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Hidden Secrets Pt 8 B
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After a few minutes of watching carmen sleep, shane slowly lowered herself from her position against the headboard and layed down next to carmen… as she moved carmen sturred a little in her sleep and cuddled further into shanes side… shane smiled and softly curled the hair in carmens face behind her ear… she watched carmen sleep for a moment longer… memorizing every curve on her angelic face.. how her skin flushed to a redish tint and her lips slightly trembled after crying and couldn’t help but notice how beautiful she looked.
Shane sighed contently.. knowing she would never let this women go and leaned over placing a soft kiss on her lovers lips before whispering "i love you" and snuggling closer to her… she closed her eyes and fell asleep almost instantly…
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When Shane woke up the next morning, she could feel Carmen’s soft lips pressed into the side of her neck in her sleep, she smiled when she realized Carmen was practically lying on top if her… after all it was only a twin size bed…
She slowly opened her eyes.. grunting as the sunlight coming in through the window, blinded her… she moved slightly covering her eyes with her free arm… Carmen stirred slightly and mumble something in Spanish.. causing Shane to chuckle lightly before moving her hand away …
As she bent head to the side and watched her lover sleep, she moved Carmen’s luscious locks out of her face and placed a feather soft kiss on her lips… a devilish smile rose on her face, when she felt Carmen’s lips move against her own, begging for more and decided to have a little fun…
Shane slowly turned Carmen over onto her back and used her free hand to lightly message Carmen’s left breast …she continued to pluck away at her girlfriends lips, desperately trying to wake her up… when Carmen began to moan in her sleep and slightly arched her back,.. Shane whispered "baby"
But Carmen still didn’t wake up… so she moved the hand that had been massaging Carmen’s breast, lower… Carmen grunted at the loss but then her breathing hitched as Shane began to lightly grind the palm of her hand into Carmen’s mound… she smiled at her girlfriends reaction and kissed Carmen again… this time Carmen woke up.. opening her mouth to deepen the kiss, Carmen wrapped her arms around Shane’s shoulders..pulling Shane completely on top of her..
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Really like it but, I get the feeling you don’t like Jenny that much lol it’s just that when you write her name is always jenny and not Jenny and with her is the only character that you do that, I think its funny lol but really cute story
New chapter! YAY!! I’m loving this story… can’t wait to see the date. ;)
Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ it!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!
Wow, this seems like a completely different story than when it first began. I mean, I don’t get a sick feeling in my stomach at the thought of Mark anymore (in fact, that part where Carmen had to ask for his help because she’s too short to reach the hatch was adorable), and Shane is so much happier now, more content now that she’s cleaned up and is with Carmen. Everyone, including the gang (with regards to Mark), has certainly come a long way. I love it. I can’t wait for Sharmen’s date, and I’d love to see where you take the story from here. Great job.
Hey I love this story it’s very sweet. I really do hope you keep going with it. And you know you should bring this over to the Shane/Carmen fanfic site I know all the readers there would really love it!
Yay for this new installment ! How lovely they all are, no useless drama, sweetness and fun. Keep it up !
amazing simply amazing, what more can i say……. i love this fic and cant wait for the date , shane and carmen in love are soooo cute i love seeing them like this please keep it up and post soon
:Sniff:…Okay, before this gets any sappier, I wanna say…I’m really, really enjoying this story. Smooth flowing development…I can feel the mush-o-meter rising but I guess Shane deserves some mush in her life. Just be careful, I think it’s waaay too early for Sharmen to get ‘cute’ as in ‘fuzzy slippers’ cute, but then maybe I am just being paranoid. Keep ’em coming please!