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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT33
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"You know Shane, if I hadn’t of fallen down the steps and had you come and done your knight in shining armour impression with that ‘tell me what’s on your mind’ look, I would of sat in that chair and brooded, wound myself up and we would have had a full scale row about my father and everything that goes with it because I probably would’ve got defensive and… you know what I’m saying, right?"
"I think so! You know Bette I have to say you do seem so much calmer than I’ve seen you in a long time, maybe everything that happened last week has made you see things from a different perspective, and that’s not a bad thing y’know."
"Yeah, you’re right, I think we stopped telling each other how we were feeling, you know getting lost in everyday life and not thinking about the little niggly things that were bugging us, just letting them go, and ignoring them until them came and bit us both on the ass!"
"That’s life sometimes Bette, its called getting stuck in a rut, it happens, but the most important thing is that you recognized it and you got yourselves out of it before any real damage was done."
"Do you know what we did yesterday, and don’t you dare utter a word of this to Alice!!" Bette warned with a smile and a point of her finger.
Bette’s question and warning was met with a raised eyebrow and the look that she knew to say ‘as if you really needed to say that!’
"We did Alice’s relationship test…" Bette watched Shane’s face for a reaction, but all she was met with was a small smile and a nod of the head.
"Did it help you?"
"It was… interesting…" Bette said, remembering the afternoon on the beach with a mixture of emotions, "and what I won’t be telling Alice is that I actually learnt quite a lot from it, you know she’d just have a field day if she knew that!"
"Yeah but she wouldn’t be Alice if she didn’t!"
"True, hey lets get some more beers and when Tina’s finished in the shower we can order the pizzas," Bette moved toward the fridge and pulled the door open.
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SO!!!!HOT!!!!! Please we need part 2 very soon.
Hot Hot! You could feel the sexual tension!Sidenote- I may be an idiot but when you say “vest” does that mean like a tee-shirt or blouse or something. I am trying to picture but i am not sure what to picture.
really great, they are both playing with each other and bette just score some points
funny so funny Bette was doing so good! please the next part! i can’t wait to read the next!
SUCH A TEASE!!!!!
you are a bad bitch Jo — that was amazingly loving as well as hot as an august day on the sun. it was excellent and you rock — people who do not read your stories are fools
Well Jo, first you had Bette showing restraint in not joining Tina in the shower. Then you had Bette showing restraint in not responding to Tina’s nakedness. Then you had Alice seeing the signs of Bette having been in restraints. Which led to Bette not showing any restraint with Alice.
That was so mean to just stop there. Come on you have to hurray up and post again. OMG, Bette’s naked, well maybe not, but maybe she took off the wet jeans. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh, I would have dropped more than the towels.
YOu would stop there wouldn’t you? What did Tina see to make her utter the words. O M F G? Was Bette w/o her t-shirt or completely naked? WHAT????? Post soon please.
Wow – I love this story! This first part was plenty hot so I can’t imagine how hot the second part will be. A playful Bette certainly makes for a sexy Bette and then you put her in Levi’s and a white t-shirt…hmmm. Please post soon.
You are going to kill us with the 501 jeans and no bra on Bette. Love this side of Bette most of the time she is so straigh=lacebut when she has fun she goes all out. Falling in the pool was funny but getting out will be OMG so HOT. thanks so much now post the rest thanks
That is right Tina, OMG Bette must have removed herself from the pool. With your marvellous use of words I feel as I am one of the gang viewing this scene. Alice and her jokes. I almost feel out of my seat when she started making those comments about Tina tying Bette up. You make me fall in love all over again with Bette and Tina. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
WoooHoooo I love Bette’s playful banter. Tina you’re in so much troubllllllle!
Another great chapter JB – you’re so good at this!
R NC-17 …I don’t care…as long as you are writing…and I can’t wait..Bette Porter in a wet t-shirt braless…that is heaven.
HOT, HOT, HOT! Please, please continue with Pt2 asap!
Please go on, I’m waiting for what’s in store! Hopefully, it’s hot sex between B&T!
Jo, this chapter is so much fun to read and it brings a smile to my face. I love the playfulness of Bette and I can’t wait to read part 2 where things I am sure are going to heat up.
Ok, this is me begging!!! You are such a tease, totally!!! The heavy/light mixture of this story is absolutely perfect…now off to write your apology for this wonderful tease!!! tks
Sure, I would have liked both parts of this chapter to be posted at the same time. However, if both were posted I’m pretty sure I wouldn’t have a computer to type on since it would have spontaneously combusted and been engulfed in flames….and I’m sure I would have as well. For the love of all that is good in this world, please post part two VERY soon. By the way, if any sex will occur on a counter top/table please let me know so that I read that chapter in an area that’s well ventilated.
WOW! This is going to be good, please continue and make it soon.
Can’t wait to read what other “torture” Bette has in mind. AT this point, I don’t think too many of us mind a little groveling from Tina. Post soon, and thanks for writing!
SWEET……UPDATE ALREADY..HELLO!!!!
pretty please post chapter 2! chapter 1 lived up to the teasing that I hoped B would give T. it’s a lot of fun! thanks for making me smile at work!
oh this is good. I love Bette in this story. Tina is in so much trouble! but then again so is Bette!
Hey….Well it appears that the only thing better than a “Jobadge” PG rated …is a “Jobadge” NC17….Excellent chapter….Has absolutly everything!..Hot,Sexy..And Fun…Way to go hun…
hot bette wet in those jeans and that shirt your right tina omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, well, well, what do we havce here then. A perfect interlude into the lives and loves of Bette and Tina. I loved the gentle teasing and tormenting that thes gals are involved it. Such wickedness is sensual and hysterical in equal measures. The wet tee-shirt look is definitely in and a delightfully devilish way to repay Tina. I can’t wait to see what part 2 brings. As always, it is down to your creative and crafty cogitating and conjuring that entertains so much. Thank you for bring so much light into these lives. Your Loyal Fan.
This was fabulous!! I could see in my mind those jeans and t-shirt, and pictured with glee Bette and Alice falling in slow motion into the pool!! Thanks!
Hey mate, I’m at work but I just had to look for at post from you and I wasn’t disappointed (I never am when it comes to you and your writing!!!) I love this playful side you have Jo and bring out in our girls. Bette is soooo bad, but Tina deserves it. I just hope that Tina doesn’t get angry, when she discover that Bette has been playing with her and let her belive that they still wasn’t 100% okay after the ugly row. Brilliant writing mate – I love it and please send me a pic of what Tina is looking at :o)) Talk to you later, T xx
feelin hot hot hot…is it jus me or the temp jus rose few hundred degres..will yo posty soon:)
I so love this! Excellent chapter Jo. ^_^ Let the game continue!
omfg is right, i can see what tina’s seeing but can u please hurryup and spell it out…i love the way u have written these characters….
what was that…..the sensuality was dripping from my screen. Running for towels Jo…..
This is hot and funny!