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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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CHAPTER 17
We eventually fell asleep.
I woke up and glanced at the clock. It was 2 am. I looked over at Tina, her shirt was wet again. This time I noticed that she was crying but she was still sleeping.
“T” I whispered. But that did not help. Her eyes were darting back and forth, breathing labored. Then I gently shook her awake.
“T, can you please trust me enough to tell me why you can’t sleep and when you sleep you wake up sweating?”
Tina opened her eyes completely, hesitating before embracing the trust I offered.
“Ok Bette, I will try. I am a twin. My brother’s name was Eric and just before we were to come here we were on our way to my friend’s house. Eric was driving. A guy in a semi truck fell asleep at the wheel and hit us head on”
“Oh my God T !!!! I am so sorry” said Bette, completely shocked by this revelation.
“When I woke up, the car was upside down. I crawled out but my hands were too damaged to help him. Somebody called the police. Almost as soon as I got out of the car, it exploded and he died”
While she was telling me this, her tone was of total detachment, like it had happened to someone else. I held her like she had held me only hours before. There wasn’t much said for some time. I tried to fight sleep, for I wanted to make sure she was able to fall asleep again, but I found myself engulfed by the silence of the night, and succumbed to sleep. When I woke up, Tina was in the kitchen. I got up and went to the bathroom. Then I went in the kitchen.
“T, did you get any sleep last night?” I asked.
“No” she said.
“Maybe you should see a doctor about not sleeping” I said.
“I am fine” she snapped, “Bette I am sorry to snap at you, I am ok really. What are your plans today because I want to take you somewhere?”
“Nothing really. I have a few calls to make. I need to check in with Maggie then I am all yours”
“Good. Can you meet me back here at 1pm? Will that give you enough time to get all the things you need to do?” asked Tina.
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!