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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT30
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“Of course, any reason in particular?” Bette’s mind quickly went over the fact that they had not yet discussed ‘the statements’, she wasn’t sure if she should bring the subject up, not wanting to burst the bubble of happiness they had been floating in since their arrival at the hotel the day before.
“I don’t wanna go home yet, I still want it to be just me and you and nothing else, does that make sense?”
“Perfectly sweetie, I can’t say I’m too enthralled to have to go back either to be honest.”
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Bette and Tina entered the foyer of the hotel, sorry to close the door on the room in which they had made so many special memories during their weekend.
With the bill paid they made their way toward the doors, oblivious to the onlookers admiring the adoring couple walking hand in hand. Bette walked them over to the concierge before leaving, shaking his hand and handing over the folded notes as her thank you for his extra special treatment and for managing to fulfill her requests in such grand style.
“Ms Porter, thank you so much,” the concierge received the notes in his usual cool manner, “and I have a little something for you!” He handed her an envelope and winked at Tina.
Bette opened the enveloped, looking at Tina and the concierge in turn, looking inside she found numerous photos and a memory card, all taken the previous evening of Bette and Tina in the foyer.
With a hug and thanks from them both the concierge ushered them out of the door into the late Sunday morning sunshine, carrying their bags to the car and casting admiring glances at them both, knowing in his own mind they were special, a couple that you wouldn’t forget, a couple that would come and stay at the hotel again and he would instantly remember, a couple you would go the extra mile for, knowing how much it was appreciated.
The journey to the beach was made in relative silence, both women’s minds travelling over the previous and day and night, they thought they had already moved mountains in their reconnection since Thursday, but their time at the beach the day before, the evening in the restaurant, the night and morning of intense, sensual and erotic passion surpassed anything, the unspoken depths between them significant in the way they looked at each other, both knowing how far they had really come, both understanding the journey they had made in their relationship, both knowing that even though seven years had gone by, they were still learning, still accepting and still working hard.
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Another typical Jobadge chapter—hot, sexy, romantic, and loving.
I do so love this story. It makes life bearable agin. The love that these two have can not be put into words. They now have come to a point that they can share every and anything with each other. I just hope that a possible baby does not take that away from them. If my brain is correct isn’t there another tape out there? The gallery tape that Bette went back to get. Now add that one and this tape you have a beautiful evening with just the two of them. Thank you for this tantalizing chapter to this wonderful story.
Awww… that’s what I all need from Bette and Tina. No drama, just sexy and love.. Thanks for the lovely chapter. :)
i am so happy to read another post from you! a wonderful let me tell you! is good to know they will arrive home with more love, more passion and confidencia with each other! i hope read another post soon thanks for this!
Good chapter. They are so hot and sexy, romantic, love them. Oh the tape cant wait to see Tina reaction when she see the tape. Ok post soon please, thanks!
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ahh you know how to make a woman glow just be reading something, that was fantastic, thank you very much
“Do you think we could spare a little bit of that immeasurable amount of love and bestow it on a child that we create together, a child that will bring us closer, not drive us apart, because when we look at that child we will know that she was created because of our love for one another.â€Absolutely beautiful! What a perfect post.
That was perfect JB! I love the way you describe how B&T are so connected – that even their minds drift together. LOL = the laundry fairy and the packing fairy! :) So Tina’s going to make potpourri with Porter’s petals, huh? How sweet it is! I hope Bette keeps those love marks on her wrists under wraps, or Tina’s ‘prim and proper’ reputation may be thwarted! Ha! Ha! I love your story and your writing and as always I can’t wait for more!
what rating was that joseph ? only you could make that hotter than some people’s nc17 chapters – in fact you could make the phone book erotic. oh – happy anniversary to you and your woman – i’m sure one of you deserves a medal but not sure which one…. x
this post was so long due…hhaha but i am glad you posted thank ya love it and oooh jb in levis hot hot hot
Wonderful to see this update, loved it and them together. Their love surpasses all others. It will always be one to measure others by. Thanks for a lovely story.
Your breast-mate is right, you could make the phone book hot and sexy!!! Yes Jo I could spot “it” and will you stop it – it’s so not true…..okay maybe a little…..okay a lot actually LMAO. But as I’ve said many times before, you’ve only your self to blame with amazing and wonderful writing :o)) It seems like you’re on a roll here – I love it and thanks for bringing The Jeans back. Have a great Sunday.
Well, that was one action packed weekend, and it’s not even over. You better offer us all a slice and a beer for the party, we’re all going to be there.
Tina better start shopping for a replacement pair of 501s right now.
Jo…Tis true. Just as the sunrise follows the moonset. You just have an erotic way of writing. You can’t help it. It’s either in your DNA or “In Those Jeans”. It’s amazing how simple denim cloth can conjure up the most delightful fashion and images in the right hands. It seems to me that if your writing is this erotic then your woman is very lucky.
Thanks for the update! this is such a great story! hmmm, will alice see those marks on B’s wrists?? can’t wait to find out!
Hey…well since the Levi`s first appeared….ive found it increasingly harder to NOT check out a Levi clad ass…lol…ths chapter has`nt helped….thats a good thing!……The whole chapter was as always…excellent in every way,very romantic,with a touch of mushy,…bordering on getting hot…and ending with `What an incredable love you`ve shown`…as always im in awe..
just perfect…thanks
I’m amazed, think i fall in love with you, matter of fact, i fall in love with all of you fanfic writers ;)