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Hesitation
Her mouth is so sweet, hot, thorough and persistent.
This isn’t the first time we’ve kissed, but this is the first time we’ve kissed like this.
Our tongues are slick as they move. Her mouth feels like uncharted territory that I explore with barely restrained enthusiasm. She taste amazing and the light coating of tinted Chapstick she had applied to her mouth, is now smeared across my own lips. She tastes of strawberries and smells of flowers. Her assault on my senses is persistent and I love it.
The voyaging of my tongue in her mouth gets impeded by the scrape of her teeth as she tugs my lip into her mouth. There’s a soft pull—the perceptible feeling of blood traveling to the surface of the skin anticipating it to break but it does not come because she is gentle and teasing when her hot tongue eases along the swollen flesh she has bruised.
It makes my heart beat widely and I feel a rush of blood everywhere but that’s not all; a flood of epic proportion is settling elsewhere too, making me groan as my mouth reclaims hers with the sole purpose of devouring.
But I rein it in.
I slow down and Tina takes the opportunity to leave our kiss and her mouth begins its determined journey along my jaw. Her agenda is clear, *she* has no intention of slowing down. Her breath is warm and heavy as it slides across my cheek.
I curse. I cannot help it. Her lips are now suspended on my earlobe, moist, warm, playful and her soft words trickle straight into my brain, whispered, breathed. She is definitely sure about what she wants and she tells me in no uncertain terms.
She wants me that much is clear; over, on, around and inside her. The litany of prepositions are no propositions, they are very real as she begs me to show her and teach her.
While every aspects of her desiderata explode in my brain like perfectly timed and synchronised fireworks, I am now nervous, very nervous.
She arrived earlier on. When? I am not sure. Time seems to have suspended when she dropped her overnight bag by the front door and jumped into my arms where she still is, right now.
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Awesome
Brava…brava. *standing ovation*…Kins, if you were my woman, I’d celebrate your birthday everyday…wwwooooowww. Happy birthday my dear and many more to come.
Phew woooooooooooooooooooooow.What more can i say.Awesome,fantastic,beautiful even.Happy Birthday A.
Good Lord Woman!! That was soooo HOT and beautiful. Happy New Year to us and a Very Happy Birthday to you!
Whoa……*thud*..i die..
💋💋💋💋💋💋 Kins40! You are the bomb. Absolutely love this post. Thank you for changing season 3 for me. You made it so much better. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I thoroughly enjoyed your birthday gift to us and yourself. Your words take flight.
My My! Can you tell I’m from the South? ( pardon the pun)
My birthday was the 11th, so I think this story is more of a birthday present for me than for you, Kins. A breathtaking piece, literally. So good, and yet, so naughty at the same time.
That was hottt. wow. Happy birthday.
That was amazing thank you so much. Happy new year and happy birthday. May 2013 bring you all that 2012 didn’t.
Happy Birthday and thank you very much for this story! Can’t wait for more from you :)
Happy Birthday. May you have a blessed year.
And this is why you are MY favorite ! Thank you so much for such an amazing post. I’m in complete awe, speechless as I am breathless. And here I thought people receive gifts on their birthday not give them :] Happy birthday my friend and happy new year !
Great 2013 opening one off
Happy birthday to you and thank you for this awesome story.PPS
…I need a cold shower…
K,that was mouth-wateringly good but like I always say you never fail to amaze me. Happy birthday and happy new year to you also. I have Pm you a few times think something is going wrong somewhere.
It’s your birthday and we get the present
Gee kins, they took all of the good comments. They said it all! So, thank you for giving us one, very hot first time for the fav couple. It had so much to it. The movie in my head played over and over again after I read it. I’m sure it will make for some wonderful dreaming tonight. You are one very talented writer and I’m in awe of you!
A little late…but I hope you had the best birthday ever. Thank for for sharing this amazing story.
Wow!! Happy birthday Kins!! And thanks for the present!! … A bit late, I know… But… You know, breath through your mouth… I meant blow through your mouth! Blow the candles… You know… ;-p hehehe…it’s amazing writing! :) and can be used as a tutorial for first timer-IMHO :-D
Awesome and beautiful, love it
sexy, sexy, sexy, I love when you describe in detail their love making I can picture it, not in a pervert way, but in a way of two people expressing their love
Just read this again and WOW, just as amazing as the 1st time! You blow me away my friend.
Right! OK! Yes, WOW! Righttttt, OK! Yes……………
My God, you’re fantastic!
Congratulations !!