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I Fall Behind pt.1
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“Bette Porter, when will you admit to yourself that
you have a problem?” Alice’s exasperated half-scream turned
several heads in the direction of the corner booth at the Planet.
Bette felt a flush of heat rise from her collar and burn her ears.
Trust Alice to turn an intimate conversation between friends into a
voyeur’s spectacular wet dream.
“Alice, your voice!” Bette hissed, “And in fact, I
do not have a problem. It’s you and your licentious post-modern
values…”
“Blah, blah, and again, blah. Bette come on. Listen to yourself.
You know that you only turn into walking thesaurus
when you’re defensive. So what’s with the licentious hoo-ha and
post-modern *****? You know I’m right and you need help.”
Alice’s voice had decreased in volume but not in
intensity. For the past year, she had watched Bette and waited for
signs that her friend was not in trouble. Alice has always felt a
sort of sisterly concern for Bette, and felt a sense of
responsibility for her happiness. Maybe it was because Bette was so shy
and diffident. Alice knew for a fact that Bette had a brilliant mind
and a fragile heart. That heart was broken once and apparently forever
by a woman Alice has swore to kill the next time she sees her. But
Alice has not lost hope.
“Listen Bette, I think I may have found the perfect solution to your problem.”
“Jesus Alice, I really don’t think you should call
my abstinence from ***** a problem! It’s completely voluntary! It’s a vow
even. You were there when I made the vow, remember?”
“Yeah yeah. A year ago today, you made a vow to
never have ***** again. You toasted Athena. But Bette, you were drunk. I
didn’t think you’d remember that!”
“I do. I remember every single word that passed my lips. And I’m going to do it. I’m keeping that vow.”
“For what? Tell me Bette, why did you even make that vow in the first place?”
“Because…” Bette’s voice drifted off. Alice saw her face visibly droop and thought, “oh no not again!”…
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Like new biginnings and this one lookes intresting. On to read the next chapter. Thanks
great start make the post longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have a crazy Bette that hadn’t had sex witha person in a year. A nutty alice Candace that didnt want Bette,she will return aTina ina n escort service. I feel like I’m on a ferriswheel, thanks
Noe this is sure different, like to see where this is going, wonder if Helena owns the agency Tina works for. Seen as you have got rid of Candace already, or have you. Look forward to your next post.
ooooohhhhhh very hilarious. i like this crazy bette, she seems like… i don’t know. but please do continue. i wanna see where dis iz goin. PEACE
This is interesting. Nice set up. Let’s see how this story continues, please.
looove!!
Interesting! Look foward to see what comes next.
ok now you have a group of very intrigued readers, a crazy Bette, and a escorting Tina, and an arrangement for tomorrow night…sounds to me like the recipe for hot fun…can’t wait
hmmm. very unusual. ok. hit me with your best shot baby. cant wait to see where this leads.
and i bet the candace will be back right when B&T will began having more fun, interesting…
This is so fucking hilarious and very interesting and let see what’s next, thanks!