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Bette, I need some of that Old Bette to come out, I need
you to want to fight for me. Tina says as she is trying to get Bette to open
up.
But if I fight for you too hard I will loose you. I know that.
That is one of the lessons I have learned. Bette says as she really
believes this in her heart. Bettes
confusion is written all over her face as she looks back to Tina.
Oh Bette no you wont.
Im not going anywhere as long as I see your soul the way you have let
me see it the last few months there is no where else I want to go. You will always have Anna and me, believe me
and fight for us. I want you with me. I want you to come home. I want us to be a family under one roof. Fight for me.
Fight for us.All of us.
Chapter 71 – Moment of Truth
Dana was in the middle of a weird dream. She is trying to put out a fire with this
little watering cup. In her dream she
has to run to the kitchen sink and fill this cup up and then go out to the
fire, dumping her cup. As soon as she
was done she ran back into the kitchen to fill up her cup again and then ran
back to the fire to once again dump the water on the fire. As she was repeatively repeated this process
the fire wasnt so much as going out but turning into a cloud of smoke that was
causing her to cough. As she continued
to cough she soon realized that she was coughing for real. That this was no dream as she wakes up to the
smell of smoke. As this awareness
reaches Danas conscious mind, she immediately jumps out of bed. Looking over to
she is now worried. Oh My God Fire!
Dana shouts as she now is running to the living room. Fire!!! Fire!!
what she is seeing Oh my God
is this all from you?
There sits
in the middle of a haze of smoke. Seeing
that Dana is up she starts talking Hey Dana.I..got..it. IIII
figured itttttt outtttt. Really I
ddiddd. Hee Heee.
says as she is swaying her hands back and forth.
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i´m in the end of the line today..lol..but no problem the last will be the first..lol…ok 2 questions.1- how the hell Bette get R$100 million bucks??? the goodmother fairy Peggy gave to her???? 2- how Alice could make 3 fhrases with 3 words shes the new Yoda??or better Will Hunting???..ok amazing chapter and will make myself calm to the next thanks and have a great weekend you too… hugs ;-)
The race is on! In lane 1, Alice, in lane 2, Bette. Who will reach the finish line that is Tina? Well, let’s hope Dana will be strong and stop Alice from the race. Bette, go and get your woman! Be honest and life will be good again….with regular life dramas. Especially with Alice around…hee.
Anyway of getting you to post what’s next? Not sure if my heart/head can wait till Monday!
Have a great weekend and Thanks again for sharing this story.
I totally love this story and love how Alice figured it out in her drug filled haze. Got to love that! More, woo, even though I already know, heh! Woo, love ya!
good girl Bette your doing the right thing, but be quick……she will be so impressed you gave $100m away :)
I hope she tells her before Alice does.
Hello, Jwet: I’m with all the others before me, Excellent chapter….enjoy this Fabulous weather that we have been having…I’ll check for the next up-date. Enjoy the weekend and be safe.
Well, it seems that with each new installment I need to increase my blood pressure medication! IBA (I Blame Alice)…I was hoping that she was going to passout from smoke inhalation. Maybe she won’t remember anything in the morning…please? It will not be pretty if Alice says something before Bette has a chance to fess up. I would hate for Alice to be the one to jeopardize their tenuous relationship.
When Bette does tell Tina (hint, hint)I can only hope that Tina sees Bette’s “sin of ommission” as the true testatment of love that she intended it to be, it was not spiteful. Please queue the music “No Other Love”…
Maybe Dana could accidently shred Alices research?
OK, I need to go and make sure that I have enough meds for the next chapter! Thank you for being so prolific with your postings, always a treat to read.
I’m loving this!!
Just got caught up again and all I can say is…OMG, OMFG. I can’t believe the amazing ride you have taken us on. I sure hope Bette is able to fess up to Tina before Alice intervenes. Can’t wait for your next brilliant chapter, which will hopefully be posted soon!!!!!
Hi! Jwet whoa! it’s still wonderful story OMG I’m back and I’m still reading of all the fanfic Story and I just got caught up too WOW it’s still Amazing Story jwet I love it and Thank you keep posted soon.
Finally! Bette’s resolve to come clean is the best but it would be so nice to see Alice learn something so big but potentially disasterous for her friends and she keeps it to herself (or at least tell Bette first — I know Alice is a reporter but I’m sure her friendships are more important, Right?)
Only someone stoned would be able to clear their minds of life’s daily interruptions to solve such a random anagram without any clues. That damn weed, maybe I should have used it before I took the SAT’s :)
OMG the drama..plz continue asap!
Just caught up after a week camping. Love the plot twists. And the anagram! Nicely done.
my return was at least f.u.n.n.y. thanks to you. After almost 8 hours on the road i’m back and tired but i couldn’t control myself!!! so… i read the chapter before and posted too. ok now i really need a bed. bye. and as always a pleasure to read it.
Do it quick, Bette, or Alice will (after she eats all the cheetoes and takes a nap and stuff).
I knew it was an anagram….not that I fully figured it out…but I was very, very close.
Honesty is the best policy. Relationships are built on trust and if Bette wants this relationship with Tina to work she has to tell her everything, no secrets, just her love laid bare and if Tina really loves her then they will be okay. Great chapter Jwet.
I just wanna say … ” HURRYYYYYYYYY Bette !!!!!!!Go Find Tina Before Alice gets a hold off her !!!! ” I am so worried right now . Has Alice passed out yet ??? I don’t want Alice telling Tina about the MYV Foundation at any cost !! It has to be Bette who Tells Tee about it . Alice plsssss for God’s Sake stop mingling in other peoples’ lives !!!! This is not just a game of who gets to figure things out first and who wins . There is no prize involved alice !! This is B&Tee LIFE we r talking about . So plssss for THe sake of ur friendships , stop interfering !!! Act mature and rational for once , Alice !! Think for once that Ur Actions DO HAVE CONSEQUENCES & in this case could affect TiBette ‘s life for ever
I would be totally pissed at Alice if she says anything to Tina before Bette has a chance to explain !!!!!!
Oh God jwet plsssssss post soooooooon !!!
I am sitting at the edge of my seat holding my breath !!!!
I love ur story . Keep up the good work :D .
Gazillion x 100 stars to u all the wayyyyy !!!!
Thanx :D
Oh please be quick, this story always has me hanging on the edge of my seat. As much as i want to see them live happy ever after you cant help but love the drama. Hurry hurry xx
I agree with the others, spill the beans. You do weave a good tale. Looking forward to the next post.
Like Bette, I’m a little confused. I think she did see some hint of attraction for Helena come from Tina. Seems I read that. Did I imagine it? Is Tina deluding herself, not being totally honest?
I think they both need to come clean before they can go forward together. There are worse things than wanting the best for your wife and orchestrating events in order for her to succeed. Tina needs to forgive unconditionally. And Bette needs to regain her self confidence.
Thanks for continuing this ride we are on. I think Alice may bring it to a screeching halt though!
Please let Bette get to and tell Tina before Alice does. Alice means well, but to often she is a pain in the BUT. I still can not figure the name of the foundation. Please spell it out for me, I just ot off from work and my degree did not come from Yale. Please post again soon, I love this story.
Please leave Bette get to Tina before Alice!Or as everyone is expecting Tina to be mad at Bette would it be too unrealistic to have Tina be ok with it all…lol ok im goona have to trust you on that one! and i do!..lol love it!
Yes Jwet insert me…right by her left ear (I think that side is slightly closer to the heart). I’ll tell her that love is a risk. And like all risks, if it works out favourably the rewards are immense if not, you could be worse off than when you began. But just living life on the fence is really no existence at all. She has to take a chance on love, take a chance on life and most of all take a chance on Tina. Sure Tina may get upset but that’s no reason to give up. As she herself realised, trying to build a ‘forever after’ on secrets and lies will never happen.
Very funny! I loved that Alice found out in a stoned daze… Dana putting out the fire was really funny! I see how you now turned the race from tina to bette and alice… lol, I cant wait til tomorrow!
So you are going to leave us hanging again..Please don’t let Alice get to Tina first Bette has worked to hard to change to let A STONED Alice blow without thinking first..Please let Tina hear it from Bette..Post soon..
Go to her and confess Bette. I mean Alice telling Tina would be bad. That could only be topped by Helena finding out some way and telling Tina. haha I’m sure Helena could find practically anything out if she wanted to…’I’d like to triple the foundation’s funds on the condition that I know who the founder is’…good thing Bette is on her way to coming clean…before the mess gets any bigger!
I just hope that Tina sees the big picture and gets over any anger/hurt that she may initially feel
Great update…can’t wait for more!
Wow! Please post soon! This story is so good….I can’t wait to see Bette come clean with Tina. Good luck Bette! I hope Tina will understand…………Great job!
Jwet,
Yippee!! Got the anagram part right at least.
I am glad that things are coming to a head now even if some illegal substance are required.
Amazing the powers of a bit of wacky backy. Alice is brilliant realised in this story. You have nailed her quirky and funky nature. And Dana’s naivety and frustration are spot on too.
I do feel that Bette thinks she is being fed to the lions right now. As they say “Feel the Fear and Do It Anyway!â€
Yes, Tina may go ballistic at first but her generosity of spirit will see these actions as they were meant; Out of love and affection. At least Bette has recognised that honesty is the best policy to lay new foundations for her new and improved partnership with Tina. Tina will see the big picture and comprehend that she has made her own way through the path that Bette had created. Tina’s choices, determination and hard graft have gotten her there.
Questions for the weekend.
Do Alice’s windows open or will the air con need turning up? Does LA have any hot female fire fighter? Will all Alice’s neighbor have a mellow and chilled out night?
Will the President go to Decon 4 before Tina goes thermal nuclear? What radius will be affected by this meltdown? Does Bette have any lead lined panties? Where did Bette get the $100 million? Is she an internet raider at weekends? Did she find the pot of gold at the end of a rainbow? Where Leprechauns involved or did the fairies give the location away?
Please put me out of my misery soon.
Have a fabulous weekend. Full of sailing and relaxing.
Your Loyal Fan.
Awesome as usual. Thank goodness they talked. I could just see Tina or Bette getting mad and shutting down. I cannot wait for more. There is simply going to be an explosion of joy I hope in the end.
Great story. I cant wait for Bette to confess to Tina that she set up the foundation. I hope Tina is understanding ans sees the love Bette has for her.
jwet. naw girl. i was not wishing betty on you. i loves ya to much. it just seemed funny to me, in my head at the time. really loved this chapt. oh, to get there on time. hopefully, al will have a brain this time and go to bette before she does anything stupid. please post soon.
Jwet, you’re killing me with the suspense! Please post soon!!
K
Great chapter. Love the drama but I can’t wait for some peace lol. Can’t wait for the next one.
I have my fingers crossed for Bette. Alice can’t be the first. I hope Dana will stop her somehow. I almost wish it wasn’t Friday today b/c it probably means we have to wait till Monday for your post. Anyway, have a great weekend.
Hey Jwet, what a cliffie you have left us with…Grrrr…Alice, Alice what can i say about you except, LMAO…give your lungs a rest for awhile…Bette i hope her car has a turbo boost button because i have a feeling that Alice is going to pop up…mmmm…that was an explosive chapter J.
Enjoy your weekend.
PLEASE LET BETTE DO IT FIRST…GREAT CHAPTER WAITING PATIENTLY FOR YOUR RETURN..THANKS POST SOOOOON
OMG!! Loved the last 3 chapters JWET!! Woo…what a story…outstanding…still hanging off of the edge of my seat…damn, Alice is good…lol…go to her Bette!! Come clean…it’ll do your brain and your sould good!
OK why is everyone hating Alice, mad props for her finding out, shit that must of taking hella time. And you know Dana is smarter then to let her high ass girlfriend go out anywhere, and I think she would go to bette before she went to Tina. J if you have any question hit me up. and I hope I don’t have to wait the weekend for a update!
Jwet, thanks for this amazing chapter! I have a strong feeling that Alice might actually end up being the savior in this story. Imagine Tina’s reaction to Alice’s discovery (I’m talking about the anagram) if indeed she gets upset after hearing Bette’s confession.
Go, Bette, Go! I really hope she catches up to Tina before Alice gets a hold of her. Hopefully Alice will at least give Tina some insight to what the anagram stands for, as I can’t see Bette confessing what it means (while Bette can ACT all mushy, I just can’t see her taking credit for it…all that Alpha pride and all)
Hopefully Tina won’t be too upset. But Tina + confusion + shock + pregnancy hormones = A BIG BANG! Hope Bette is ready for anything Tina throws at her. Hopefully she’ll listen to Tina’s plea and fight for her!
BTW- where did she get all that money in the first place? She wasn’t planning on opening her own gallery again, was she? Not that I could blame her with Helena around…Gee I wish I had 100M at my disposal.
Great update…can’t wait to see what happens!!!
This a great story post soon I can’t wait to see what is next please don’t let the secret come out and destroy what the both have worked so hard to rebulid.
Right, this breathing malarky has definately taken on a life of its own. I’ve taken the steps to install an oxygen tank next to the computer, just in case!! Its working so far – a weekend away and came back to 2 great chapters – maybe I should just have a stash of Alice’s remedy instead!! Ok, I was fooled into thinking that the original eplanation for the MYV name was right – I thought about other meanings but you got me on the anagram!! I don’t believe Bette will tell her about that – I think she’d be a little embarrassed – I think the name/anagam will be an Alice moment, although the whole reasoning explanation will be Bette’s doing. BTW, do we get to hear Bette, within all her confessions, tell Tina she was at Anna’s birth too, coz thats where it all started after all. See, told you I’d followed from the beginning!! Great to have Down Low back with us, I missed her loads! So looking forward to the next instalments mate xx
Funny, warm and hopeful. Jwet you’ve done it again.
what a story teller you are ive become transfixed for the past few days, as ive just found your stories, no wonder you win all the awards, im completly addicted that ive taken the day off from work just to catch up, but boy was it worth it, thankyou very much xxx
I just got back after being gone on vacation for 2 1/2 weeks and set about catching up on this story…Whew! I’m blown away!!! This story is so incredibly awesome! I’ve thoroughly enjoyed everything you’ve written so far and am completely hooked…bring on the next chapter! Thanks
Damn this is gonna be so good!