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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT10
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I though we could spend the evening together PT 10
Previously
As their stroking intensified, intuition took over and they both knew that within the next few seconds their blissful union would simultaneously reach their pinnacle, their bodies jerked, their bodies stilled, the waves overtaking them, allowing them to concurrently float into oblivion, their lips motionless as their peaks gently subsided.
The noise of the water droplets roused the two souls from their oblivion; their lips had maintained contact throughout, currently still, breathing being sustained through their nasal passages. Their foreheads met as the lips finally and gently parted, the beads of water trickling down the foreheads, along the bridges of their noses, tenderly caressing the bruised lips before rolling down over their chins to begin the descent over curves, peaks and through valleys.
“God, I love kissing you” Bette whispered.
As Bette and Tina began to get ready for their day, Bette decided to dress casually in her tight faded 501 jeans, white collarless loose fit shirt and her favourite tan boots, believing she was dressing for the comfort of having to re-hang some art work at the CAC and knowing she had no appointments. What she didn’t realize and was completely oblivious to was Tina watching her reflection in the mirror, every move as the denim was slowly pulled over the long lithe legs to cover the lacy thong, every button being done up on her shirt to cover the smooth taut stomach, the rounded breasts ensconced in cream lace, the neck of the shirt hanging loose around the sensual slender neck. Tina watched as if in slow motion. God she loved that woman.
As Bette finished dressing she glanced at the mirror to check her appearance, her eye being caught by the intense look flooding from her partner, as their reflective gaze met Bette smiled and turned to face Tina.
“Are you OK babe, is something wrong?” Bette enquired.
Their eyes remained locked as Tina got up and walked over to Bette, she placed her arms around her neck and allowed their noses to rub together, gently resting their foreheads together. Bette encircled her arms around Tina’s waist and pulled her in close.
“I know you have to go into work but I wish we could spend the rest of the day together” Tina whispered.
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Ah, yes, 501 jeans, one of the great contributions of American culture, and I have no doubt that anyone remotely resembling Ms. Beals would stop traffic in them. What is it about Alice that has prevented her from maturing beyond the social level of a 13 year old?
Oh yeah! Not sure I’d want to wear the scratch and sniff wrist band, but amused at the concept.
i think i’m too straight and too foreign, i didn’t get the wrist joke LOL…anyway, thank goodness Alice mentioned not to hire female carpenters, i hope Bette will listen to that
Great update and the little details really adds to the story!! Please continue!
I totally agree with honda90….we need this and the way you deliver it – it’s just brilliant and fucking amazing….and what makes this especially lovely is the small stuff like the jeans (I would love to see that vision LOL), Bette getting late to work, T touching Bettes butt and so on….will you post more often if I beg???? Because I’m willing too LOL
Jesus…you had me at “Faded 501s” tightfitting ones at that! then to add to it you went on and on about em!..you have no consideration for mybloodpressure..didnt have to be NC17 to get us all hot n bothered the thought of “The Hot One” in faded 501s…….Sigh…seriously i cant tell you how much his story,their reconnection was beautiful sad sexy romantic,very emotional and so very hot.loved the humour in this post and by the sound of it when Bettes done with work we may be in for an even hotter night,you write it so well…looking forward to it…lol
Wow, good “bow” to the Season 1 finale with the reflection visual and..oh, what a different outcome. I mean, had they stopped….had they talked that night as you have so beautifully illustrated, we all would be in TiBette bliss. But no, where are we now? Feeling like we have misplaced a year of our lives going through pain of fictional couple .who act like the year never happened. We are literally .beggin’…pleadin; for at least one kind word or gesture like a hound begging for scraps! Looking at the level of fanfic activity, I believe many of us are just plain numb. Oh…the agony!! Thank you….thank you for sharing. This story (as with many on the site) is a good relationship lesson. I almost fell over when Al said the word carpenter word. I forgot there was no Candance fiaso in this story, whew!
Jesus, i’ve just read all the chapters in 3 hours! I just found this site today and couldn’t wait till work was finished to read them all. I’m so happy, cheerfull,wound up,HOT and above all on cloud 9 with this wonderfull ” good-feeling” story. I’m dutch and missed S2 but watching S1 ap.3, this is much better. Please continue….. I can’t sleep with exitement! THANK ” Bonaire”
Okay,501 Tight fitted ones.That is as far as I got. Then she dropped her purse and bend over.Gone again what can I say HOT thanks
I love what you are doing with this. It is lovely.
Yeah Bette is hot and sexy. Alice is crazy!
this was amazing. it just proves how sexy and erotic words can be if properly used, loved the verbal and non-verbal interaction between bette and tina.
This is like a breath of fresh air, we need more stories like this to offset S3..What I really loved about this chapter is the small stuff…the description and feelings with the jeans…touching on the butt, the legs intertwined, everything like this is sorely missed in S3 and in a lot of stories. You don’t know what you miss til it’s gone, tks for bringing it back, as a request…more like this pls…and thankyou!!!