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Great Unexpectations Chapter 24
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Previously…
"Faye", Bette began. "We came over here to tell you that we would help you. But with this new information…well, um." Faye’s eyes turned as grey as her hope. "We will still help you. But you need to understand that we have a family also."
"Of course", Faye said numbly.
"If it any point we feel that our family is at risk we will drop out. I hope you can understand that. We can’t risk anything happening to our daughter."
Faye’s tears flowed down her cheeks. "I would expect nothing less. Thank you so much." She grabbed them both in a strong hug, her gratitude making up for her weakness. The women couldn’t help but smile at the joy they’d brought to Faye.
"Ok", Tina said. "Where do we start?"
Chapter 24.
Where do we start? Although surprised at the question, Faye was not without an answer. She took a moment to recover from her gratitude before beginning. "I think that first Richard and I should catch you up to speed on our progress. I also have some papers drawn up, authorizing you both on a special bank account. They are at my lawyer’s office right now. We could meet there. Tomorrow, if you like. Or if you’d like to have your own lawyer look at them first, I can arrange for a courier."
Bette and Tina looked at each other as their head began to swim with the rapidity of Faye’s words. They’d known of their decision to help all day, but were only now beginning to grasp the scope of what they’d agreed to.
"Faye, I’m sorry", Bette interrupted. "What bank account?"
"It’s nothing to be alarmed at, Bette. I’ve simply set aside a trust of sorts. It should be enough to cover any of the costs related to finding Cora. Travel. Incidentals."
"Incidentals?", Tina asked.
Faye looked to Richard for help with the explanation. "Incidentals", he repeated. "Sometimes we have to pay someone off to forget they saw us. Sometimes we have to pay for information. Some people find that having a couple hundred dollars in their hand makes it easier to talk."
Bette and Tina nodded as they began to wonder if they may be getting in over their heads. "Faye. I know this is a fine time to ask, but what exactly will we be doing? Tina and I."
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Another great chapter, great to see that B&T are helping, definitely would make them Bond girls. Please Post again soon.
This chapter had excellent dialogue especially the banter between Bette and Tina. Your NC-17s are smokin’. In fact, all your writing is totally enjoyable and this plot line is intriguing.
Another
amazing
chapter
Redhorse
(You
said
twenty
comments,
not
twenty
“commenters”)
:-)
NC-17
please.
well looks like Spumoni has covered most of da 20 comments lol. I’ll leave one more for further encouragement. Great Story, loved da Bond girls reference;)lol PPS
Okay, since I’m so busy, this should count for 2. I love the fact that after what Faye did to Bette and Tina they are still a forgiven couple. Lets find Cora before Faye is no longer with us, and get rid of Richard the easy way murder the sicko. thanks
ok comment from Md, are we close enough to 20 yet?
Shouldn’t Max be around to help with the computer searches? Just kidding. I’m sure the Bond girls can manage on their own. Now did someone say something about an NC-17?
You are so mean leavin off right there. The next chapter better be an NC-17. I think you got your 20 comments. Hope you enjoyed the game! PPS!!
Great chapter, only bette could get away with the pussy galore comment. Let’s get these two home so they can take care of the situation bette has gotten them into. PPS
Hi, I’m a silent reader but I had to go out of the shades to suport the team in order to help the cause to obtain an NC-17 for next chapter. So please!!!! Don’t let us down! We want a NC FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!
“Entertain second thoughts” indeed. What have they gotten themselves into??
“Entertain second thoughts” indeed. What have they gotten themselves into??
Pull-over and practice “safe sex” LMAO!
Sorry, I finally caught up so I read the last two chapters together. This chapter had it all, well maybe not all, but the sex was close by. It had intrique, humor and suspense. It also brought some tears to my eyes. I sense some thawing between Bette and Richard. I hope that they can find Cora before Faye moves on from this world.
You are not playing nice, red… first being called a comment slacker, then left hanging with that Ursula Andress image, and finally teased with Bette’s wandering fingers. I’m loving the Cora storyline and am anxious to see much you’ll throw at the girls before she’s found. Very nice chapter, NC-17 or not!
Good chapter. Yeah everyone like James Bond’s movies but they only like to watch James Bond’s girls thats all lol!
The Bond Girls Line so loved that. Bette pull the car over right NOW!!!!! Thanks PPVS
ok you defiantly have 20 comments, I will so look forward to the next chapter. pps
In the immortal words of Bette Porter: “Oh Shasta!!” Look what I’ve gone and gotten myself into. Spumoni, you are a cheater!! ;-) You’re right. Technically I said 20 comments, not commenters. I also ‘technically’ never said chapter 25 would be NC-17 if ya’ll hit the mark. I just implied I would do another NC-17 at some point. Any lawyers out there with some advice??? Have I entered into a binding contract? Oh man. OK. Let me think of a scene. Car or home? Hmm…Tigers lost, by the way. Shasta again!! -red.
I could almost swear one of your readers is a fan of 4chan.org. lol I vote for them pulling over, having a quickie, then getting home and taking their time. ;)
I hope B&T don’t entertain too many second thoughts. Someone needs to find that girl, and it really mustn’t be the black hats. So then, red, is Bette gonna pull the car over, or is she going to make a few (oh, let’s say… *no less than 17*) traffic violations in getting them home? ;) Do post soon, red. Good luck to your Tigers & thanks for the post.
sure i’ll comment for a NC-17.another great chapter btw
LOVED this line, had me laughing out loud! “He noticed the women comparing the colors of their faux lipstick tubes and not-so-discretely trading with school girl enthusiasm.” Do i sense an NC-17 coming up?
Yay. You can totally get me to comment for an NC-17 chapter. Not that I don’t regularly comment..so I think this post should count at least three times. Think about it. PPS.