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Get The Girl—Chapter 4: Bowling and Serious Talk
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“No I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have lashed out at you”
I shake my head “No I deserved that kick in the ass”
We both giggled lightening the mood a little
“What do you think happened to Bette Tina?…If she is opening up to you then you think you could find out?”
She sighs “Well” she starts starts to fidget “I don’t know but I want to find out…I think whatever it was had been so traumatizing to her because of her reluctance to talk about it”
I nod my head at that and suddenly I felt like the biggest jerk in the world “Yeah I get that. It’s just I have my own shit to deal with now I don’t know if I can help you with Bette..There is so much I’m angry at her for and yet I shouldn’t be but I can’t help it”
“Hey..I get that ok…Let’s not worry about that right now..Let’s figure out how to get you out of this mess and at the same time I will help Bette”
I smile “You like her don’t you?”
“What?..Well yeah..She’s sweet and fun to be around”
“No I mean you really like her?”
She immediately shakes her head “What?…Oh no!” She laughs out loud and suddenly I’m embarrassed “I don’t like her like that..I..uh…I actually uhhh..like someone else” she says rather shyly not making eye contact with me as she looks down..Now I’m curious
“Oh really..Who?” I ask nudging her knee with my hand
She looks back at me shakes her head “I can’t say right now..But I will tell you when I am able to” she says smiling with a blush appearing on her cheeks
I raise my eyebrow at her wondering who the hell this person is she likes and why it’s so secretive but I’m going to respect her wishes. Although she does look cute when she blushes like that..Whoever it is that she likes is very lucky
“Ok. I respect that” I say and smile at her giving her a nod “Well I better go….I have a date with Holly” I groan and roll my eyes
Tina doesn’t look too happy but after what I told her I didn’t expect her to be
“I hate this Alyssa..It’s not right. We are going to get you out of this somehow”
I nod and we both stand up. I pull her into a hug. I can’t keep from hugging her for some reason.
“Thanks Tina for coming and for listening and please remember this stays between you and me”
I feel her nod against my shoulder as we pull apart
“I promise” she says and I believe her
“Ok then I will see you at school Monday” I tell her as she nods and I watch her wave and walk away. Somehow I feel a little better about things now that I have Tina in my corner but I know this is not going to be an easy fight to win by any means
tbc
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I am enjoying this story…. but oh what a mess. No one has a straight forward relationship with anyone else. Everyone has someone they like but isn’t available. I am sorry that Bette is still having pain from her injuries. I do hope that some of that will heal as time goes on. I understand her fear that her scars might be repugnant to others, but her fear is not keeping her safe or comforted. This is something Bette is going to have to work through or she needs to get some counseling on. Everyone has body issues and some are worse than others. But when someone cares for you or falls in love with you, they accept you for who you are: flaws and all. Bette has a beautiful personality and a lovely charm and a scarred body. She is going to be a very lonely person if she allows her past and these scars to keep her from her from the future possibilities of her life…..
As to Alyssa? A senior in high school forced by her parents to date another girl to assist the merger of two businesses? That’s the sort of thing that royal families did in the middle ages. Arrange marriages and relationships between families to enhance the bank account. Oh well…. got to see where this goes.
Keep it going…. thank you for the chapter.
A truly good story!
This is a mess like Martha already pointed out.
I love what Bette does for Tina despite her own feelings for Tina. And Tina is so in denial about her feelings towards Bette, unfortunately also because she now only has one wish and that is Alyssa, her first crush. But she’s a sweetheart to point out to Alyssa that there’s a reason Bette shuts herself off from everyone. If anyone brings Bette and Alyssa together as friends, it’s Tina.
I feel so bad for Alyssa that she is forced to be with someone because of a corporate business, the merging between her fathers and Holly’s companies. That must be really terrible.
And poor Bette, so insecure because of the severe burns she has suffered and so much pain, even though her nerves may start working again, the scars on her body and mind will never go away. Perhaps with therapy, the trauma of what happened to her will become more bearable, but it will never go away completely.
I’m very curious how this will all go.
Boy, such a tough plot to resolve with Bette’s scars needing time to heal, yet her emotions/hormones being so active when she’s near Tina.
U’ve really taken on a literary challenge. But keep goin’ as we come along with ya!!
Love your story, hope you post soon. I like all the twists and turn… our heart takes us on a ride sometimes with out a clear path and at this age can be extra confusing.
And it has a feel of a mobster world first Bette and her step dad now Alyssa’s dad. Just has that feel but i like. Thank you