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PREVIOUSLY
As she heard the question she was hoping Tina wouldn’t ask, Alice began choking on her coffee. Tina got up out of her chair and moved around to gently pat Alice on the back
“You ok?”
“Yeah just went down the wrong hole” Alice answered as she regained her breath
It was then that Tina noticed the cream coloured card on the table in front of Alice,
“This the invitation to your mystery wedding?” Tina asked as she picked it up
“Yeah… no… Tina wait…” Alice stumbled trying to grab the card back, but by this point it was too late
“Oh my God…”
CHAPTER 7
“Oh my God…” Tina breathed out, feeling her legs go weak she fell back down into her chair “What… what is this Alice?”
“Tina I…” Alice began but was interrupted by Shane
“What’s wrong Tina? You’re looking a little pale there”
“Shane” Alice warned
“What? I’m just saying she seems to be more affected by this than she should be.”
“It’s just a bit of a shock… how long has this been going? Why didn’t anyone tell me?” Tina questioned
“Well firstly we only recently found out ourselves, and secondly…” Alice began but was again cut off by Shane
“And secondly what Bette does now and who she chooses to spend her time with has got absolutely nothing to do with you, you don’t have a hold over her anymore Tina, you made sure of that yourself.”
“What’s your problem Shane? Am I not allowed to be a little surprised by the news? It’s Bette and Helena for God’s sake, the last I heard they hated each other”
“Yeah well obviously things have changed, and I for one am abso-fucking-lutely ecstatic for them. And as for my problem Tina…”
“Ok, ok why don’t we all just take a few chill pills here hey?” Alice interjected trying to diffuse the building argument
Tina and Shane glared at each other, anger rising for both parties
“I’m gonna go, it’s getting late” Tina said as she got up to leave
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aweeee…i’m almost tempted to feel sympathy for tina–NOT!!! really liked the conversation between alice and tina…it felt real. okay, so what’s the next move for tina, you’re not gonna have her appear in the UK are you…well if you do, please allow b&h to treat her much better than she treated b…anyway, i can’t wait for your next post….ciao!
As always an excellent job. It’s about time Tina take a look at herself. Damage was done on both sides in their relationship. You can only kick a person for so long before they have had enough, and in this case Bette had. So all in all who did Tina really punish other than herself and their child. Revenge may feel good in the beginning, but in the end it will just eat you up. Please post soon!
Ah there you are! finally! :D And whaddya mean you weren’t happy with this? I think you did a brilliant job with this! you handled Tina and her reaction really well, Darkie. I’m glad you had Alice and Tina talk about it, and kiss n make up too **nodding** Now that THAT’s sorted, may we see our girls now, please? :) so do post soon, babe, and I’ll do the same ;)
WOW!!! I love your story, and Bette and Helena together are so fucking hot [goes to take cold shower] thanks for this awesome story, and PPS:D
Tina got what she asked for, sometime you wait to long to decides that you aRE THE WRONG ONE, AND YOU HAVE WRONGED THE ONE YOU LOVE THE MOST. She made her bed and Bette is in someone elses bed. thanks
Tina got what she asked for, sometime you wait to long to decides that you aRE THE WRONG ONE, AND YOU HAVE WRONGED THE ONE YOU LOVE THE MOST. She made her bed and Bette is in someone elses bed. thanks
Well ‘ello there stranger!! Thank you so much for the update. Just between you and I, what is T gonna do? Come on, I won’t tell. Ok…ok, I’ll wait until your next post in what??? 2 days? Awww….*rubbin’ my hands together* Cool, I can’t wait!!! hehehe…Seriously, PPS
wow ur back! coolness! excellent update!
She did it, she did it… happy dance… And I’m with Master V, why don’t you like it ?? It’s got everything I hoped for and more… I know how you feel about Tina, believe me ! Those passages with her in are hard to write for me too, but, girl, you’re doing great. Can’t wait to read what’ll happen next. No pressure, but PPP – aka please post pronto ;-)
Yay for Alice! That was a great update to a fab story.
awesome chapter. I love it. Hmm me write a belena fic. I’ll have to think about that. PPS ;)
Oh no look who’s back. mmmm wait is this really you? I know I didn’t havemuch sleep last night so I must be dreaming right? Nope I’m not and sooo happy to see you back in BeLenaland. You weren’t hapy with this chapter you said? mmm makes me wonder why cuz it was just great dear. I could so see Alice and Tina in fornt of me and the convo was so real. You really did a good job but please promise me you are not gonna let the witch of WeHo go to the UK ok? Keep her in the states and far away from us Europeans right? Thanks a lot for posting babe so tag I guess I’m it now lol.
Brilliant! Seriously great update. I’m with Shane though. I wouldn’t have been able to just bite my tongue if Tina started acting that way after all she did to Bette. It’s like she seriously didn’t realize what she did to Bette.
Wow that was so good and love it. Now let see what the hell Tina gonna do. OK please post soon, thanks!
I really love this story. It seems that it’s on hiatus, but I would love for you to start it up again. PLEEEEEASE