car accident and unresponsive upon arriving on the scene, with trauma to the head and shoulder. One EMT replied. Dr. Harris began to check Bettes pupils. Okay guys let get her in Trauma 1 She said quickly as they began to wheel away.
Only seconds later did Tina and Alice come bursting through the door. What the ***** happened? Tina shouted.
Tina started to run down the hall way shouting for Bette . Alice had to hurry to catch up to her. Thats when she saw her. Tina all most passed out, there was Bette on a stretcher covered in blood and her clothes in rips. She even heard a slight gasp from Alice. Time seemed to slow down incredibly, she felt like she was in another world, shock not really fully coming to her. The Policeman came to grab her as she tried to run into the trauma room. Tina screamed a tried to fight free of the policemans grip, but he held her firm. If she could just get to Bette!
Inside the Trauma 1 Room:
They quickly rolled Bette in and began to asses the damage. Blood was all over Bette, and pouring out of her head and shoulder. OK guys lets get a chest tube and a CBC and stop the bleeding to the head and shoulder Dr. Harris yelled. Once a nurse handed her the materials she opened Bettes mouth and inserted the tube down her throat. While she did that another Doctor was inserting a needle in Bettes side to remove some fluid of Bettes chest. Instantly blood began to pour out. He quickly looked up at Doctor Harris Damn it she is bleeding internally! Before she had a chance to respond the machine that monitored Bettes heart went off. Indicating the her heart rate dropping. Stats are dropping, Damn it Ms.Porter stay with us! Suddenly she flat lined.
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(75 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
OMG………..you can’t leave it there!!!!!!!!!
You can’t leave us there…. please post again ASAP!?
this is getting good..keep it up
OMG!!…. you cant leave us like this!!
excellent…keep going!!
I LOVE IT I AM HANGING BY A THREAD
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS THE REST?? POST–PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!
You cant just stop there. Post more. Pleaz
I’m holding my breath, soon I will have to be rushed to the emergency room…Please post soon!
excellent !!!!
nicely written,ark.
i am liking this story very much .
i had this idea in my mind for quite sometime now but as i am not a writer i was just taking my time . i really wanted someone to write about this idea and i am glad that u r writing about it . ur writing is excellent . keep it up . i can’t wait to see how u proceed with this story . pls post soon . i can’t hold my breath for too long (lol) . don’t keep us hanging for too long .
do u have an email ? i would like to talk with u . thanx
and gr8 job . five stars!! to u all the way .
OMG
Oh my god, this is bad and please post the next one really soooon, thank you!
We can’t lose Bette, if we do we will lose Tina also. thanks
so continue soon….i love drama…and you are at the top of this list….thanx
so continue soon….i love drama…and you are at the top of this list….thanx